twilight

Here is the fourth chapter. I am SOO pleased that people like it. It makes Me REALLY happy!!!!!! I got my ideas from the Twilight libros [Obviously] and so there are connections! Please read, rate and comment. Enjoy!

Chapter Four

PLEASE REMEMBER THAT EDWARD AND BELLA USUALLY SPEAK IN THEIR HEADS UNLESS IT SAYS SO

That evening we went out to look for houses (this meant running around and looking for the nicest one). I found this funny.
We couldn’t stay here because there was a risk of someone recognising me. So Carlisle wanted to buy a house in Australia. But Esme had other ideas. She loved renovating...

Here is the segundo chapter, hope tu like it. It's a bit longer than the first one. I got my ideas from the TWILIGHT books. So there are connections. Enjoy.
I HAVE UPDATED THIS, HIS NAME IS NOW EDWARD AND NOT JAKE - I ALSO PUT IN A BIT más TO EXPLAIN SOMETHING IN OTHER CHAPTERS

CHAPTER 2

He asked me my name. This ángel was talking to me.
“I’m Bella” I replied in a feeble voice.
“How do tu feel?”
“Disorientated, Scared, Frightened, Confused, everything all at once. Where am I? Who are you? What am I doing here?”
    I shouted a whole load of things at this angel...

hola guys, when posting this on FanFiction.net I decided to change the ending a little bit, add más on. Just in case tu didn't want to be left out I thought I would post it again with the corrections.



I opened my eyes slowly, noticing the time was 5:34. Early. I closed my eyes again rolling over to my other side. I could sleep for another hora before I had to get up and start my morning routine for school. I could hear Charlie moving around the house downstairs, probably making himself breakfast, and then I smelled burnt toast. Yup. Definitely making himself breakfast. I turned a few times...