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After the film they all walk to Antiworld to hang out for awhile. They all laid on the grass, peacefully thinking about misceláneo things in their lives. Grito was watching over them, thinking that Cassie, Nathan, Slone and Lindsay may be in trouble if they keep their bonds with the others. Parvulo was sleeping on Grito’s shoulder, making no sound what so ever. Grito himself was getting drowsy, he quickly fell asleep, and he hadn’t slept in a few days, watching over them. What could stop something from attacking them now, Grito is asleep, and a sneak attack and Grito may not be able to save them ‘all’. The thing that stops creatures attacking at random, even if Grito is asleep, power is still being leaked a out of him, creatures that have wisdom know that cannot win, but still not all creatures care for wisdom nor the power of the enemy.
“Damn you! tu think tu can just randomly attack people” dicho a Student of Antiworld High. He was standing there, with two of his friends on the ground. The other students were all hiding their faces under hoods, standing silent. “You think I’ll let tu get away with this?” The Student shouted, charging at the other students. The one in front punched the boy in the stomach, making him instantly stop and fall to the ground. The man removed his hood; he had long brown hair coming down his back, in a shaggy fashion. He had scars all over his face, with a very noticeable one across his entire left side. “Hey, Canis, why did tu attack those guys?” A young man dicho siguiente to the scared man. “That last one... Looked at me funny” dicho Canis.
The siguiente día at school, Marley, Nathan and Alec were all in class, barely paying any attention to whatever the teacher was talking about. Nathan, Alec and Marley are all in the same class; Cassie and Mia are in the same class, Lindsay and Opal are in are in the same class and Slone is all por himself. When school finishes, they usually hang out at their class, Nathan, Marley and Alec were talking about misceláneo stuff. Just then a student went through a window, sliding across the floor. “Hey is this class, 9H?” A young man dicho wearing a school uniform with a hood. “Who is the strongest?” He shouted. A few people stood up, one being Andre Daemon, a well known ‘tough guy’ throughout the school. “Who do tu think tu are? Walking into my class like that, looking for a fight, eh?” dicho Andre walking up to the student.
There were three students with hoods; one was wearing gloves, a tall one wearing sunglasses and one holding a steel, sliver, baseball bat. Andre through the first punch, but the tall one stopped it and pushed him to the ground. Two of Andre’s boys jumped in and fought the tall man. They tried to kick him in the chest but he just knocked them to the ground. “Damn you!” Andre Shouted. He gripped his fist and aimed at the gloved one. Andre was struck in the head por the one holding a baseball bat, falling to the ground with blood down his face. “Class 9H now belongs to the ‘West-side Dogs’, under us” The gloved one said. Nathan grunted, he hated when gangster like kids came in and started claiming this and that. Alec and Marley helped Andre and his friends up. “Do tu want to try us as well?” dicho the one with the baseball bat. Alec and Marley ignored them and just walked off with Nathan.
Some times ago,scientists began experiments to find out whether it would be possible to set up a 'village' under the sea.A special room was built and lowered into the water of Port Sudan in the Red Sea.For 29 days,5 men lived at a depth of 40 feet.At a much lower level,another two divers stayed for a week in a smaller 'house'.On returning to the surface,the men dicho that they had experienced no difficulty in breathing and had made many interesting scientific observations.The captain of the party,Commander Cousteau,spoke of the possibility of cultivating the seabed.He dicho that some permanent...
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posted by hgfan5602
I'm up all the time now.
Head up
Shoulders back
Legs slightly apart
Back straight.

I walk into the exam room,
Knowing inside my heart
That the ones who fear
Are the ones who do not succeed.

I sit down.
Confident,
I start my song
Of utmost elegance.

I use all my power
And strength.
I use all the dynamics in the world,
I use everything everyone's brought me.
I use all the good that everyone
Has dado me
In my life.

Time goes slowly by.
I feel myself going along with the beat.
I am entranced in my own song.
It feels better than ever before.

I am done.
I walk over to the judges,
Shaking each hand.
I feel a sense of pride in my heart,
Knowing that I have done it now.
I truly have.
posted by hgfan5602
I am disappointed,
At the way things are moving along.
Why is everyone so private about
Everything?

I am disappointed,
That I have not met my dream yet.
It seems a long way until I will
Catch my dream in the sky.

I am disappointed,
With many people.
Not just me.
But mostly me.

Why am I being so selfish?
Why are other people being so unkind?
Everything seems in ruin,
Including me.

I am sorry that this is the way it must be
Today,
But I know that tomorrow is a new day,
Waiting for all of us to do good deeds.
And do we shall.
Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the biblioteca of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if tu ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...
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posted by Insight357
    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.    
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...
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posted by hgfan5602
My name is Matt Downley, and I am a soccer player. I just moved here to New York, and I was just going to try out for the Weston Middle soccer team, when believe it o not, the principal came rushing down the halls and dicho that I couldn't play because I am disabled. WHAT THE HECK!!! Okay, I was like, "So here's the deal. I can't play. I can't do anything. What the freak am I supposed to do at this stupid school!!!" But, of course, I didn't have the guts to say that out loud to the principal, so I just muttered and said, "Okay." Lately, I feel like people have been stalking me when I came back from school. Everyday when I go to bed, I feel like people are looming in the shadows above me. I didn't know now, but tonight would be a night of extreme danger.
posted by alicia386
What scandalous secrets can adults keep from their parents? I need ideas for a book I am currently writing. It is about how some secrets adults keep from us can actually save our lives. I hope to give tu a sneak vista previa of my book which is called The Deadly Truth. Can't wait for your opinions!

To know más about my book please post your preguntas on my wall. I will try my best to reply as fast and as soon as I can. If I don't then just know I did read them.

tu can believe the first chapter of my book will be publicado either this week o siguiente Friday.
posted by morganaforever
Full of excitement, Nicole and Ellie arrived at the fairground. They walked through the towering gates, expecting laughter and chatter – but everything remained quiet. No music, no noise, nothing! The place was deserted. A strong gust of wind blew, making them shiver. As they walked on, it began to get darker. Gradually, the sky turned from a bright blue to black. One por one the lights of the fairground flickered on, illuminating the black sky. As they passed por The Haunted Mine, it seemed to be inviting them to have a go. A man clad completely in black was waiting beside the entrance.

“Can...
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It probably took tu a while to learn the 26 letters of the alphabet back when tu started school. But actually, tu should count yourself lucky. Some languages use alphabets with many más letters than that. Russian, for example, has 33 letters, and the Khmer language of Cambodia has over 70. And in China and Japan, where they write with signs called 'characters', there are hundreds, even thousands of different shapes to remember. Japanese primary school children are expected to learn about a thousand characters before they can go on to high school!
posted by candyvtoby511
Tess’s parents were shot down right before her eyes, coming out through the side door of a theatre. She couldn’t understand why he had killed them and not her. The murderer was young, maybe even the same age as herself. He was disguised as an older man, but she could still tell he was quite young, 14 o so.
Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...
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 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture por oro Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion icono of The año 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough comentarios i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as animales scurried in the árbol tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in por cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, parte superior, arriba bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million estrella and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around tu killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the el espacio craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if tu want to convey your thoughts accurately. tu also want your escritura to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is más annoying than lectura a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of escritura sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
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Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As tu bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by DxCFan123
Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...
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posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes adelante, hacia adelante the mind and body of an individual changes for either good o bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years hace por a wise old man that fortold my future. He dicho "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him más shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a seguro distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be mostrando tu the best techniques for escritura your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what tu may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, tu have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before tu decide on a plot, tu should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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