escritura Article: My Unamed Story pt.2

posted by boomboombunni

"I'm glad to meet someone my age. I've lived here since I was eight, and I haven't seen any kids." She dicho her parents were wealthy wine makers. They couldn't take care of her, so they gave her a small amount of their fortune, and left her here. "Wow, your life sounds so difficult." "Yeah, it was, until i died." Andrew's face went bone white and he felt like collapsing. "I'm sorry, what? ALIVE? AS in, no longer living?" "Yeah! I thought tu knew!" Poor Andrew caved in on himself. The last thing he remembered was Elizabeth reaching out to catch him as he fell to the floor.

bri-marie Still the same thing - very rushed and confusing. There are no details, no descriptions. What does it mean that 'her' (I'm assuming 'she' is Elizabeth?) parents can't take care of her? They're obviously financially stable as they [i]gave[/i] her a small [i]fortune[/i]. They obviously care about her, since they gave her said fortune. She wasn't old enough to survive on her own. It doesn't make any sense. What do things look like? Smell like? Feel like? Sound like? What are the characters feeling - anxious, happy, sad? How old are they? What do they look like?

woofbark Right now, this is a good story. Add more detail, and it will be great. :D

boomboombunni okay listen! its a little rough i know! i will try to make it better!

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Painful Memories Chapter 1 (Twilight fanfiction)

posted by IsabellaMCullen

This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different fans think of it.I only have 3 o 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One

I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be inicial soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...

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fuego Eyes (a poem)

posted by shomill

He has fuego in his eyes.

Burning, flaming, blazing with his fury,
But not at me,
Never at me,
For I am his love,
The one he holds above
All others. His fury
Is for those who would harm me,
Who would dare to bring amargo, amargos tears to my eyes.
They alone see the full fury of his fire.

He has fuego in his eyes.

They sparkle when he smiles,
Crackling fuego behind dark irises.
They are beautiful because of the firelight behind them.
What is he thinking of as he smiles at me,
The flames in his eyes gleaming brightly?
He's thinking of the thing we both hold dear,
The treasured, precious amor we share.

He has fuego in his...

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Poem: Lonely Girl

posted by emmett

Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her corazón is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once más

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do

más Than friends o Just a Dream? (Eminem Story) [Chapter Three - fuego Her]

posted by EminemAddict09

I woke up to the door being shut. I sat up quickly and stared at the girls. “Oh hi,” I said. “Thought tu were someone else for a segundo there,” I dicho with a slight laugh.
“Sorry,” Hailie dicho as she came and sat por me.
“Don’t worry about that,” I dicho patting her on the head, she looked at me funny but I don’t think she mined my pattingness. “Anybody have homework?” I asked looking at both of the girls. Laney just nodded and walked towards the cocina without saying a word, I thought that was a bit strange but I guess that’s just the way she is. I sat there for a...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Alec’s eyes opened as the día has started, he sitting up on his bed, remembering yesterday, how Grito basically gave them permission, no, forced them to create his group. Alec picked up the phone and gave Marley a call. He discussed what happened yesterday and if they should agree with Grito, Marley agreed, he hated the fact that innocent people were getting killed so he was glad to help. Marley informed Opal and she had the same idea. After he hanged up Alec got the phone book out and looked for the name ‘Norris’. After a few phone calls he reached her and explained the same thing. They...

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misceláneo lyrics o something <3

posted by emmett

misceláneo Song o Poem o Something
So um enjoy. Idk wot this is but whatev :)

I'll Break this Spell

I’ve lived my life in shadows
Walking at your pace
I couldn’t see that tu were so shallow
I was too mesmerized por your face

Now I can see
All that you’ve done to me

I’ll break this spell
That you’ve put on me
Ever so easily
I won’t treat tu well
After all it’s me
That you’ve messed up completely
I’ll make tu pay hell
If that’s what will set me free
If it’ll set me free

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why me

posted by Thalia_huntress

“Brandon!” I call. “Just follow my voice love.” he says sweetly. My amor I miss his light brown hair and slightly tan skin. “I’ve finally found you!” I dicho happily. “Now my love…” he kissed me I missed him so much, then something sharp cut my neck.[i/] Then I woke with a start “who in the world’s Brandon?” I ask myself. I sat up on my cama looked at my clock it was 4:37 ugh three hours till school. I took a warm ducha, ducha de dried my hair. That left me with two hours till school. Finally sleep found me again. [i]“Kura! Find a man named Charlie well this would be his grand...

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misceláneo story im making up as i go along XDXD

posted by 1-2vampire

Life is never easy alone.
But no one is ever completely alone, that would be impossible.
But if the only company tu had was the company of an enemy, what would tu do?
Well then, say that enemy was the only person tu could rely on?
But what if they were the person that made tu alone in the first place?
And what if it was the one tu were falling in amor with?
What would tu do if tu were in this situation?
Here's what I did.

I was laughing my head off when the campana rang signalling end of school. I didn't even notice it. I was too busy trying to get Kyle to notice me. I mean, every damn girl in...

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The dairies of a wounded man- Chapter 2:Part1

posted by sahour95

She wanted to know what else he thought about her, and refused to stop lectura no matter how painful its effect would be.
He dicho tu are in med school. That made me happy since I was there too, though against my welling. I thought that tu are passionate and caring, that tu are loving and want to help everyone. I didn’t even know tu and I drew tu in my mind like an ángel the same way tu looked to me. I forgot in that minuto all what my father told me, and all what I learned about not being fooled with appearances, though I was, all my life, very careful with choosing my friends. But...

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The diaries of a wounded man- chapter 1 "The other half"

posted by sahour95

I still remember the día I saw you. I never thought that meeting tu would destroy me, would leave deep wounds that no one is able to heal not even you. tu looked like a beautiful ángel walking between your tow friends, carrying your books, ready to start a new año in collage with arms wide open. tu laughed and the whole world laughed in my face. tu waved to us, me and him. When he pointed to tu I could hardly listen to him. I could hardly see anyone but you. tu hechiceras me with your beauty.Your silky, long, black hair. Your big blue eyes, their look full of amor and passion. Behind those...

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missing chapter one

posted by kayleebabee

"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward dicho hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would tu care? tu don't even know me."
"And tu don't know me. How would tu know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Worse Case Scenario (Poem/Song)

posted by livethislifeup

It's harder to forgive than to forget,
vice-versa, either way, it's still a threat,
time passes, memory flashes,
you're rememberin'
thoughts are coming in
no way to escape it, its a no win.
drives tu insane, tu try to up your game,
tell yourself they'll regret it and they'll live in shame,
just cause they dragged your name,
across every damn lane,
and tu got hurt every time, yeah tu still in pain,
and it ain't the same, tu all tense around them,
and más anger do tu gain.
Deep down it's still hurtin' you
like every wound would,
it's like a throbbing cut
that keeps your eyes tight shut,
and tu sound out...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 20

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I'd slept for most of the flight.

Rion was there to meet me, like he promised.

He'd hugged me, told me it would be fine, that I'd be fine.

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I took on the job of his personal assisstant, and I made a point to remember everything, from the way he liked his coffee to the way his escritorio needed re-organizing every few days.

I was a VERY dedicated assisstant.

He helped me with everything; he stood behind me silently as I endured my first morning sickness, and when I went into labour, which was five hours hace he dropped everything to be there for...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 16

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I couldn't tell my mom. I tried, and I just couldn't. What's worse, she didn't try to make me.

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Later, I had cried out every tear I had, but it wasn't enough.

Just as I'd parked my car outside the complex where I now lived, a spark of hope flared inside me.

No one ever would know.

I sprinted up the stairs, I just couldn't handle the idleness of taking the elevator. I needed to run.

I burst through the door and immediately headed for the hall closet.

I pulled out a large suitcase and stuffed as many of my clothes as I could in it.

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Broken Dreams Chapter 6

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

I sat with Tia and her friends, but I could feel Shaun's stare.

After school, I was in a hurry to get in my car, so I didn't see him coming as I fumbled for my keys.

"Serena, how strongly are tu opposed to seeing a movie with me this weekend?" he asked.

I looked up, at first not believing what I was hearing. I was aware that it was Thursday. Very aware.

"Unopposed," I said, so happy. Inexplicably happy, as I met his eyes. They weren't black, just a very dark brown.

"I'll pick tu up," he said.

"Come to this address," I said, scrawling my calle and house number on a piece of paper my...

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underworld High: Chapter 6: Vampire boy

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Billy’s p.o.v
“I can’t believe girls got a ghost hunt” Rocco mumbled. We were all bummed the girls always got the good cases. “Yeah, I heard it’s about a guy who had scratched on his back” Max said. I sighed. “What cases do we have?” I asked Caleb looked down at his computer. “A girl says that her boyfriend was on a hiking trip and he hasn’t called o communicated with her since last week” he said. I rolled my eyes. “Do tu think there’s anything to worry about?” I asked them, they all shrugged but Caleb nodded. “Even if there isn’t we have to help her anyway”...

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iTunes Shuffle

posted by mrs-mindfreak

I decided to do a story where I put my iPod on shuffle and start writing. Lucky for me, all the songs were basically sad o angry music. So this is what I came up with :)

The rain pattered on the windows drowsily, drowning out Alana’s choking sobs. She sat in her favorito! wooden rocker, and buried her face in her hands miserably. Her black hair clung to her sweaty face. Her clammy palms were wet from tears. She never wanted to mover from that spot again. Although she was filled with irrevocable remorse, she felt comfortable there. No one in the house, rain falling softly outside, and just...

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Green Eye Blind. (New member's story)

posted by TheHiddenCane

She watched them as they moved down her street.
They never saw her, took great care in looking away before she noticed their shamelessly wide eyes were glued to her body... or, más importantly what she embodied: this world they lived in wasn't perfect.
Her presence there seemed to pollute their pretty city and just like the odd cerveza can o stray McDonalds bag, they ignored her. She wasn't stupid though... she knew she was just as much an ornament as the ribbons that decorated the streetlights at this time of year, that she in fact blended in with the rest of the pavement and she herself was...

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A Writer’s Mini-Game Plan: Seven Rules for a Successful Career

posted by daragirard

The Writer Behind the Words

Luck has little to do with link. A long lasting escritura career doesn’t just happen. A writer can burst onto the scene and quickly disappear. Another can have a series of hits then write a bunch of flops and never be heard from again. The difference between a long lasting career and one that burns out is strategy. Here are seven rules to help tu find the right strategy for tu and get tu started on your journey to long lasting success.

Learn the power of focus. For most of us, we have más than enough to do on a daily basis. And when it comes to any escritura project the lista can grow exponentially-...