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Chapter 1: The unexpected

Have tu ever had one of those dreams, were tu try and run fast but tu just keep getting slower, well that's the dream I was having. This is the most strangest dream I have ever had. I was being chased por two wannabe snobs from school, Rachel was the leader from between them, who was tall with black hair tied up in to a curly mini style afro like a thick puff ball at the back of her head. she also had long, sleek legs built for running. Along side her was her follower Jessica, who was slightly shorter with long sandy blond waves down to her waist as well as having caramelo skin and catlike green eyes. It was amazing In my dream how they were just hoping over fences as if they weren't even there it was as if most of the time they were flying, but doing so they were inching there way closer and closer to me. Me on the other hand being so clumsy tripped over as I attempted to climb over a fence and made the the whole chase easy for them. I stumbled to my feet and tried to get my balance back, but as usual was to slow and the terror twins- although they looked nothing like each other but it was almost scary how they acted so much like each other- grabbed me so they pinched my skin- which unfortunately bruised like a peach. “were do tu think your going weed?” -that was Rachel stupid little name for me because she thought I was as skinny as a weed. Rachel laughed, “ye were do tu think your going weed, stick , think?” Jessica coped although Rachel giving her a dirty look at her trying to give a funny, joke. That were so not funny. “so were are tu going?” Rachel repeated while tugging on my top. Then she looked at me, I could almost see something evil swirling in her eyes, she gave a little witch cackle, she was really annoying me now with her stupid laugh just the way she was ugh, there were no words for her. I kicked her, which sent her going backwards. While I had the chance I sprang up and began to run but “AAARRGH” Rachel screeched while she jumped on me at such a perfect angle -another reason I didn't like, she was to perfect- that it sent me toppling and rolling and I finally stopped with a thud of Jessica's foot slammed into my side. A shadow cast over me and as I looked up Rachel rolled me over and pined me down. “I was going to let tu go, but now I'm going to give tu what tu deserve” Rachel leaned very closely to my neck and whispered “sorry if this hurts, but I don't care”. From the bad view from the corner of me eye I thought I saw her grow a few inches taller and, OMG FANGS! She winked at me ....”aahhhhh!!!!”

I woke up screaming, gasping for air as I tried to recover from my bad nightmare not dream..-I inhaled as much air as my lung would allow. I sat up in my cama still gasping for air, after I had got my self together I was still feeling a little shocked and shaken from my dream.
Once I had myself under control I checked the time on my stupid cama side clock, that my grandma had dado me for my 13th birthday,” I hate it, its what tu give a three año old not a thirteen año old” I told my mum after my party because I didn't want anybody and I do mean anybody to see it; I hide it when my friends come over; my mum thought it looked nice but it was corazón shaped and bright pink, with plastic stick-on multicoloured flowers; I had already pop a bunch of in a attempt to make it look better but doesn't seem to be working- well slightly. I slumped back into my almohada finding out it was only two in the morning, although after about half an hora I realised I couldn't sleep, so I started pacing.
I could hear flutters outside my window “uhhh!” there was a bat flying around out there, as soon as it heard me it gave me a side glance, then carried on on its 'all tu can eat buffet of bugs'. It was nice and peaceful to just look outside, the sky was almost black but surprisingly I could only count 6 stars and in pretty sure there are supposed to be más then that.
I was leaning on the widow sill feeling drowsy “hhhuuuhh” I yawned, every time I blinked it would get slower and slower “hhuh” I gasp at the shock of an old woman out side. She looked suspicious I thought to my self. She just kept stopping and looking around, I backed up and hide behind the curtain so I could still see her- I have to admit it is a bit stalkerish- hopefully she wouldn't be able to see me. The old lady finally stopped to a halt, she was intriguing , she just stood there motionless. All of a sudden the old ladies skin started to ripple and her bones began to shift and mover with it, she was growing, straitening up the hump on her back, she dropped her walking stick. she gave a gagging noise so vile it made my stomach churn. then a snarl broke through her lips to revel the extending canines still growing longer and as sharper the any needle I had seen, finally they just stopped grow at an amazing length of about 2 inches. The old lady was still for only 2 segundos then she clenched her fists so tight that I saw a thin, dark red line of blood- which somehow didn't look quite right, to dark o to thick. As soon as a blood drop touched the ground she straitened her fingers mostrando her new growing claws appear just like her canines, grown longer and almost as sharp. She growled and hissed then looked up past were I was and towards the bat that was still at its 'all tu can eat buffet'. She was still growling, 'whoosh' she leapt of the ground at an impossible high that just became possible, grabbed the bat in mid-air and got back to earth again, still on her feet. She looked at the bat which was squealing and flapping about, the old lady gave an amused expression, laughed, then bit the bat, which squealed once más then flopped motionless as the old lady sucked its blood until its body was dry and as some people would say 'it was skin and bone.'. The bat was very small now and I think the old lady new that to, she looked around for somewhere to throw o hide it but she went with the most disgusting option, she through it in her mouth and swallowed it whole from the looks of it. I couldn't look any más I closed my eyes for a while, but when I opened them she was shrinking her claws and teeth were going back to normal and her back looking painful arched over and formed her hump back once again causing her to collapse on the floor, she picked up her walking stick and got back to her feet. She was normal again; if I can call her that, although she had a painful expression on her face.. Hold on I cant believe that I'm taking this so well, am I imagining all this? Was that a dream? I looked out side but the lady was gone or... wasn't even there. What's wrong with me I thought. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath, sight then opened my eyes. “aahh!” the old lady was back and looking at me, I stumbled back in the shock, tripped over some libros and hit my head of the floor; that's going to hurt in the morning if not sooner. I got back onto my feet, now what should I do I thought, TAP! TAP! TAP!, there was some thing banging at my window; now that really freaked me out. I ran to my mom's room but there was no one there. I ran down the stairs as fast I could in case whatever was tapping on my window got in.
I got to the cocina and I could no longer hear the taping but now that was the least of my worries, in front of me was my mum sucking on a raw stake looking like the old lady but different she, my mum was the same hight but she had the same long gleaming blood covered fangs with the same long claws but she had red eyes which swirled like a pool of blood. As soon as my mum saw me she dropped the stake which landed with a thud splashing blood all over the floor and any thing a meter around it. My mum never seemed más scary. She walked towards me but I took a step back resulting in her to stop. This thing although it looks like my mum can't be my mum
posted by nessienjake
I dreamt thıs ...fan fıctıon whıle ı was ın a aıroplane to Australıa and told ıt to my sıster she hand wrote ıt ın her dıary and know ı estola ıt and typed ıt warnıng dont be too hard she trıed ıt and shes smaller than me.(lol but ı trıed to ımprove ıt and make ıt longer)
CHAPTER 1 ILLUSION
İ was walking quıckly through the clouded place ın the mıddle of the nıght ın L.A
ı had my MP3 open and ı was sıngıng whıle steppıng on the wet grass.
ı thought ı heard somethıng so ı looked back stıll walkıng...ıt was only a cat lookıng for comida ın the garbage.İ...
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posted by surfergal
When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I dicho " here Emmet tu drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger asiento addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do tu think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to his house I could see him standing on his side walk. It
makes me happy when I see him. When I got out he dicho sweet ride sis.
I know it's awesome my favorito! kind of car in the world. He ask if it
had a good base in it and I dicho there's only one way to find that
out. So we hoped in my jeep turned up the música and went for a
drive,then he got a call so I took him to the base. He told me sorry
for having to leave and that he would call later.

I had the best people in my life. People to take care of me people who
actually cared. I went back to the house and of course Jacob and Seth...
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posted by surfergal
When we were done treading water it was about 5 am and we got to dry
off and go eat breakfast I think everyone was hungry. We went to class
afterward for what it seemed like forever but we watched a few videos
and answered some preguntas so of wasn't that bad. Then we all went
for a jog. It was so cold outside that tu could see your breath. We
had ran about 2 miles when I started to have trouble breathing. I was
like great. So I fell behind some of the others and Senior Chief was
pulling up the so I fell back behind him a little bit. He asked “if I
was okay” he dicho “that he could hear...
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"EDDIE! EDDIE! EDDIE!", I said. "First, DON'T CALL ME EDDIE! EVER! segundo what do tu want?", he asked. "I figured out another way to annoy Alice.", I said. "OH. HELL TO THE HELL NO!!!", he screamed."Oh, well I guess Jasper was right. Shame shame.",I started. "What did Jasper."
"Oh nothing really. Just that tu were I mean ARE terrified of a little, tinky, tiny, istsy bitsy pettite...shall I go on?",I interupted. "NO. And I am not afriad of little old..", he started to say."Me?", Alice finished. "No. We were just talking about ...", he dicho unable to finish. "How horrified of lobos he is.",...
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THIS IS NOT THE STORY!!!
I'm currently suffering writers' block. I am open to any ideas.
I was bored the entire week, so I came up with a few chapters, but I promised an explanation in the siguiente chapter, which I didn't have. I may have to skip a few chapters...

I also want to use this as a thank-you to all of my fans and people who I'm a fan of and loved my stories, which is a great boost for my eagerness to write. (Sounds cheesie, I know...)

For those who recently supported -and, frankly, pleaded until I had a headache- my escritura of Renesmee Black's Story:

princesspinkla; thanks for your support,...
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posted by pie-102
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if tu have any ideas tell me

"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
posted by CoolMandyz43
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add más descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. tu can correo electrónico your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to tu and tu can post it o change somethings I did. I would amor to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really editar stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
Edward's Pov.

I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.

"Should we do it now? o later?"

"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."

No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!

Rosalie: Uh...

Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?

Master: Alright, but just her.

Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!

NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry tu guys! I'm overwelming tu guys aren't I? I'm trying to post as many of these as I can. I'm already done with the series and is planning to write the sequel. So I kind of need to post as many as I can. It'll be confusing to put new and old story up at the same time! ^_^

Bella's POV

It has been passed 2 hours since Edward left. Sigh. To try not to make this harder than it needs to be. I mostly minded my own business. But if Aro o Royce come, I follow their lead. But I hated to do it. When I look myself in the mirror. I really looked like a vampire. I got my Blood-red eyes back for...
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posted by Bella11700
With her begging, my cold corazón softened, but I still put up an annoyed face and walked in the park. I was just sitting on the benches looking like I wanted to leave. She went to the big oak árbol and she was looking for something. I knew she was looking for what we wrote on that árbol with a silver ink pen half a año ago. If I remember it right, it said, "Chris and Susan was here, Chris had té and Susan was drinking hot chocolate. Hope Chris and Susan would always remember this day, always loving each other, forever." She was looking around for quite a while, then she came back slowly with...
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i can't get the pregunta many have ask and many have metioned out of my mind. Why did Alice and Jasper leave? Where did they go? Why haven't we got the respuestas we need is all im asking! Hi im Megan and i will be escritura a daily reportar about my opinions about twilight and other things ,And if you're thoose crazy people who can't handle other people opinions drop your laptop o unplug your computer and run forest run! Because tu will hate this.
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say lectura can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything más for this- see ya tomoorow! tu think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....


HOPE tu ENJOY MY NEW articulo SERIES!
(ps. don't worry i am nothing like the sapranos! and my siguiente articulo will be longer!)
 have a good day!
have a good day!
Hey, please comentario and let me know what tu think about the story :D



Chapter two


I started to gain feel of my body again. But then wished i had stayed in the blackness.My neck started burning and so did my wrist and ankles. The fuego was moving its way through my body. Burning everything in its path.
I wondered what i did to go to hell. I couldnt think of anything. I was only 17.
Then i started screaming for anyone to help, but no one came. I was alone. Trapped.
Sometimes i stopped screaming. There wasnt any point. No one was coming.

After what seemed like hours some one came in. As soon as he...
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The history of the Quileute tribe and their connection things beyond the human is documented in ‘Eclipse’ chapter 11. We are told that “there has always been magic in our blood” and that they were “spirit warriors” before they became “shape-shifting” people. The tale of Taha Aki enlaces the tribe for the first time with the wolf, as his spirit shared the body of the animal. This seems to have been the beginning of the possibility of being beyond both simple man and simple wolf.

The descripción of Taha Aki matches what Bella discovers about Jacob and the other werewolves. “He...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
As we run into the woods, a very strong part of me hold me back and yelled at me to comeback home, but i just can't do it, i knew that something was wrong but i had to be with Julius and if my parents didn't like the idea they have to deal with me leaving home

"Rennesme what's wrong amor are tu ok" Julius dicho to me as he envolver, abrigo me from my waist and kiss my forehead. i can't understand this pain in his face like if something were wrong, i don't think is me o that he is worried about me.I think is something más important and i have to find out what it is.

"yes i just worried, about what's going...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
I was half asleep half awake lying on my stomach. I could feel Jason’s cold fingers slowly moving up and down my bare back. He was humming a lullaby but I didn’t know what it was.
“Do tu still want to know my secret?” he asked in a soothing tone. It didn’t help that his voice so soft that it made it harder to stay awake. “Sure.” I dicho moving closer to him.
“I’ve none tu before tu were born.” He paused a second. Probably to make sure I wasn’t going to freak out. “I was friends with your mother before tu were even born before your mother met your father. I met her...
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posted by UchihaYuki
hola Guys, Yuki here.

As some of tu know,
I've been escritura a Twilight FanFiction,
I've so far Written Six Chapters..
And I'm so Happy that Everyone seems to amor
it, I got a message, well a couple asking
when my siguiente Chapter's coming out,

I am in the thinking process,
right now.. I'm not sure what to write in
this chapter, So I wanna know what tu guys
think my siguiente Chapter should be about..
and so on, So just comentario this with what tu think.
I'll be glad to hear all of your opinions,
Or tu could message me if you'd like, either way,
It doesn't matter.

For those of tu who haven't Read my FanFictions...
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posted by AliceHaleCullen
Quotes: On Twilight


"Of course I've read all three books! A few times actually. I finished all three books, and become a fan before I was even cast!"

"Favorite Alice moment? Hmm.... there are a few but a moment that always makes me smile is the whole yellow Porsche bit.... it shows a playful warm connection between Edward and Alice."

"The Cast is amazing! Everyone pretty much 'clicks' which is very nice considering we are family now."

"Jackson Rathbone is an awesome guy! Such a fun person to be around. And I think there is a bit of chemistry with everyone in the cast. We all get along great....
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posted by genyva
ok this s a good one lol i hope tu like it



3. Just A Good Distraction

Why am I still thinking about him? He left me he chose them not us. I don’t know how mom could just accept what he is doing to me. I have been away from him like this before I really want to feel his hot skin on mine. He use to call every night, but he hasn’t called all week and last week he called me twice. So much him for loving me.
    I hadn’t slept well in a few days I looked up and it was 4:32 am may I can go talk to mom shell know what to do to help me get over this.
    “Mom...
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When we reached my inicial mason was crying and reenesme was trying to comfort her little brother.Alice and esme were talking very fast so I only caught little bits and pieces of the conversation .But it seemed that we were going to have to wait till edward and jacob and the other boys came back.while esme and alice were disscussing the subject reenesme and i were trying to comfort mason.At the same time i was worriying about edward I noticed reenesme looked very deep in thought.Then alll of the sudden esme is calling me ,my daughter,and my son to come quickly.Whehn we got there alice looked like she would be crying if she could cry.When I asked her what was wrong all she managed to choke out was Edward.Imediatly I knew something very bad had happened.