Serie Crepúsculo Article: 5 things wrong with Twilight and New moon.

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5 things wrong with Twilight and New moon.

posted by smileyfaceddude

Right, before tu go all crazy and twilight extreme on me, I would like tu to know that I am a Twilight fanatic too, and if tu don't believe me, i had a go at Mandapanda because I THOUGHT she was a Twilight HATER! But thats all over now.
en general, general I amor Twilight and I do really mean love.
OK, lets get on with the list.

1. Kirsten Stewart. Some people may disagree, but
I think that she is a really bad actress.
If tu disagree please comment.

2. In Twilight, Victoria has the
wrong colour Hair.
In the book, Victoria has ginger hair,
but in the film, she has blonde?
This could be wrong but I am definate that
she has blonde hair in the film.

3. In New moon, The besar scenes quite graphic
and that is just wrong anyway. I am not saying
that besar is wrong but bella and edward
besar is kinda sick.

4. In New moon, when Bella is running at Edward,
her boobs are flying everywhere! AHHHHHHHHH!
Wrong. It looks like they might comeout at
anytime.

5. In both films, Rosalie, is kinda ugly, I mean in the book, Stephanie Meyer builds her up to be like this stunning angel, but she is, not ugly, but not how Stephanie Meyer decribes her.

As I said, on the whole, I amor all of Twilight saga films, but some things are wrong and well i just want to see if anyone agrees with me. Please comment. Thanks for lectura and please check out my club 'Twilight Hotties'!

twilightfrk, Guste_LT and 1 other like this

smileyfaceddude Sorry about the mistakes.

Hellohoudini Well since these are your opinions I wont argue with you except on one point. Victoria's hair wasnt blonde in Twilight ...it was red..true a very muted red and that is why they changed it in New Moon..but red none the less.

smileyfaceddude Thank you for the comment. I thought I was wrong some how. Do you agree with me on these comments? I didn't want to seem negitive.

brij8 thought i was the only one who noticed the banging(bella's boobs flyin everywere)& i totally agree kristen,no offence, but naaa

smileyfaceddude Thanks, gotta say, Love these comments! :) Thank you

Guste_LT every time i watch New Moon, i cant take my eyes off of it... it's just so 'In-Your-Face'! no offence inteded to anyone

smileyfaceddude I know man I'm drawn to it. It's nature but puh-leaz

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Cold Roses--Chp. 14: Lethal Independance

posted by Summer_Leanne

I'm so so happy tu all are enjoying this story! Your comments, like always, are so sweet and loving. Thanks for lectura and for all your generous support. amor tu all!! Enjoy!! :]
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Lethal Independence
It was 10pm before Chloe drifted off to sleep in Summer’s arms. Athe and Chloe fussed over Summer every segundo once they found out she was injured. Summer was able to easily heal her bruise, but she didn’t understand why she was still being coddled like a feeble infant. As soon as Summer laid Chloe in her cuna and assured Athe that she was fine,...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 5~ [NINE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Five
BuffyFaithfan1
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[NINE]
    "You guys have a Weapons Master?" I asked.
    Tabra was getting dressed, and I was in the bathroom getting dressed while Jerek was on the otherside of the bathroom door doing the same.
    "Yes." He dicho back. "She knows everything: where they came from, who made them, how long they've been in stores, out of date, what group, such as the romans o the dutch, they come from. She is such a good person to have on a time like this."
    "I...

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A youtube Script(episode five)

posted by moolah

*episode five*
*A checkup for…*
Alice’s P.O.V:
*thinking*
I was barfing all the time.
Every time I did it hurt so badly.
I couldn’t take it any longer.
I ran into Carlisle’s office without knocking.
*done thinking*
Alice: *walks in* Carlisle I need tu to help m-*vomits all over carpet*
Carlisle: *runs over to her* Alice, are tu all right?
Alice: *shakes head ‘no’*
Carlisle: Honey, sit down. Do tu think you’re going to do it again, sweetie?
Alice: *nods*
Carlisle: *runs and comes back up in 5 seconds* Here’s a bucket.
Alice: Thanks. *a segundo later vomits*
Carlisle: Alice, did tu bite Bella?...

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A youtube Script(episode four)Help!

posted by moolah

*episode four*
*HELP!*
Bella’s P.O.V:
*thinking*
I felt really shaky
And really scared
Alice kept on laughing wickedly
I kept on screaming
*done thinking*
Alice: Bella, tu had your chance-you WILL die now.
Bella: *passes out*
Alice: *goes back to normal* BELLA!
Bella: *bleeding everywhere*
Alice: *Screams* HELP!!!!!!!! HELP!!!!!! *kicks down the door*
Edward: *runs toward her* ALICE! WHAT THE HELL DID tu DO?
Alice: *vomits* Omigod. *looks at the vomit* Edward…*there is blood in the vomit*
Edward: *looks down at the vomit* Ali…
Alice: *runs out*
Edward: *looks down at Bella* BELLA! *picks her up and...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 5~ [ONE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Five
BuffyFaithfan1
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[PREVIOUSLY]
Hi, my name is Cyd, short for Cydnee, and one día while I was grocery shopping, a former member of the Death Clan of the Fallen threw a cuchillo at my head. I ducked behind my cart, and ran out of the store once I saw the cuchillo fly into a bunch of egg cartons. I went home, told my friend Tabra about it, and he came rushing over. He helped me get out of the aftershock feeling, and when we were eating chicken sandwhiches, mine was coated in poison. We then went to his apartment,...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 3~ [FOURTEEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
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[FOURTEEN]
(ATTENTION: THE FOLLOWING PART OF THIS CHAPTER IS IN HAUS'S POINT OF VIEW, THANKS, AND tu MAY NOW CONTINUE READING)
    I picked up the phone, dialed a number, pressed CALL and waited for an answer.
    And I got one.
    "Hello?" A voice on the other line picked up and said.
    "Hello, Kyle, this is Haus."
    "Hey, Haus. What brings tu calling us all the way here?"
    "My men are dead."...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 3~ [ELEVEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
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[ELEVEN]
    "Or we could do that." Jerek dicho once our lips parted.
    I was high off of that kiss. But, just briefly.
    "Yea." I said, not knowing really exactly what I was saying.
    Jerek then put his lips back to mine, and this time, it wasn't a surprise.
~~~~~~~~~~
    THE siguiente MORNING: I woke up on the lower bunk, under Tabra, and I was glad I went to cama earlier then I thought I was. I needed that sleep.
    "Morning,"...

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the new Begining ch1

posted by sh0rtiinedward

No one is looking at you, i promise myself but deep, deep inside of me i knew that everyone in Forks was staring at me.

"Mmmm Charlie, can we just go eat at home, i don't want to go to your favorito! Restaurant please?" i ask him with my little perrito, cachorro eyes."Nessi come on tu never go out of the woods, now is the time please try?"
well charlie was right but i wasen't hungry anyways i when hunting with my aunt Rosalie 2 days ago, but i will do it just for grandpa.
"Here we are, My number One Restaurant"Charlie dicho very exited. " yeah cena time" i reaply as we started walking to the door, everyone...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. Two~ [THREE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
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[THREE]
    "Let's take her to the Room." Tabra dicho and Haus lead the way.
    "I counted seven in that room," Tabra whispered. I nodded.
    "Welcome to my new, refurbished Room." There were weapons along the walls, and there were even a few tortured people laying on the ground almost dead. It reeked of fish. Ew. "Put Cydnee in the chair."
    The chair lay in the middle of the Room, and it was blood stained, with a bullet hole in the back of it....

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Stephenie Meyer not turned on por vampires.........

posted by Hellohoudini

Per Stephenie during a fan interview 6/22/2010

Question..."What about Midnight Sun?"

Anwser..."I know that’s what everyone cares about. I also know that the right answer would be for me to say “Oh yah, it’s done! And it’ll be out siguiente month!” But that’s not true. It’s also not true that I’ve got a ton of work done on it, and that’s what I’m working on. What’s true is that I’m really burned out on vampires. And, I don’t want to write it badly. So I want to wait until I’m excited about the material again, and I’m excited about Edward, and that it’s something that’s...

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Renn and Micah's LIfe Chapter 3.(A Continuation of Renn and Jake's Life)

posted by WritenOnTheSand

Nessie Black

I sat at the cocina counter, gazing at the ring on my finger. I'm not ready to take off the ring Jake gave me, not yet. I know if Will sees it that he will be frustrated with me, but my corazón still can't let go of Jake.

It has been the hardest thing for me to make Will think I amor him. Kisses with no meaning, words of love, that on the inside I am taking back. It is like Jake is stuck to me. Imprinting is really powerful, because it is sure causing me physical strain.

I look over and see Micah appear. He is wearing his cute blue feety pajamas. He also has his treasured blanky in his hand....

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A youtube Script(episode three)Dead Soon

posted by moolah

A youtube Script:
Episode Three:
*Dead Soon*
(Jasper’s P.O.V):
*Thinking*
I never thought about how short a life span is.
And Bella’s was very short.
Mine was everlasting.
Forever.
I couldn’t be trampled.
I wished I could.
And I certainly do not blame Edward for wanting me dead.
I would want me dead too.

(Black Screen)
*Reminder: this is two days after the accident*
Alice’s P.O.V:
Bella: Ever since the accident Edward’s been freaking out.
Alice: Well I’ve been *vomits*
Bella: Ali what’s wrong with you? *worried*
Alice: I’m not sure but *vomits*
Bella: tu have got to Carlisle. *pats her back*
Alice:...

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True Lies,Teen Girls(Chapter Eight)

posted by moolah

Bella’s P.O.V:
I pulled up my hair. Then took off my dress, only leaving my bra and panties on. The sexy one’s Ali bought me. About 10 minutos later I heard my cell phone ringing, “Fireflies” por Owl City. It was Alice. I immediately answered it, “Alice!” Someone chuckled, “No,” I frowned, “Edward?” “No, but its Victoria.” I screamed, “WHAT DO tu WANT WITH THEM?” I started putting on my jeans, and put on my tank top. “I want you. I want to kill you-you killed James, and if tu run, I have a army of newborns and they will kill you, Bella.” She snarled, “Victoria,...

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a youtube script(episode two)Die,Live,and Beg

posted by moolah

Episode Two:
*Die, Live, and Beg*
(Black Screen)
Edward’s POV:
Ever guessed why things fall?
Or die?
Or are ruined por one slip?
I never did because I was the predator.
A lion was no match for me.
I could smash it to pieces.
Until…
Bella came along.
Her birthday was my birthday.
I gripped her hand.
Kissed her cheek.
And then, let her fall.
Hard.
(Back to the room)
Edward: *standing beside Bella*
Bella: *opening gift* Ow. *gets paper cut* Paper cut.
(You can hear a sound such as blood pulsing in ears)
Edward: *pushes Bella back*
Jasper: *runs toward them*
Bella: *falls against the table* *glass breaks*
Edward: *growls*...

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a beautiful death part 11

posted by xroylex

i walked over to the voises slowly not wanting to but knowing i must
"jane" i nodded at her
"rensmee its good to see tu again well after tu broke my brothers corazón that is" she snarled ok i saw her brother alec for what 7 months and its been almost a año god she needed to get over it. i rolled my eyes.
"jane that was a año hace carnt you-" she wasnt looking a me she was glaring at the frozen figue of jacob who had stopped shaking i looked at him trying to get him to run away far. and dont look back but he just started to shake just a little. i turned back to jane who was now glaring at me....

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Alice and jasper división, división, split chapter 1

posted by d_s_a_c

Alice was out with Bella and Nessie and then she has this wierd feeling in her stomach so she stops and says to bella."I think we should go inicial niw Im meen like right now"
"Why we can go back later whats wrong with you."
" erm....I feel like jasper is doing something he shouldnt be doing."
"oh well lets got then."
Bella and nessie and Alice all ran to the the cullens house as fast as they could.Bella went to go and see Edward with nessie and I went upstairs to go and see something IWalked in my room and I found Jasper and Rosealie Making out......

Iscream at the parte superior, arriba of my lungs and start throwing things at them both then everyone runs upstairs and says " wgats wrong.Whats happened.Are yo hurt"
I replay with
"Yea Im hurt because i have just walked in my bedroom and found Jasper and Rosea lie making out "
" WHAT"
"yea jasper this is for you"
[Alice slaps Jasper across the face]
Alice runs off and then bella and Esme follow her.

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a beautiful death part 7

posted by xroylex

so when i stumbled of the plane i was shocked to see grandad stood siguiente to someone who looked old but timeless at the same time and siguiente to him was...
oh!!! jacob!!?? what he looked the same
"nessie!" charlie called as i ran straight in to his arms "this is billy" he pointed to the timeless fellow siguiente to him then he started to say and tu remember .... but i threw myself in his arms felling like a complete idiot but also never wanting to let go and for some reason he seamed like he felt the same way
"do tu two allready know?" billy asked
"well sort of the last tiem i was here we sort of spent...

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a beautiful death part 4

posted by xroylex

"momma someone wants to talk to you" i told her better give her a little warnining
"ok darling"
grandma renne held out her hand for the phone and hasterly i gave it to her
"hello bella" i tried to listern to what mums reaction to her own mums song
i could here her breath in as she recognis the voise
"mum!?" she almost cried
"hello hunny i wonted to speak to tu and hear your voise to see if your allright and now i know i guess .."
"mum wait i wonted tu to know that i wanted to tell tu but thing i mean life is compliscated at the moment tu see"...
i could hear her debate weather o not to tell...

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Team Romeo?

posted by Hellohoudini

When discussing about which movie he will be his pick for Best Movie at the 2010 mtv Movie Awards, the singer/actor reveals that he is up for a role in 'The Twilight Saga's Breaking Dawn'.

Percy "Romeo" Miller, who is best known por his stage name Lil' Romeo, is going to be a part of the "Twilight Saga" series. When interviewed por mtv News recently, the 20-year-old singer/actor gushed that he is in talks for a role in the final installment of "Twilight Saga", "The Twilight Saga's Breaking Dawn".

Asked which movie is his pick for Best Movie at the 2010 mtv Movie Awards, Romeo spilled, "The one...

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Tears of Love: Chapter Five: Complications

posted by Andressa_Weld

All I saw was Ashley’s hands in Nikki’s face and then Nikki’s head hit a stone and she screamed. There was too much blood in the floor, Nikki was bleeding más and more, people started coming, Kristen crossed the crowd and slapped Ashley
- Bitch! Are tu crazy?? tu could have killed her! Are tu insane?
- I’m sorry ok? She kissed my boyfriend. I’m sorry! I don’t know Kristen I’m so sorry! I really like Nikki!! But I was so mad! – Ashley was crying, I’m sure she didn’t wanna hurt anybody!
- Kristen and Ashley stop!! – I said, Kristen turned around and left and Ashley looked...