Serie Crepúsculo Article: Holiday ch 3

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posted by amy_r_cullen

Edward's pov

"Daddy say somthing, tu haven't dicho anything for about ten miniits i'll read you're mind if tu don't tell me". Renesmee pushed.

"Sorry Renesmee i was just thinking can tu read you're mothers mind". I questioned.

"Errr I think so why, do tu wan't me to". Renesmee replied.

"well yes please, it's just you'r mother only lets me in her head when she wants me there, and the rest of the time I have to guess". I was trying to persuade Renesmee to help me.

"Why do tu want to know what goes on in momma's head". Renesmee pushed.

"I just want to know if she is happy o not o if she worries about things and hides her emotions around me, do tu see me point".

"Yes i do daddy but momma likes her mind hidden". Renesmee defended.

"Okay but please tell me if something is bothering her please".

"okay Daddy but tu have to stop worring about momma shes stronger than tu are daddy, shes stronger than everyone of use, she can protect her self better now...

CarlislesLover, a-jforever and 2 others like this

amy_r_cullen I only did three chapters on Renesmee's first birthday, but i'm gonna write more of the holiday chapters.Hope you guys like it

bella_awesome i dint just like it i it i loved it

amy_r_cullen thankz bella_awesome

amy_r_cullen next chpter up 2nite hopefully

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Another Story Chapter 55

posted by surfergal

That night me and Nathen talked all night, and not once did it cruzar, cruz my mind again that Nathen from what I understood had imprinted on me. It did cruzar, cruz my mind that Nathen never told me where he lived in La Push. It was sorta weird at first but then I totally thought about how he was always coming here, never had to be anywhere, he didn't have anywhere to live.
Once I finally thought about it I had to ask him if I was right but I didn't know how to come about it. I didn't want to be all weird o acuse him of something he wasn't. So I went to Carlisle, o I had that planned. That morning I had...

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just another amor story chapter 10

posted by anna0789

renesmee's pov

i couldn't let nothing happen to Noah o to Jacob it was my fault

i run as fast as i could between noah and jacob because jacob was going to attack Noah and Noah was looking at me so he had no idea

"NOAH WATCH OUT NO JACOB STOP"i yelled

i was just in time to put myself in front of noah just a segundo before jacob attack him

"NO NESSIE!!!!" i heard noah and daddy scream but it was too late jacob's teeth were on my neck

i felt the pain in my neck and then a blow of aire pushing me away toward my dad that was running towards me

the aire must had been noah trying to seguro me, how could...

Character review; Edward Cullen

posted by shannon9396

Edward Cullen by Robert Pattinson

Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, born in Chicago, Illinois June 20, 1901.

His adoptive father, Carlisle Cullen, transformed him into a vampire in 1918 to prevent him from dying of Spanish influenza during epidemic in Chicago, Illinois. Carlisle instilled in him a sense of morality uncommon in most vampires, and central to his way of life is the refusal to consider humans as food.

Edward meets Bella cisne in 2003, a human girl whose thoughts he is unable to read, and whose blood smells overwhelmingly sweet to him. He fights a growing attraction to her, but after saving her life on several occasions,...

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just another amor story chapter 9

posted by anna0789

thanks for the great comentarios im escritura as fast as i can go lol

Noah's pov

While this jacob was in the air i raised a muro from the floor to protect my amor my world
Renesmee
how this Dog could tell me that the girl i amor is his and then attack me while she was so close of course he didn't amor her as much as i do

Nessie was crying her deep brown eyes were so miserable
i had to make this stop seeing her like this was worst than any toruture i've been through
i kissed her in her forhead both her cheeks and at her lips and walk to face ,and kill the dog that had make so miserable my reason for...

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Mary Alice, Chapter 5

posted by teamalice_0

She looked like the pictures, except her hair was shorter now. She looked más like me now that her hair is shorter. But the man siguiente to her..

He looked nice, but I didn't like men. I didn't grow up around them. I was scared of them ,unless I got used to them. Which never happened. Even with my creator, Maria, who had men at her fingertips, I was still scared. They could do tu some harm if they wanted to. And they were stronger than me.

I walked along with the group, comming back to the present. I wasn't scared of human men, they couldn't hurt me, vampiros though, could. Some of the group almost...

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just another amor story chapter 6

posted by anna0789

"And how do tu know renesmee,noah?"
Noah took a step foward i still was holding his hand so i also took a step.

"i am at the same school, when i saw renesmee i thought i was dreaming i had never imagine that they were más like me o seen someone so beautiful "he smile mostrando his dimples at me and i had to smile at that.
grampa carlisle and grandma esm appear from upstairs and rush downstairs to hug me.Then grampa good nature as always

"hello Noah is a plesure to meet you" noah pulled away from my hand to shook gramp's and grandam's hand then he continue with the rest of the family.
my dad's...

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Another Story Chapter 54

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, Nathen was still por my side except this time his head was lying back on the chair. Everyone was still in the same posistion as they were when I woke up the last time except Edward and Bella were there. I was thinking to myself, I wonder if Nathen has even left and Then I looked at Edward and he shook his head no. Poor thing he must be exuasted everyone must be. This is what I was saying before how everyone had to worry about me. I was sad that this happened to me but I was glad that no one else would have to go through it, I mean like I could take the pain but someone else might...

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Mary Alice, Chapter 4

posted by teamalice_0

Thanks tu guys for reading!
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Do tu want to know how tu mover thirty odd kids? Bus.
There wasn't enough room, for me to sit por myself, so I had to sit near this annoying girl.

"Mary!" At least she used my nickname. Usualy everyone says 'Mary Alice' o "Brandon."

So it was off to a better start than most.

I walked down the aisle and sat siguiente to her. SHe started talking about how exciting this was to go on a feil trip, and to a hospital, and ect.

I dicho things back, at the correct times. But part of me didn't want to encourage her, she was...

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Another Story Chapter 49

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, I felt like Emmet o another Vampire was sitting on my shoulder. I can't describe the pain.When my vision was clear Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Jasper were in the room. Carlisle walked over to me and said.
Addi, how do tu feel? He ask.
My shoulder its hurting really badly. I told him.
Okay. Carlisle dicho and then walked out of the room.
Where is Nathen? I ask.
Alice looked at me and said, He's fine.
Oh okay. I said.
I didn't know where he was but I shouldn't have to know where he was as long as he was okay. I didn't want to be so clingy, like always asking what are tu doing, where...

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Creset till Dawn Chapter 2

posted by RATHBONE07

Thanks for all the good feed back:) this ones for tu guys:)

“What’d tu do over the weekend?” Lizzie asked me as we ate our lunch.
“Nothing. Cleaned, did my homework, the usual.” She looked down at her half eaten sandwich, and then carefully put it back in her bag.
“Have tu noticed Ashley lately. She’s gotten so skinny, all the boys are paying to much attention to her, especially David.” She said, that last part a whisper. Lizzie had like David for as long as I could remember, she never really admitted it, but I knew that this really bothered her.
“Its Okay, trust me, he’s...

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another story chapter 40

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, I turned over and looked at my clock and it dicho it was 6 am. I couldn't believe i woke up at six! I decided to get out of bed, I went over to my computer and checked the surf as I usually did. I saw that the waves are going to be great so I put on my bathingsuit and sweat pants and then a sweat camisa, camiseta on. I grabbed my wetsuit out of the colset and went downstairs and ate breakfast. Alice was in the cocina when I walked down.
Hey Addi, Whatcha doing up this early? she ask.
Oh, just the usual surfing all day. I told her.
I ate and then left for the garaje got my bike and board...

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Amore - Ch. 12 - Against the Clock

posted by patrisha727

Just 15 minutes! How can I clear all of my preguntas in just 15 minutes!?!?! I groaned. Angela knows the school better than I do. Then I had an idea.
"Angela?" I asked.
"Yeah?" she asked.
"Is there a biblioteca here?"
"Of course there is. All colleges have a library. Follow me." she said, and we quickened our walking speed, almost running.
"The biblioteca is through these doors." Angela dicho while pointing to the double doors.
As we went in, there were at least 200 shelves of books. I looked around. I would definetely spend most my time in here in the future.

"So what exactly are we looking for?"...

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New Story - Switched

posted by patrisha727

hola tu guys. tu may know me here for the story Evening estrella and Amore. But this is an exclusive story that can only be read on the link I hope tu guys would like to read "Switched". Here's a little summary:

Bella cisne is a usual student in the small town of Forks. A new student comes along, and seemed to be hiding something huge. But Bella is also hiding something. But like forbidden love, they connect. Then on one April's Fool's Day, a mystical prank caused Edward and Bella to change bodies. While Carlisle tries to find the cure, Edward and Bella discovers the secrets behind their personal lives...

I hope tu guys would want to read it. Plz registrarse my spot and read from there! Thx!
BTW: The link of "Switched" is up.

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Zoey M. Cullen Chapter 13

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Some one came up behind and started to put there arms around me just as I flew into the air. I flew up so fast that I landed behing him and wrapped my arms around him. I started laughing, Emmett started laughing sort of but he was saying oww. Bella was trying to sneek up on but I truned around and dicho "Hi Bella!" We all started laughing accept me. Emmett your sorta of squeezing to hard. Emmett was now carriering me acroos the stream. I was starting to get sick cause Emmett was squeezing me too hard. Emmeett, if tu squeeze me any tighter I puke! I was so full, I over did it with the moutain...

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Zoey McDaniel Chapter 10 Seth's POV part 2 sorta

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Seth's POV
I was at the Cullen's house waiting for Zoe to come back home. All the sudden Edward jumped up. Edward started panicking, Bella grabbed his hand trying to make him stand still. Edward, what is wrong?- Bella ket asking. It's Zoey, she has been shot! I was freaking out. What do tu mean Zoey has been shot. I asked Edward, I couldn't grasped it. Collin is will be here in 3 minutes, Bella get on the phone with everyone. I have to go set up everything. He ran up stairs, I folloed him. What can I do?? I asked in a worried tone. I don't know. Bella came into the room and hannded him the...

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Zoey McDaniel Chapter 9 Part 2

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Before we went inicial we went to the store. I needed to fix my self up before. I was also scared of vampire bites. tu think I would be use to vampire bites since I have been biten twice already. "okay, tu need some gauz, neosporn and some guaz tape Seth dicho as he was hitting his finger with his other finger". Do tu think the come in colores I asked. "I don't know but we can look for some Seth said". We found the guaz. What color should we get I asked excitedly? tu mean tu not us. dicho Seth. The blood that was dripping down my leg was now drying. Here is some lima, cal green quaz Seth point...

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Amore - Ch. 7 - A Visitor

posted by patrisha727

one for today! ^_^

I unpacked my things in about 20 minutes. There wasn't so many things to unpack in the first place. I only brought my clothes, some of my books, and toiletries. After I was done, I looked out of the window again, and saw the skyline of Juneau's sunset. It was beautiful up in the north. I missed inicial too. There was a computer siguiente to my bed, so I decided to turn it on and see if Renee sent any emails. Alice was looking in her closet for some outfits to wear tommorrow. I ignored her.

The computer started up about 10 times faster than my actual computer. I smiled when I saw...

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amor Bites Chapter 3

posted by TwilightNerd6

Sorry this one is up late ive been busy with Netball training and stuff like that.
Sorry it's a bit long.

"You know how I dicho that I would be back in five days?"He asked.
"Yes?"I dicho confused.
"There's a change of plans, were going to be back a little earlier than we planned."He explained to me softly.
"What do tu mean?"I asked. I felt like escaping but Alice and Rosalie would catch me so there really was no point.
"That means since your missing me so much, were on our way home."He anwsered my pregunta like he was an angel.
"You are?"I dicho with my thoughts all messed up.
"Yes, were running back...

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Chapter Ten: White cordón, encaje

posted by UchihaYuki

Sorry it took me so extremely long to post this chapter, I've been and still on a trip with my family[ugh] but anyways here it is <3

-Yuki<3

“Jaake…Wake up” Nessie dicho sweetly as she kissed his cheek trying to wake him up “mmm, What time is it Ness?” he mumbled into his pillow, she grinned “It’s 7:30am… I’ve been up since 6, Mommy, Alice and I are going shopping, so I just thought I’d wake tu up and tell tu good morning and that I amor you..” Jacob flopped from his side to lay on his back so he could see Nessie, he smiled at the sight of her sweet smiling face and...

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This could be the end (Chapter 3 The Cult)

posted by Edwardlover93

before I start I just want to say thank tu to my friend Alicelover92 and also princesspinkla for helping me with my writers block thank tu and also Stassja thank tu for your brill comentario :)

Chapter 3 The cult

“What tu on about.?” I was shaking with anger. How dare she say what I am and what I'm not. “forget you”
I walked away from her, suddenly James was in front of me, smirking at me. He had a evil glint in his eyes then he slowly vanished.
I had to get out of here.
By the time I come back it will be to late. I was walking down the empty calle the sun had set already. How long have...