I stood up, shrugging Jakes arm off my shoulder. I couldn’t be around anyone when they were actuación like this, especially not Jacob. Why would dad be right? I loved Jacob and he loved my right? That’s how imprinting works.
“Renesmee.” Jacob called after me.
I ignored him. Did he really think that? When I was younger I always dreamed that when I graduated, Jacob would ask me to marry him. That we would be happy together, for eternity. That we would have our own children and our own house. But life isn’t a fairy tale, o something tu can just plan out in front of you. It’s something much undecided. And my little dream from when I was younger seemed very unlikely now.
“Ness, are tu going home?” Jacob asked from behind me.
“I don’t know.” I dicho truthfully.
“Please do. Your mum will be extremely upset if tu don’t.” Oh so it was my mum that would be upset now. He didn’t care. He came down here for Mum’s benefit?
He knew what I was thinking.
“Oh come on Ness, tu know I didn’t mean it like that. I didn’t want tu to get hurt either.” Oh yes and I was totally ment to believe that wasn’t I!
“Renesmee, look at me.” Jacob dicho grabbing my wrist and twisting me around.
His eyes were soft, and I tried very hard to keep my glare at him. He made it so difficult to be angry at him.
“You know I amor you. But I want what’s best for you.”
“Being with tu is what’s best for me.” I said. And that I was certain about.
“But it might not be.” He dicho again. Why did he keep saying things like that? It was just being stupid.
I turned away from him.
“YOU OBVIOUSLY DON’T KNOW WHAT’S BEST FOR ME THEN.” I shouted and then ran home.
I curled up on my cama crying. Dad and Mum were now hunting as far as I was aware and I didn’t think Jacob would follow me.
“Nessie can I come in?” Auntie Alice asked.
I sniffed, sitting up and Auntie Alice came in.
“I know how tu feel Nessie.” She dicho hugging me. “I can assure tu I would feel the same way if I was told I couldn’t be with Jasper because my grades were bad. There your responsibility not his. And tu shouldn’t be disciplined in that way. I may not know a lot about Imprinting but, I’m going to guess it’s pretty hard for tu two to be apart. I mean I hate being away from Jazz, but with tu two...Let’s just say it has to hurt, doesn’t it?” I nodded.
Aunt Alice understood better than I thought. She understood better than anyone.
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“Renesmee.” Jacob called after me.
I ignored him. Did he really think that? When I was younger I always dreamed that when I graduated, Jacob would ask me to marry him. That we would be happy together, for eternity. That we would have our own children and our own house. But life isn’t a fairy tale, o something tu can just plan out in front of you. It’s something much undecided. And my little dream from when I was younger seemed very unlikely now.
“Ness, are tu going home?” Jacob asked from behind me.
“I don’t know.” I dicho truthfully.
“Please do. Your mum will be extremely upset if tu don’t.” Oh so it was my mum that would be upset now. He didn’t care. He came down here for Mum’s benefit?
He knew what I was thinking.
“Oh come on Ness, tu know I didn’t mean it like that. I didn’t want tu to get hurt either.” Oh yes and I was totally ment to believe that wasn’t I!
“Renesmee, look at me.” Jacob dicho grabbing my wrist and twisting me around.
His eyes were soft, and I tried very hard to keep my glare at him. He made it so difficult to be angry at him.
“You know I amor you. But I want what’s best for you.”
“Being with tu is what’s best for me.” I said. And that I was certain about.
“But it might not be.” He dicho again. Why did he keep saying things like that? It was just being stupid.
I turned away from him.
“YOU OBVIOUSLY DON’T KNOW WHAT’S BEST FOR ME THEN.” I shouted and then ran home.
I curled up on my cama crying. Dad and Mum were now hunting as far as I was aware and I didn’t think Jacob would follow me.
“Nessie can I come in?” Auntie Alice asked.
I sniffed, sitting up and Auntie Alice came in.
“I know how tu feel Nessie.” She dicho hugging me. “I can assure tu I would feel the same way if I was told I couldn’t be with Jasper because my grades were bad. There your responsibility not his. And tu shouldn’t be disciplined in that way. I may not know a lot about Imprinting but, I’m going to guess it’s pretty hard for tu two to be apart. I mean I hate being away from Jazz, but with tu two...Let’s just say it has to hurt, doesn’t it?” I nodded.
Aunt Alice understood better than I thought. She understood better than anyone.
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hola ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
My awesome 'other':
Edward tu are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any chocolate cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, tu know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
Edward tu are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any chocolate cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, tu know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
