This is what I wanted the vision to be like instead of the slo-mo running... it was very good, yes, but this is my own version which i wrote long before new moon was released ;) hope you'll like it (it's written in the form of a script o so to speak)
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We zoom into Aro's eyes which turns into ripples of water, a lake. We follow the water and see the reflection of Edward standing on the apuntalar, costa looking out over the lake.
He hears a noise, a crack of a branch, just as he is about to turn around to investigate we see – Bella wraps her arms around Edwards waist. He laughs quietly and turns his head around to kiss her.
Now we see Bellas face, a vampire with pale skin and golden eyes. They kiss passionately and she smiles at him.
Suddenly the clouds in the sky separate and a stream of sunlight comes through.
Bella and Edward both sparkle in the sunlight. They look at eachother with amor in their eyes. Bella puts her arms around Edwards neck and quickly kisses him goodbye.
"Bella: I’ll meet tu at the house."
Suddenly she is gone and we see Edward smiling, as he continues to gaze over the lake. He picks up a rock and tosses it over the water – the rock goes very far
(and with a camera placed in the middle of the lake with Edward blurry in the background)
– the stone lands in the water. We zoom into the rippled water and fade back into Aro's eyes.
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We zoom into Aro's eyes which turns into ripples of water, a lake. We follow the water and see the reflection of Edward standing on the apuntalar, costa looking out over the lake.
He hears a noise, a crack of a branch, just as he is about to turn around to investigate we see – Bella wraps her arms around Edwards waist. He laughs quietly and turns his head around to kiss her.
Now we see Bellas face, a vampire with pale skin and golden eyes. They kiss passionately and she smiles at him.
Suddenly the clouds in the sky separate and a stream of sunlight comes through.
Bella and Edward both sparkle in the sunlight. They look at eachother with amor in their eyes. Bella puts her arms around Edwards neck and quickly kisses him goodbye.
"Bella: I’ll meet tu at the house."
Suddenly she is gone and we see Edward smiling, as he continues to gaze over the lake. He picks up a rock and tosses it over the water – the rock goes very far
(and with a camera placed in the middle of the lake with Edward blurry in the background)
– the stone lands in the water. We zoom into the rippled water and fade back into Aro's eyes.
and also please write comments. ^_^ thanks for lectura it.
bella i need tu to know
I will never be a foe
even if tu go back to him
and all them even after
us we were best friends
but i hope one día the wound mends
but tu hurt me so bad
i was so sad
i almost never got over tu
but now that i see you'r haveing a baby
do tu mind if she loves me because i want her
to be my renessme.
and she replaces tu and all tu used to do she is so sweet and when she talks to me I amor her
and sure i'll take care of her because she belongs with me she is my renessme.