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posted by Office_001
A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his favorito! cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today. He was too short to reach the cabinet so he pulled a chair across the vinyl floor up to the sleek wooden cabinet, pulled out the Coco Puffs, and sauntered over to the table. Grabbing the blue bowl and matching spoon he poured his cereal so pleased at himself that he didn’t spill it all over the place. Now the hard part, the milk, he walked towards the refrigerator opened the stainless steel door grabbed the leche and walked slowly back to the table. It was very full so when Jake barley poured it, it spilled everywhere also spilling the Coco Puffs along with the bowl and spoon.
“Oh man mom is going to be angry when she gets up” Jake said
Just then the nine año old heard footsteps coming towards him, it was his mom and when he looked at her she just smiled.
After the two cleaned up the mess they started on preparing sandwiches for their picnic. Jake loved ham, cheese, and pickles on his emparedado, sándwich de and only that he was very picky. His mom didn’t care really but Jake made hers so she had the same.
“Is it time to go yet’ Jake asked being as patient as he could
“Almost we just need the basket” Terri replied smiling at her son’s urgency to get going, Jake loved going places with his mom, but the Saturday picnics where his favorite
Little Jake went into the closet in buscar of the brown woven basket that they have been using for about four years which is when they first started this little outing.
Holding the basket Jake ran back to the cocina
“Look mama I found it” Jake dicho in his southern accent that was just so cute whenever tu heard it, tu couldn’t help but smile at the little blonde boy.
“Okay now tu go get your chaqueta and we will go” his mom replied
Jake ran into his bedroom then into his closet throwing toys and clothing everywhere looking for his favorito! dark blue denim jacket.
“Are we walking o driving today mama” Jake asked
“Why don’t tu decide” she replied back again smiling
“I think we should walk it’s a nice día out” he dicho
The mother and son walked out the door hand in hand with Jake holding the basket, today was going to be a good day.
They got to the park sat down at their usual spot beneath the big oak tree. Jake got out the ham sandwiches while his mom set out the Sprites. They ate and laughed together, after that Jake went to play in the sand pit, it was his favorito! place to be at the park, he loved making things with his hands.
Jake started building today is was going to create a whole town; he started collecting sand to make into a building when he heard a scream.
“Stop that please, you’re ruining it” a little girl screamed
“What are tu going to do, you’re too small” the boy teasing the girl said.
Jake didn’t like this guy, why would any boy tease a girl, girls are boring, but the girl kept crying and asking the boy who was teasing her to stop, the teasing boy never gave up he would just laugh harder as she cried louder. Jake couldn’t take it anymore he stood up furiously walked towards the boy.
He realized when he got there that the boy was much taller than him, but Jake didn’t care
“Hey kid sop picking on her” Jake yelled standing on his tippy toes to make it so he could yell at the other boy’s face.
“What are tu going to do about it, you’re too small to stop me” the boy yelled back
Jake didn’t like it when people called him small so he did the first that came to mind, he pushed him down and kicked dirt in his face. The boy yelled something and than ran away crying. Jake sat por the girl and helped her rebuild whatever she was making
“If he ever bothers tu again just tell me” Jake dicho proudly
“Thank you, he always teases me though” the girl dicho back
“Well I promise he won’t anymore” Jake smiled at the little girl
She blushed a little and said, “what’s your name”
“Jake Scott, what’s yours” he asked back
“Annie Sawyer”
Jake was still in that phase where he thought girls had cooties, but he liked this girl. He learned she was seven and he also kept noticing her beautiful blonde curly hair and her very blue eyes. She was also here with her mom. They talked and played for an hora until she had to go home, he didn’t want her to leave and she didn’t want to go, but they promised to meet back here siguiente Saturday.     
Jake went inicial with a smile on his face más excited about siguiente Saturday than he was about this one.
“So I saw tu talking with little Annie Sawyer at the park” Jake’s mom smiled at him
“How did tu know her name” he asked amazed that his mom knew this girl
“She lives down the street” she answered
“Let’s go see her”
Terri just smiled her son had his first crush.
“We can’t right now sweetie” she replied in a sweet and sensitive way “but I promise tu will see her again”
posted by ZekiYuro
My Name's Jon,And This Happened To Me When I Was On Holiday In Seville,In The South of Spain.


I was having a coffee in a bar when a man came up to me.He was quite smartly dressed,and he looked very respectable.'Do tu speak English?'he asked.He definitely wasn't Spanish,but I'm not sure where he was from.'I'm very sorry to bother you,but I have a serious problem,'he continued.'I'm here on a business trip,and I've lost my briefcase-it had my passport,my wallet,my money,my credit cards,my mobile,my address book,everthing.Could tu help me?I need to borrow 60 euros to get the train to Madrid-my...
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posted by ZekiYuro
OK,now the painting we are looking at now is por the French painter Toulouse-Lautrec.
The painting is called At The Moulin Rouge.As tu probably know The Moulin Rouge is a nightclub in Paris.Maybe some of tu remember the film Moulin Rouge?In the 19th century,the nightclub was very famous for its beautiful dancers and singers.
Toulouse-Lautrec did a lot of paintings and posters of the Moulin Rouge.He especially loved painting the dancers.And in these paintings he sometimes included his friends too.
In the middle of the picture there are 5 people who are sitting at a mesa, tabla having a drink.The woman...
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Why Script Testing Is Essential For Screenwriters por Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by GreenLight24
 I'd wear that...
I'd wear that...
Author's Note: hola everyone. I'm fascinated with villain psychology and bad guys in general...they always seem to be más interesting and have better back-stories than the good guys...anyways, this is my first attempt at escritura a villain I created from scratch, so I'd appreciate any feedback, positive o negative. IF U READ THE ORIGINAL BLACKTIE, THIS IS NOT IT. This is a very very very similar version. The only difference is that I've edited the beginning to make the character más relatable...But fear not!, the awesomeness is unaffected por this endeavor! Now, where was I? Oh yes, the story....
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
One last dip, I thought. One last dip before we go.

My kids were packing up the stuff on the beach, and my husband smiled at me. God blessed me with a great family.

"I'm going to do one last swim before we go," I said.

"Denise, it better be quick," murmured my husband.

"It will," I replied.

My toes dug into the sand, before going into the salty water. I felt the numbing cold in my body as I jumped in. It felt refreshing and comforting.

But, then something was wrong.

I felt this throbbing headache after not even a couple of minutes. I held onto my head, pressuring it, but it felt even worse.

"Denise?!"...
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posted by PrinceLover1999
Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...
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posted by Fangirl99
a song i wrote.



no,no,not this time. oh!


*instruments*


i aint gonna let it
happen again.No aint
gonna lets it happen!
not this time.

you.Cant tear me down.
i forgot about the tears
your not one of my biggest fears.
no,not anymore


hey,what happened,girl?
we used to be good friends.
oh,well.Guess all friendships
have to e-e-e-end.WOH!

you aint get put me down
no not this time.
you anti gonna push me
to the ground.
no,not this time.

hey,b!tch,take a look in the mirror
i see your lips moivng but all i hear
is blah,blah,blah!calling me names while
im signing la,la,la!when tu give it up.
when tu gonna learn that i dont...
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posted by delta117
the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like perros and gatos demons and ángeles evn half ángeles will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my capa i felt the hilt of my cruzar, cruz daggers not lectura to defend my name but...
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posted by RobPattzLover7
It was no place, it was like a palace. "This room is
covered with crystals," noticed James."I know, wait,
get that map out, see those symbols their on the floor
over there," explained Justin. "Those symbols are translated
in English on the map here," remembered James. "Ok, it says
weather your at 2 destinations at once the centre will always
bring tu hope and justice," recited Justin.

The segundo Justin dicho 'Hope and Justice' the bracelet
that William have him shone from the reflection, of the
crystals that glittered and flared, he then noticed the
crystal ball was in a box that had fingerprints...
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How To Know Whether tu Are An Intuitive Writer o A Conceptual Writer - Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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Becoming An Adult: How To See The World Differently - John Bucher via FilmCourage.com.
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Why 99% Of Stories Are Meaningless - Alan Watt [Founder of L.A. Writers' Lab] via FilmCourage.com.
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Kate: Unique, Gorgeous
Katy: Amazing, Great
Ivana: Beautiful, Nice
Sasha: Cool, Adorable
Amy: Sweet, Kind
Karis: Friendly, Lovely
Kayley: Smart, Charming
Kim: Determined, Fun
Chloe: Talented, Extraordinary
Kourtney: Dedicated, Loyal
Jess: Generous, Hilarious
Louis:Funny, Childish
Liam: Nice, Kind
Harry: H-O-T
Aarron: Funny, Cool
Joe: Loyal, unique
Shelby: Strongly Determined, Pretty

I KNOW THERE ISN'T A LOT OF NAMES, BUT THE WHOLE POINT OF THIS IS FOR tu GUYSS TO GIVE ME YOUR NAMES AND I ADD THEM TO THIS articulo AND THE lista WILL GET BIGGER AND BIGGER...X
 What Kat, A.K.A. Kuro Neko, looks like in her human form.
What Kat, A.K.A. Kuro Neko, looks like in her human form.
Wow, I haven't been on here for a longgg while. Well, anyways, during that long time I was gone, I managed to write another story, this time it's influenced por my weeaboo-ness!

Anyways, this story is about a shinigami (grim reaper) that, for her final reaper test, is to spy on a boy for a año to decide whether o not he is to die.

ANYWAYYYYS

Now, to introduce the main main main characters, which is only 2 people!

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Name- Human name: Kat Chi ("chi" means blood in Jap.)
Shinigami name: Kuro Neko (black cat)

Age- Human years: 16
Shinigami years: 123

Death Sickle: A spear

Personality:...
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posted by para-scence
One day, I was watching the news. The stories presented on there were terrible. Death, crime, death, tragedy, death, hardship, death... It almost literally broke my heart.

"Oh, that's terrible," Mrs. Stueck sighed. I bit my lip. One pregunta was still boiling in my mind. I took a deep breath.

"What happened," I squeaked. She stopped and looked at me.

"Excuse me?" she asked, confused. I took a deep breath.

"Averil," I said. She paused for a moment, and sighed sadly.

"She had a brain tumor. She died two years ago."

"Oh," I said. "S-s-sorry," I dicho awkwardly. I didn't know what else to say.

"That's...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
I.    Book Title.
A.    Alice unknown
II.    Do tu plan on escritura más books?
A.    Yes. I would like to write a sequel to Alice Unknown.
B.    I wanted Alice Unknown to be longer too.
C.    Also I would like my siguiente to be más dramatic.
D.    I have a 35 chapter book online too.
E.    And some anime.
III.    Any consejos to anyone who wants to do something like this?
A.    Follow your dreams.
B.    Don’t...
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posted by twilight_23
This is a pesonal narrative I had to write for my English class. I amor feedback, anything tu have to say is appreciated. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation), please tell me so I can fix them, thanks:D


As I was thinking of experienes that changed my life, my mind automatically went back to my time at St. Anthony. I skimmed throught the years starting with eigth grade, thinking that was where I would find a significant event since it was where I have my most reciente memories. To my surprise, I found nothing. I moved on to younger grade levels, still finding little....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
 i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
hola guys!
first of all i wanted to thank tu all for the support over the 21 chaps.
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second of all some of tu asked me if edward and bella got back together? thats a yes too.
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and i wanted to tell tu that im gonna start a new story!(yay im so happy! im really getting addicted to fanpop)
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so im gonna give tu some names tu should pick one!(each name has a different story there not the same)
and im going to write my new story (the name most of u picked)
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so dont forget to tell me this really is important to me
so here are the names:

1.broken heart...
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