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Sorry this is so long and confusing! I promise the siguiente part will be más exciting! :)

I never realized how much it hurt to be shot. Who would believe that that was the least of my worries? I certainly didn’t, so as I was screaming my head off, all people from around the school came into the band hall to see who was screaming. I suppose they would be a bit disappointed that someone was just shot and no one had gone crazy, which would have been equally entertaining, but there was tension in the room. Kids stood awkwardly around, not knowing what to do. People that had crowded around me earlier and that had pressed the chaqueta into my side were now standing a couple feet away from me, not sure of what to do.
    Aaron was at the crowd’s edge, looking at me with fear in his eyes. I gave him such a strained smile, it hurt. He smiled worriedly back, and at that moment, I realized I liked him. Bullshit to those kids who thought he was gay. Mr. Hanson ran over to me.
    “How do tu feel?” He asked, not sure of what to do. The assistant band director, Mrs. Walker, had called an ambulance.
    “Like I’ve just been shot,” I sardonically replied, glaring at him. I was just shot; I feel as happy as can be. I gasped in pain again, and I felt blood trickle onto my fingers through the chaqueta someone had dado me. Mr. Hanson looked around once again, assessing the situation, and then he scooped me into his arms.
    My face turned a bright red. This was so embarrassing; my band director was picking me up. I was so sure he was going to complain about me being heavy, but he remained silent. I rested the lump of fat that was bulging from his stomach.
    “Ohhh,” I moaned, not from pain but from embarrassment. Being manhandled por your band director and getting shot in the same day; I guess today was a día for firsts.
    Mr. Hanson kicked open the door and we stepped outside. There was a bench a couple of feet away, so I struggled to get out the words,
    “Can tu set me down on the bench?” Honestly, I preferred to die on the bench rather than in his arms. He complied and set me down. I pressed the drenched chaqueta harder onto my stomach and moaned.
    “Shit!” I yelped, “This fucking hurts,” usually, I’m not such an avid swearer. Being shot is one of those rare moments that breaks my rule.
    “I know,” Mr. Hanson replied, sitting on the bench siguiente to me. My eyes widened in fear and shock. How the hell did he know? Was he a sniper? Was he in a war? As curious as I was, I kept those preguntas to myself.
    “You know that was really selfless of you,” Mr. Hanson complimented. I shook my head. I was shot, lying on a bench, and we were having this conversation.
    “Yeah, well, my mom and dad think I’m a selfish bitch,” I dicho back, kicking the chair and receiving a sharp flash of pain in my foot. At least it made the bullet’s wound not as painful.
    Some kids had poked their heads outside, and Mrs. Walker’s loud piercing bird-like voice brought them back inside.
    “Tell them I’m sorry,” I grunted.
    “You’ll survive,” Mr. Hanson insisted.
    “I know,” Just in case I went into a coma o something. “When is this goddamn ambulancia going to get here?” I shouted to nobody, and, as if on cue, an ambulancia pulled up. “Finally,” I muttered under my breath as two men jumped out of the car. One had messy brown hair that looked like a mouse. He was considerably cute, while the other had brown spiky hair. I liked spiky hair boy.
    They sprinted over to me and picked me up. They carried me to the back of the ambulancia and set me down on the chair.
    “Sweetie, we need to remove the bullet here, a hospital is too far away,” with that, ratón Boy took out a needle and drove it into my skin. All that pain and hurt and fear seemed to numb away. I giggled.
    Mr. Hanson and Spike Boy held me down as ratón Boy peeled away my camisa, camiseta and the jacket. He took out some tweezers and gently removed the bullet. He plopped it in a small tray.
    “Damnit!” I yelled, kicking against the chair. I struggled out of Mr. Hanson and Spike Boy’s grip, but they just pushed against me harder. ratón Boy stitched me up; all the while I was cussing my head off. I had the faint remembrance my mother would kill me if she heard me swearing like this, but I didn’t care.
    Finally, they had finished. They gave me an IV drip with fluids.
    “We’re going to take tu to the hospital now,” Spike Boy said. The car started up and the two ER workers were about to close the doors when a woman in an FBI vest stepped in the door’s path. She had a gun at ready.
    “Stop! Mike Peachson and David Tosdon, you’re both under arrest for medical fraud and illegal practice. Take the IV drip out of the girl and come forth to receive your handcuffs. ratón Boy ran off.
    “Mike get back here!” the FBI woman said, so I knew he was ratón Boy, and David must be Spike Boy. Mike was already across the parking lot, so the woman took aim and fired her gun. The bullet whipped off of a car and hit the ground. Mr. Hanson walked up to the FBI woman and took away the gun. “Sir!” She protested, but Mr. Hanson took the gun, aimed and fired. Mike fell to the ground.
    Mr. Hanson turned around and aimed the gun at David. He threw his hands up in the air in surrender.
    “Lori Megan Vandana! Step away from the camioneta, van and kick your gun towards me!” a male voice sounded from around the door, and a police officer walked up siguiente to her. He also had a gun at ready. Lori, the FBI woman, look confusedly at him.
    “Who the hell are you?” she asked. My head was starting to swim.
    “You were suspended from his case, if I do recall correctly,” he said, taking out his handcuffs.
    “Vandana?” another male voice said, and another police officer stepped into view. This one looked directly like the first officer, except he had a scar over his eye.
    “Holdom?” Lori asked. “Tony Holdom? Weren’t tu fired? And who the hell is that?” Lori beckoned towards the first man, who looked scared. His gun was shaking.
    “Holy shit,” breathed Tony, grabbing his gun from the holster. The first man began to run, but before Tony could click the gun off of safety, Mr. Hanson had fired the man to the ground. Tony jogged over to the man and began to put handcuffs over him. “This is Sean McCane, the escaped convict we’ve been looking for.” He grabbed Sean up and pulled him to his feet.
    Just then, a helicopter flew overhead, and a S.W.A.T. truck roared into the parking lot. Tons of men jumped out and spotted Tony.
    “It’s the convict! Get him! He’s arrested a police officer!” a S.W.A.T. person said, and a group of men ran towards Tony.
    “No no!” Tony and Lori stepped forward. “I’m Tony!” Tony shouted. “That’s the convict,” he pointed towards Sean.. The S.W.A.T. team didn’t listen to him. Instead they tackled Tony. Some men broke off from the pile and unarrested Sean.
    Sean ran towards the empty S.W.A.T. truck and drove it away. My head was definitely hurting. What the hell had just happened? The S.W.A.T. team got off of Tony, and realizing they had tackled the wrong guy, they called in for reinforcements to find the convict.
    Mike Peachson, who was clutching his shot shoulder, walked up to the camioneta, van and jumped inside. David began to tent to his wounds. Lori looked around at the mess of S.W.A.T. workers. She put two fingers in her mouth and whistled. The men stopped talking and they looked at her.
    “We need to arrest Mike Peachson and David Tosdon. They’ve been illegally treating patients,” Lori said.
    “Wait a damn second,” a S.W.A.T. worker yelled out. “How should we know tu aren’t lying?” Lori sighed, and Tony jumped in the back of the truck so he towered everyone.
    “Look,” Tony began. “She’s right. The police have been working with the FBI to solve the case. She’s telling the truth. But now tu dickheads have let Sean McCane, the deadly convict, get away. Congratulations,” Tony made a mover towards David and Mike. “David, Mike, step away from the girl,” Tony cautiously said. The crowd turned to look at them.
    Mike snatched a scalpel and slit my throat on the side. “I’m not going anywhere without the girl. She’s a liability, and she needs medical treatment. Now tu listen to me, o this girl is going to die por the scalpel in my hand,” Mike put the blade on my throat and pressed it into my skin. I felt sticky blood trickle down my neck. I whimpered softly.
    “Fine,” Tony said. He jumped out of the truck. A black SUV drove into the parking lot. A man in a suit jumped out. At once, everyone stood at attention. I bet he was their superior.
    “What the hell is going on here? I’ve had 9 calls from the school. Vandana, Holdom, Peterson, come with me. The rest of tu arrest the two medical frauds.” I was right. Tony, Lori, and the S.W.A.T. man who had led the charge stepped forward.
    “We’re coming too!” Mike shouted, pushing me on the stretcher to the ground. I landed with a thud. David followed him and we arrived to the superior. Mike still held the scalpel at my throat. David’s back was pressed to Mike’s back, a gun at ready. The superior briskly nodded, realizing the situation.
    “I’ll come too!” Mr. Hanson shouted and nodded towards the van.
    “Get back to work!” the superior yelled back, and Mr. Hanson walked back into the band hall. Meanwhile, everyone was getting loaded into the SUV. Mike and David pulled me into the back, David’s gun still at ready.
    Once we were loaded, the car began to move.
    “What a shitty day,” I muttered to myself. I was a hostage. I had just been shot. Who were all these people? I was exhausted, so with a sigh, I fell asleep on the stretcher, only having the sound of the car driving to lull me to sleep.
posted by DMLIME
MI6 agent Scott Filbury waited quietly outside the office of the head of the department. He was not told why he had been summoned, but the agents usually weren’t. He sat still; the only movement were his eyes, darting to every corner of the blank hallway, trying to take in every detail of his surroundings as he had been trained to 6 years before. He was only 28 and had been recruited after saving 3 people in a burning building, mostrando a ‘desire for passion and justice’ as his perfil read.
He noticed a fly near the bright lamps that were imbedded in the ceiling. He knew that soon the...
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posted by madening_mahem
I only came to resolve a matter, nothing more.
But have tu no shame reporter, whose words can bring either joy o pity, have tu no shame?
You speak of him, a dearly departed lover of mine and a noble none the less whose actions have been all but harmful to this town, in vein as if he is just another commoner in the street, who sleep in the dirt and has no dignity.
Making a mockery of him though he died only yesterday, but what seems like only an hora to me, and then attempt to treat it with sarcasm.
How dare you. How dare you.
Try not to later state that tu knew him well, for that I know very...
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posted by StarWarrior
PROLOGE
“You can’t!” I screeched, griping the thick césped, hierba beneath my paws.
    “The whole forest will belong to the Pack of Shadows!” the dark lobo exclaimed enthusiastically, his pelaje, piel flickering like shadows, “No lobo will stop us!”
    I have to do something! I couldn’t let it end like this! Not with the alpha in this state! Not with the pack división, split in four!
    “Out of my way pup!” he tossed me aside like a tiny mouse.
    “No!” I leaped at him, biting and clawing with all my strength.
    “This is pointless! tu cannot defeat me she-wolf!” I felt him bite me and fling me away again. I was too tired to mover now, after traveling this far without resting, I can no longer breathe enough to live.
    I’m over; this is the end of the Pack of Ice! I lay winded and defeated, awaiting death’s arrival patiently.
posted by emmett
~Let tu Go~

1: On and on ~ the days go by
Without a sight of tu o my sanity
I'm lost not found ~ I wanted to mostrar tu , I wanted to tell you...

Chorus: If I say I'm sorry will tu believe me?
If I amor tu again will tu never leave me?
I made a mistake when I dicho no
I never should have let tu go...

2: I ring your phone but no one answers, I'm alone
Days are spent lectura your old letters, but with a groan,
I'd put them away, In the draw they'd lay until tomorrow...
Tomorrow...

Chorus-

3: This moping, not coping is killing me
My soul is not at rest when I long for it to be
I wish you'd come back o my fears may come true
When I left you, I still loved tu and I think tu knew

Chorus-

Darlin' don't forget me
I'm locked and you're the only key...
posted by Sephisis17
Another poem por me. This one came out kinda lame,but I'll let the rating be the judge (assuming there will be any).

That Girl

Have tu seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?

Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.

She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.

She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.

Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
posted by fangs286
I ran as hard as i could, my feet smaking the ground, crushing leaves and twigs.
I heard my own breath ragged but i kept running. David had already been taken and so had Amy but i wasn't giving up that easily. I threw another look over my shoulder, even though i didnt hear anything. Of course there was nothing there.
They were to smart for that.
In my haste, i tripped over a árbol that had fallen. i tried to scramble back up, but i hard set of arms grabbed my shoulders. I screamed, but i knew that no one would come for me. So when the hand clamped over my mouth i stopped my protests. Of course...
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posted by Vampiyaa
"Hey, aren't tu supposed to be in bed?" Toyo asked, when he spotted Aiko lying down on the sofá lectura one of May's magazines. Aiko didn't respond. It took a few segundos for Toyo to figure out she was sleeping.
"Silly," Toyo laughed, kneeling beside her. "You'd better wake up before the monitor finds out tu didn't mostrar up at your dorm." He attempted to prod her awake and then gasped as his entire body went numb. Something dark inside him stirred, and he widened his eyes and locked them on Aiko's neck. Unconciously, he reached out his hand and slid it onto Aiko's neck. The monster inside...
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posted by juicyjossy9
Where are tu at this moment
Only in my dreams
You're missing, but you're always
a heartbeat from me

I'm lost now without you
I don't know where tu are
I keep watching
I keep hoping
but time keeps us apart
Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring tu back home?

Winter lies before me
Now you're so far away
In the darkness of my dreaming
The light of tu will stay

If I could be close beside you
If I could be where tu are
If I could reach out and touch you
And bring tu back home

Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring tu back home?

To me...

* * * * * * * * * *
LivHILuvAlwaiz♥jj9
posted by Funnygirl77
 amor bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell tu the can hear your corazón beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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added by IloveMyLord
this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good o not before I enviar it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear amor tu once were a shining ray.
In my eyes tu meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about tu is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your amor is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our amor is coming to its new close.
colores were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would amor to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our amor has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our amor left it took tu along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying amor was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me amor would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
posted by ZekiYuro
Basics: Hannah Meyer age 17, Born August 1, 1995. Lives in Bradenton, Florida
Blond hair, blue eyes.

What is your happiest memory? My happiest memory was when I finally got to meet my mom's
parents. They lived on the east side of Berlin and did something that got them put in prison for a while.
I'm not sure what they did because my mom won't talk about it.

What don't tu want anyone to find out about you? I am afraid to let my guard down. What I mean is, I've seen so many of my friends get hurt in relationships o por their parents breaking up. I hear my parents fighting a lot and so I'm afraid to...
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posted by thirteen_times
He didn’t want money o fancy cars; all he wanted was to be loved por someone, any one at all. He needed someone to care about him, not his wealth, not his ties to the rich and famous, someone that actually cared about him, the boy with bright blue eyes that sparkled in the sunlight, curly raven black hair and a boyish grin permanently plastered on his face hiding the pain of being alone. Yet no one did, all they saw was the heir to the Jeffrey Empire, the boy that was going to inherited it all. The boy, who was the prefect son living up to the Jeffrey name. They never saw the boy’s who’s arms were covered in cuts, the cuchillo against his skin, the blood dripping down staining the carpet, his eyes closing never to open again. No one read the note tucked into his pocket cause no one cared.
posted by Rae-Ash
I’m finished
I’m done
I can’t do this anymore

I’m through
I can’t last another second

It’s all I’ve ever seen
Surrounded por chaos
Filled with fear

Its’ all I can think about
All the lost love
All the broken hearts
All the destroyed dreams
All the hopeless children
And devastated parents

Everyone who turned their cheek
Who ignored the cries
Of help and distress

No más kindness
Only monsters and demons
Who always kill

tu took her from me
And now you’ll pay
‘Cause I have one final thing to say
—Good-bye World
—Hello Death and eternity