First off, I, of course do not own any rights to any of the characters in this FanFic, it's merely a 'What if?' senario.
The Story: It's basicly Twilight and New Moon, up until chapter ten, The Meadow, where the 'What if?' comes in. I'm going to write a page o so from the actual chapter aswell. Try not to be harsh, I'm just bored. XP
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"Me?" I squeaked.
He shook his head and chuckled. "I know, it seems a little backward to me, too. But James was her mate, and your Edward killed him."
Even here, on the point of death, his name tore against my unhealed wounds like a serrated edge.
Laurant was oblivious to my reaction. "She thought it más appropriate to kill tu than Edward-fair turn about, mate for mate. She asked me to get the lay of the land for her, so to speak. I didn't imagine tu would be so easy to get to. So maybe her plan was flawed-apparently it wouldn't be the revenge she imagined, since tu must not mean very much to him if he left tu here unprotected."
Another blow, another tear through my chest.
Laurant's weight shifted slightly, and I stumbled another step back.
He frowned. "I suppose she'll be angry, all the same."
"Then why not wait for her?" I choked out.
A mischievous grin rearanged his features. "Well, you've caught me at a bad time, Bella. I didn't come to this place on Victoria's mission-I was hunting. I'm quite thirsty, and tu do smell...simply mouthwatering."
Laurant looked at me with approval, as if he meant it as a compliment.
"Threaten him," the beautiful delusion ordered, his voice distorted with dread.
"He'll know it was you," I whispered obediently. "You won't get away with this."
"And why not?" Laurant's smile widened. He gazed around the small opening in the trees. "The scent will wash away with the siguiente rain. No one will find your body-you'll simply go missing, like so many, many other humans. There's no reason for Edward to think of me, if he cares enough to investigate. This is nothing personal, let me assure you, Bella. Just thirst."
"Beg," my hallucination begged.
"Please," I gasped.
Laurant shook his head, his face kind. "Look at it this way, Bella. You're very lucky I was the one to find you."
"Am I?" I mouthed, faltering another step back.
Laurant followed, lithe and graceful.
Why did I always have to be the victom? Why couldn't I, just once be something feared? But the only way I could do that...
"Yes," he assured me. "I'll be very quick. tu won't feel a thing, I promise. Oh, I'll lie to Victoria about that later, naturally, just to placate her. But if tu knew what she had planned for you, Bella..." He shook his head with a slow movement, almost as if in discust. "I swear you'd be thanking me for this."
"Don't say it Bella!" his voice ordered me. I knew I shouldn't. It wouldn't work, but I wanted it so badly, and it would all be over soon anyway...What did I have to lose? I already knew the answer to that. Because I had already lost everything I could lose.
"W-why...do tu have to...kill me?" I asked, hoping that he would pause long enough to at least reject my request before killing me.
"Bella," he seemed disapointed. "Haven't we just been over this?"
I paused. I tried desperately to get out the words that might slow him, but my lips seemed frozen with fear.
"Yes...but what I mean is...why do tu have to drain all of my blood? Why couldn't tu just feed...but leave me alive?"
My pregunta definately caught him off-guard. Confusion replaced the malace on his face. Then his expression turned slightly sarcastic.
"What?" he asked, seeming amused.
"What I mean is...-" The voice in my head was growling and snarling furiously.
Laurant cut me off.
"You want me to turn tu into a vampire?" Yes he was definately amused.
"No! Bella, run!" The voice commanded, but I didn't listen to him now.
"Y-yes." I dicho in a small voice.
To Be Continued...
The Story: It's basicly Twilight and New Moon, up until chapter ten, The Meadow, where the 'What if?' comes in. I'm going to write a page o so from the actual chapter aswell. Try not to be harsh, I'm just bored. XP
Page 240
"Me?" I squeaked.
He shook his head and chuckled. "I know, it seems a little backward to me, too. But James was her mate, and your Edward killed him."
Even here, on the point of death, his name tore against my unhealed wounds like a serrated edge.
Laurant was oblivious to my reaction. "She thought it más appropriate to kill tu than Edward-fair turn about, mate for mate. She asked me to get the lay of the land for her, so to speak. I didn't imagine tu would be so easy to get to. So maybe her plan was flawed-apparently it wouldn't be the revenge she imagined, since tu must not mean very much to him if he left tu here unprotected."
Another blow, another tear through my chest.
Laurant's weight shifted slightly, and I stumbled another step back.
He frowned. "I suppose she'll be angry, all the same."
"Then why not wait for her?" I choked out.
A mischievous grin rearanged his features. "Well, you've caught me at a bad time, Bella. I didn't come to this place on Victoria's mission-I was hunting. I'm quite thirsty, and tu do smell...simply mouthwatering."
Laurant looked at me with approval, as if he meant it as a compliment.
"Threaten him," the beautiful delusion ordered, his voice distorted with dread.
"He'll know it was you," I whispered obediently. "You won't get away with this."
"And why not?" Laurant's smile widened. He gazed around the small opening in the trees. "The scent will wash away with the siguiente rain. No one will find your body-you'll simply go missing, like so many, many other humans. There's no reason for Edward to think of me, if he cares enough to investigate. This is nothing personal, let me assure you, Bella. Just thirst."
"Beg," my hallucination begged.
"Please," I gasped.
Laurant shook his head, his face kind. "Look at it this way, Bella. You're very lucky I was the one to find you."
"Am I?" I mouthed, faltering another step back.
Laurant followed, lithe and graceful.
Why did I always have to be the victom? Why couldn't I, just once be something feared? But the only way I could do that...
"Yes," he assured me. "I'll be very quick. tu won't feel a thing, I promise. Oh, I'll lie to Victoria about that later, naturally, just to placate her. But if tu knew what she had planned for you, Bella..." He shook his head with a slow movement, almost as if in discust. "I swear you'd be thanking me for this."
"Don't say it Bella!" his voice ordered me. I knew I shouldn't. It wouldn't work, but I wanted it so badly, and it would all be over soon anyway...What did I have to lose? I already knew the answer to that. Because I had already lost everything I could lose.
"W-why...do tu have to...kill me?" I asked, hoping that he would pause long enough to at least reject my request before killing me.
"Bella," he seemed disapointed. "Haven't we just been over this?"
I paused. I tried desperately to get out the words that might slow him, but my lips seemed frozen with fear.
"Yes...but what I mean is...why do tu have to drain all of my blood? Why couldn't tu just feed...but leave me alive?"
My pregunta definately caught him off-guard. Confusion replaced the malace on his face. Then his expression turned slightly sarcastic.
"What?" he asked, seeming amused.
"What I mean is...-" The voice in my head was growling and snarling furiously.
Laurant cut me off.
"You want me to turn tu into a vampire?" Yes he was definately amused.
"No! Bella, run!" The voice commanded, but I didn't listen to him now.
"Y-yes." I dicho in a small voice.
To Be Continued...
10. Never use English around him – instead, bark.
9. Call him a el espacio heater.
8. Tell him that perros make good pets, not good partners.
7. Ask him if he has RSVPed to the wedding yet.
6. Inform him that real men sparkle.
5. Walk up to him and claim tu have imprinted. Say tu amor him and demand his paw in marriage.
4. Tell him that even though he may run at a boiling 108.9 degrees, Bella doesn’t find him hot.
3. Inquire as to how Leah is… and if he dreams about Sam the way Leah dreams about Bella.
2. Ask him if he likes to do things… doggy style.
And the Number One way to annoy Jacob Black?
1. Make him a day-by-day flip calendar, counting down the amount of time Bella will remain human.
Source: link
9. Call him a el espacio heater.
8. Tell him that perros make good pets, not good partners.
7. Ask him if he has RSVPed to the wedding yet.
6. Inform him that real men sparkle.
5. Walk up to him and claim tu have imprinted. Say tu amor him and demand his paw in marriage.
4. Tell him that even though he may run at a boiling 108.9 degrees, Bella doesn’t find him hot.
3. Inquire as to how Leah is… and if he dreams about Sam the way Leah dreams about Bella.
2. Ask him if he likes to do things… doggy style.
And the Number One way to annoy Jacob Black?
1. Make him a day-by-day flip calendar, counting down the amount of time Bella will remain human.
Source: link
10. Tell him he looks like a creepy stalker rapist.
9. Inform him, as politely as possible, that he has grizzly in his teeth.
8. Ask who wears the pants in his relationship.
7. Try to stab him through the corazón with a stake.
6. Tell him brawn is out, scrawn is in.
5. Inquires as to how he feels to be the least-liked Cullen male.
4. When he is around, wonder aloud what Rosalie calls him in bed.
3. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with that Jeep.
2. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with those muscles..
And the Number One way to annoy Emmett Cullen?
1. When he denies the above two claims, respond with “That’s not what Rosalie saaaaaid!”
Source: link
9. Inform him, as politely as possible, that he has grizzly in his teeth.
8. Ask who wears the pants in his relationship.
7. Try to stab him through the corazón with a stake.
6. Tell him brawn is out, scrawn is in.
5. Inquires as to how he feels to be the least-liked Cullen male.
4. When he is around, wonder aloud what Rosalie calls him in bed.
3. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with that Jeep.
2. Ask if he is overcompensating for something with those muscles..
And the Number One way to annoy Emmett Cullen?
1. When he denies the above two claims, respond with “That’s not what Rosalie saaaaaid!”
Source: link
The respuestas Feature is meant for FACTUAL preguntas only. I have seen other spots and it seems to me that the Twilight Spot is a perfect example for wrongly placed questions.
I'm just stating a concern and hope that i helped a small bit. Here is a great articulo por Cinders, from the fanpop Etiquette spot that does a great job explaining the respuestas Feature.
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Thanks for listening to me rant :p
I think we amor it because its romantic and we all wish we had some one like Edward Cullen to swoop over and take us away that would be great,right? Personally I like the REAL Robert Pattinson más than the charecter and would amor to meet him I mean who wouldnt but I dont know about tu but I for one beleive in what most people dont beleive in, such as vampires,faries,mermaids tu know stuff such as that,call me crazy but I really do even I cant explain why I amor that Stephanie Meyers created this story I amor this story like no other why I amor it so much is a mystery to me.
Bigger than the latest Indiana Jones. Bigger than the biggest James Bond. That's how big Twilight was yesterday.
The $37 million vampire flick, expected to have a killer opening day, had a monster opening day, grossing an estimated $35 million, Exhibitor Relations reported. One-fifth of that gross, o $7 million, came from Friday midnight screenings.
The box-office tracking firm dicho a $75 million Friday-Sunday gross was now a possibility. Going into Friday, $60 million was considered the movie's best-case scenario.
When the counting's done, Twilight's Friday take may rank as the 14th o 15th biggest opener of all time, having surpassed the debuts of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull ($25 million) and Quantum of Solace ($27 million), to name two reciente blockbusters.
Bolt, the animated talking-dog movie, was curbed por Twilight, grossing $7 million on Friday, Exhibitor Relations said.
I've been fanpopping since september if I am correct. At first I was a stranger to this site, and spot. But, soon enough I have grown fond tu ladies here. I think it is awesome that I found girls who are exactly like me. OBESSESED with the Twilight Series! Everyone gets exciting when the thought, o mentioned anything that has to do with the series! I amor it, and it makes me happy that I am not alone when it comes to being obssesd with these series of books, being I've been lectura the series since 2005 it was hard to find girls like me. Everyone one of tu ladies are amazing, smart, funny, and just really neat to talk about Twilight because tu girls are awesome, and wouldn't trade any other fans on any other fansite for tu ladies! I just amor tu all! you're awesome!
sometimes it can get a little cold hearted, but then again everyone is no great and nice!
tu ladies are great!!!
amor tu all!!!
Gileygirl =D
sometimes it can get a little cold hearted, but then again everyone is no great and nice!
tu ladies are great!!!
amor tu all!!!
Gileygirl =D