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posted by OneFoggyNight
(note: yes, i know, this articulo is probably not paragraphed correctly... its not even paragraphed at all. Its a paper i wrote for english, and i thought id share it with tu guys. Also, some names have been changed to protect identities)


When I signed up for drama club last year, I was dado a small part as a townsperson in one play, and the chirstmas wizard in the other. For the wizard, I wanted to do the voice of an old man, so I asked if I could and practiced it. Since I was told I could do an old man voice, I went in the siguiente meeting and showed everybody my voice during our practice. por the sounds of it, I thought that they were all pleased, Mrs. Smith, the drama coach, and the rest of the drama members, but when we were finished, Mrs. Smith dicho my old man voice was "sinister" and needed worked on, so I went inicial and tried to make the old man voice less sinister and sweeter, and went in to the siguiente meeting expecting higher praise. Instead, Mrs. Smith yelled at mefor using the same voice, which she never told me that I couldn't use, just change. I stood against her, and the rest of the drama club who agreed with her due to the fact that they were too persuaded por the fact that she was a teacher,i presume, to even think twice about me. It was decided that auditions would be held for the part (I almost walked out of the drama club, leaving my part with it) and I made the choice to compromise, change the voice, audition, and keep my part. The majority decided that the part was to be mine, and I also somehow managed to snag a larger part in the other play we were doing. The night that the parents and grandparents and everyone who wanted to came to see the play, it was a complete riot. In the first play, where i had been bumped up to salesman instead of a towns person, Bobby Joe fell on stage on purpose, but I didnt know that at the time and started laughing. Good thing I wasnt a big part of the scene! But in our segundo play, the one where I had kept my part as wizard, I had to feed my co-star his lines. tu could hear it through the microphones, and i knew it, so I laughed in the middle of the stage uncontrollably, and when I was done, I apologized to the audiance, not really embarrased por the scene, but a little metally upset nonetheless. after both the plays where done, my co-star pologized for ruining my "shot", but I laighed and told him that he hadn't hurt a thing, but had only made the night that much más fun. The día after, when we did the play for our school, it all ran a little bit smoother (Except Bobby Joe "fell" again, and I giggled a bit) and I got tons of complements from misceláneo people I didnt even know for weeks after. That just goes to mostrar that tu may not always be able to get what tu want, but tu can come pretty close.
posted by CheeryDavis
Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the heno, hay i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as tu pull me up and hold me close
i know that tu will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is...
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posted by iluvtheshow
I remember the día I fell in love.
Not just simple love.
No, this was head over heels, I'd die for tu love.
I remember where I fell in love.
A small middle school in a small town.
A place tu could easily miss.
I remember the my matchmaker.
A short women, but with más fuego then tu could ever imagine.
más passion for what she does then I had ever seen.
I remember my girlfriends who were with me.
My athletic, sassy, fun-loving chicks.
My flirting consultants.
I remember him.
Good God, he was beautiful.
Yes, I remember the día I fell in love.
True Love.
Head over heels love.
With..................
Basketball.

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This is dedicated to my first real baloncesto coach. She taught me not just how to play basketball, but how to be part of a team. I have so much respect for her and I know I should thank her everyday for helping me fall in love. For Coach Joy.
posted by CullensFinest13
tu hurt me I hope tu die I cant belive I trusted tu I cant belive I loved tu I cant belive I stayed up and worried that tu wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved tu i trusted tu and cared for you. im tired of tu its time i let tu go but your always there tu wont leave me alone...its time for tu to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let tu back in stay out so i can be happy tu need tu need to die let me live my own life tu shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, tu were...
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posted by vampiress015
I presuming we all joined this spot 'cos we amor to write, right? If so then tu all know what I'm talking about when I say that we all amor our main characters and sometimes want to make them the best people in the world.

B-O-R-I-N-G

Yes, we want to make our main character gets the best out of the story, since it's their story. But if they're the best people in the world it doesn't really make them believable and then the reader just doesn't care about them (which is hard to understand cos we as the writer amor em, but unfortunantley it's true)

So here is my step-by-step guide to make sure that...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
Just a poem. I hope it isn't much of a bother to rate.

I dream of all things

Uncertain of dark deeds and pasts

Within these thoughts as dark as sea

When once those wings of black

Hung over all

Shadowing but of the wretched white

That blinds me of all beauty.

I dream of all things

From happiness to highs

Let down these pills

o I’m gone, retreat inside my mind

Where none but the darkest thoughts

Swallowing twilight

I dream of all things

From the stories told por hidden scars

Unable to mostrar themselves

Under this intense scrutiny

That makes up this world’s attire

To the times that I could be happy

Without a drug to create

The much-needed illusion...


I dream of all things
No matter of their contents
Because, well,
Nightmares are still dreams.
posted by mrs-mindfreak
I decided to do a story where I put my iPod on shuffle and start writing. Lucky for me, all the songs were basically sad o angry music. So this is what I came up with :)

The rain pattered on the windows drowsily, drowning out Alana’s choking sobs. She sat in her favorito! wooden rocker, and buried her face in her hands miserably. Her black hair clung to her sweaty face. Her clammy palms were wet from tears. She never wanted to mover from that spot again. Although she was filled with irrevocable remorse, she felt comfortable there. No one in the house, rain falling softly outside, and just...
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‘You shouldn't have shot the dog.’ That single thought reverberated inside my head, knocking from side to side, smashing at the sides of my skull until I had to put my hands to my temples in a futile attempt to stop the pain. The man sitting siguiente to me took a swig of his whiskey, the glass bottle knocking against his yellowed and rotten teeth. His other hand held onto the steering wheel, maneuvering the car down the winding and deserted stretch of highway. I leaned my head against the cool glass of the passenger side window, willing my head to stop pounding. From the radio, the soft strains...
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 The Writer Behind the Words
The Writer Behind the Words
Luck has little to do with link. A long lasting escritura career doesn’t just happen. A writer can burst onto the scene and quickly disappear. Another can have a series of hits then write a bunch of flops and never be heard from again. The difference between a long lasting career and one that burns out is strategy. Here are seven rules to help tu find the right strategy for tu and get tu started on your journey to long lasting success.

Learn the power of focus. For most of us, we have más than enough to do on a daily basis. And when it comes to any escritura project the lista can grow exponentially-...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 19
I followed the voices and saw aro and caius talking
-hi dear Bella
-hi caius
I dicho shyly
-dear Bella its great to see you!
He shook my hand.thank god he didn’t hug me I’m getting tired of that!
-oh Bella I heard your staying with us.
-for a while
I said
-well tu know we will be happy if stay
-sure sure..
-oh Bella its so nice to see tu upright!
Heidi dicho rushing towards me and …hugged me.
Ohhhh god I hate hugs …..eee but I didn’t want to offend her and hugged her back lightly
Me, jane ,alec and rennata were sitting on a black sofa talking about everything that happened in the 100...
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Parvulo clapped his hands together, the cage closed in on the Karkadann, and then it just vanished, Parvulo then returned to Grito’s shoulder. “You did well; tu lasted the full 10 minutes” dicho Grito. They understood that this was their first case, so really it was a test and they passed. “It is time for us to go” dicho Grito. Parvulo summoned the portal over them all, most likely that Alec was unable to walk properly. This time it was not cold, they saw each other and could talk freely. “How tu doing over there, man?” Marley Asked. Alec gave him the thumbs up (Which still meant...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 16
200 years later
Me and matt traveled the world and had a great time we even met some other covens like the irish coven,the romanian coven and the amazonas, amazon coven we lived with them for 49 years and then took off cause it was getting kind of boring we went to paris and lived there for a cuppel off years then we went to new york,spain,egypt,germany,china,italy we even met the voltury they werent that nice! But kind of kreepy, specialy there hoods!but then we went back to london.
I got off the cama and got dressed matt was sitting on the sofá lectura a news paper and watching t.v
-what are...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter15
Tanya looked at me coldy,full of hate……like she wanted to rip my head off if she could.i couldn’t stand her looks so I just turned around and pulled matts hand to follow me I took off running I heard tanyas voice I think she dicho perra under her breath I heard her saying other stuff but I tuned her out and ran faster I ran faster and faster thinking about edward I hated him so much but some part of me still loved him and deep down I knew the amount of amor my corazón held for him will never be the same with matt but I amor matt so much and I want to spend my entire life with him...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 14
Bella pov
Me and matt went inicial and changed I took out the left ravioly out of the fridge and warmed it up for charlie I went upstaires and fiond matt lying on my cama lectura romeo and juliet
-that's one of my faves!
I sat down beside him and read a few pages with him when I heard Charlie's crucero coming near the house I got up and went down stairs matt followed me he kissed my forehead and went and sat on the sofá turnning on the TV watching baseball ugh! I I don’t get that game and it reminds me of old times.
I ran up stairs and took romeo and juliet and went back down stairs in...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
I WANT TO THANK leisha4 FOR HELPING ME!
Chapter 13
6 months later
Edwards pov (from what happens in the last chapter)
I was so dipresed its been 6 months scince bellas missing I am sitting on the coutch watching nothing. my family was dipresed too so jaspered went out a lot not wanting to be in the same room as us he tried to cheer us up but it didn’t work rose was less concerned and acted like nothing had happen Emmett and Alice were mostly like me they loved Bella as their sister Emmett alwas made fun of her and made her blus, Alice was so dipressed más like me ,now she hated me less and tried...
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posted by OCFan123
Author's Note: Okay, so the plot of the story is probraly the most cliche plot ever. Bad boy likes good girl, fall in love, bad boy has secret, blah blah. However, I wrote this a REALLY long time ago, as when I wrote the most cliche stories ever. But, I decided to put the first chapter here. I'll only continue if people want me to. Hope tu enjoy :) And any constructive critsicm is welcome!

1. Encounter

If people would ask about me, Elle Summons, they probably say "who?" o if they did know me, o at least who I was, they probably would say "Biggest outsider ever" o "Loser of the Century"
Because...
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Skiro
“So your on the Track team?” Murphy dicho as he sat siguiente to me.
“Yeah,I have been since I was a freshman. I liked it a lot but I'm worried about this new team.” I dicho thinking about the way they looked at me when I walked in. It was my hair,I shouldn't have braided it-too much just like always. “I don't think they take well to-” I started to say but Savannah sat down across from Murphy.
“What are yall talkin' about?” Savannah asked
“Skiro's on the Track team.” Murphy dicho excitedly
“oh really?” Savannah looked at me “And did Murphy tell tu that he's going on...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so tu can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...
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posted by dancing_banana
I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived siguiente to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....
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Chapter 1: First día of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first día of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a rosado, rosa T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the playa earlier that week. Seeing...
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Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are tu doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way inicial to get myself a six-pack of cerveza because...
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