escritura Article: I'm Sorry

posted by tigerseye43

THis is just a fiction amor story i made myself.....Enjoy :)

Once upon a time there was a couple dating.Their names were Courtney and Jake. They were so happy together but Jake had a secret. He was secretly dating another girl, Ariel. One night while Courtney was at jake's apartment she heard Jake's phone buzz indacating that he had gotten a text. Jake was in his room so she decided she would look at the text.When she read it, she was heartbrocken.
It said, "Hey jakey when tu are done with Courtney come to my place, i have somthing for you."
When Jake come into the living room, he was greeted por and very angry women, Courtney, But she wasn't just angry. She was sad, heartbroken, and she felt cheated on.
"What's wrong baby?" asked Jake. Then he steped adelante, hacia adelante to embrace her in a hug but she pushed him away. The she showed him the text he got. Jake was stuned. Just then Jake got another text from the girl, Arial. Courtney read it and stared to cry. Her mascara was running and she had had enough disapointment for the day.
She threw the phone at Jake and ran out the door. That night it had been raining and it still was so Courtney was soaked. Jake then realized what he had done. He had lost the amor he loved the most. He had made a big mistake and then thought.....
" She was my one and only true love. What have I done?"
He ran out the door after Courtney.Right before she opened her car door Jake puchsed it closed and pushed her up against the car and dicho this to her.
"Baby don't leav. I know I made a big mistake por doing that to tu but tu are the only women I have ever loved. When I first saw tu tu changed my life forever. tu are the woman I want to spend th rest of my life with. Baby please forgive me."
Courtney was to sad, and stuned to say anything. Then, still standing in the rain getting soaked, Jake besar Courtney. They were besar for hours out in the rain that night.

r260897 great gal but still u should start from a scence thats going on.. and then relate the story. i think this is old pattern of writing story starting with once upon... however it was good..... make some suspence u revealed the thing in the very start...it kills intrest of reader. hope u mind

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Η Αλήθεια

Σε αυτόν τον κόσμο τον αχανή,
όλοι ήμαστε σκλάβοι φορτικοί,
δεν υπάρχει αλήθεια πραγματική,
εδώ που το ψέμα κυριαρχεί.

Ολοι ζούμε μια ψεύτικη ζωή,
μια ευτυχία εικονική,
από άλλους είναι φτιαγμένη,
χωρίς αγάπη αληθινή.

Και η αλήθεια είναι χαμένη,
μεσ’ το σκοτάδι, για πάντα εξαφανισμένη.

Για κανέναν δεν είμαι εδώ,
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