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ok guys a really long one here. Hope tu enjoy it though.



Edwards POV



I really wanted to tell Bella it was her I liked but it would be too soon

"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." I dicho in a rush

She opened her mouth but dicho nothing. Oh great she probably hates me now. I should probably ask anyways.

"Do tu want to...you know. Go out?" I asked her. She looked really shocked

She looked like she was going to faint because she was so shocked, and she did end up fainting. Her eyelids fluttered and she fell completley silent, then she started to fall. I caught her befor she hit the floor though. Thank god. If I eperlano her blood - out of her body - I would go crazy. I would kill her right on the spot. Im glad I caught her though. I could never kill someone as beautiful as her.

I picked her up in my arms and ran to my house just to make sure she wasn't in a coma o something. I really hoped she wasn't. I would need to phone Carlisle befor doing any tasks on sweet Bella. Carlisel was at the hospital though I would have to call His escritorio telephone instead. He wouldn't have his cell on him inside the hospital and he would have it on silent anyways. The others were hunting till six O'clock and Carlisle wouldn't be back till late at night- which ment that when Bella woke up which should be soon I would have alone time to talk to her about this relationship situation.

I ran to the house, and was there in two minutes. I placed Bella in the medical mesa, tabla and started to buscar for my cell phone. I ended up finding it on the escritorio in my room. I ran straight back down staris and dialed Carlisles escritorio number.

"Hello"Carlisle answered

"Carlisle I need your help , I have Bella at the house. She fainted, should I give her somethingor check on anything. She hasn't woken up yet, its been ten minutes." I told him

" Umm...just check her corazón rate and if it's over one hundred beats per minuto o under eighty then just hook her up to the geart moniter till it goes back up o goes back down. She should wake up soon and Im sure something good will happen of the amor tu feel for her Edward. Giver her some comida when she wakes up if shes hungry ok? I'll see tu tonight. Bye"

"Bye" I hung up my cell and placed it on carlisles desk. I went straight over to Bella taking her hand in mine hoping she would wake up ata cold touch,but she didn't.

I grabbed the stethescope out of Carlisles escritorio cabinet. I ran over to Bella and laid the stethescope on her chest. I could hear her heart, but it was very fast. I counted one hundred and twenty one beats per minute. I put the stehacope away and brought out the heartmoniter. I hooked her on to it and sat at Carlisles escritorio looking at his paper work on fainting o unconscious patients.

Bellas POV


"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." he dicho in a rush

I fainted when he dicho that

*Dream*

I fell off the cliff screaming. I saw the ground beneath me but I felt arms to. I turned to see who it was. I was really shocked at who it actually was.

"Edward?" I asked

"Its ok Bella, your seguro now" He dicho then placed me on my feet. He bent his head down to my level and kissed me on the lips with a lot of passion. His lips were cool and hard. I didn't know why but I like him this way best. I put my arms around his neck. His hands were on my back pulling me closer to his chest. He stopped besar me and settled for hugging me instead. He put his forehead to mine and hugged me still. He didn't let go for a while

"I amor you" He dicho soft and velvety.

I looked up at him and just smiled " Thank tu for saving my life Edward" I dicho lovable and caring. I looked back down

"Hey!" He lifted my chin up so I would look at him again "I'll always be there to pick tu up when tu fall down . It's my job. I amor you."

"I amor tu to." I kissed him quickly on the lips

I never noticed till now that when he smiles he had fangs for eye teeth and he had just exposed them to me.I never knoew he had them. So what was he a...a...a vampire?
I was seriously worried now. He probably drank human blood. I knew his deepest darkest secret.

I started to back away and he didn't stop me. I kept shaking my head back and forth.

"Bella please, let me explain. It's not what tu think."

I just kept on shaking my head. I was backening away into the forest. Edward was following me. I turned around and started running home. He didn't follow me after that he knew our relationship was over now.

I ran inicial and got some clothes packed. I was going the air port. I was going back home. I got into my truck-when I finished packing all of my clothes and personal belongings- and took off down the road. About fifteen minutos towards the airport I saw two lights infront of my truck. I didn't know what they were from until I crashed into it. It was a transport truck the lght were form. I should have changed lanes but my hands woulsn't have obeyed me and they were locked in place around the steering wheel. My truck swirled in a circulo, círculo and I gainded control of the tires and swerved stright into the direction of a river.

I tried to turn the wheel the other way but that didn't work so I tried to open my door. It wouldn't open so I tried to reach for the passenger door but I couuldn't reach it.
My seatbelt was locked in one of those crash positions when tu go flying adelante, hacia adelante and i flys tu right back. I then tried to undo the asiento cinturón, correa but that was stuck in the buckle. Was nothing going right tonight?

por now I was in the river and about a quater off the way under the water. I knew immedietly thatI was going to die for all of about four reasons :

1. There was no one around to help me get out of this so called good truck and I couldn't get the door opened either
2.The transport truck driver was probably already dead por now
3.The truck windows were don and that ment that when the water got up to the windows i would die faster from drowning and
4.nothing in my tuck wanted to work. not even the windows. my truck was broken now

I kept pulling at the seatbelt but it was no use and I knew that i would not succed at trying to get it out. Water was already pouring in the truck now. A couple of segundos later the water was at my legs and then my stomach and then my neck. My truck then was completely filled with water. I was holding my breath for about 1 minuto and couldn't do it anymore. I was sucking in nasty river water. I was drowning now and Bet noone was going to camoe and save me from my death. I started to choke on the water but i couldn't mover anywere so I just had to sit there in the dumb truck to die.I was almost dead now. My corazón was beating really slowly.

"Goodbye Edward, I amor tu still. I never ment what I dicho o was doing. I know your still a good guy. Please...I don't care if your a vampire just please, come and rescue me. Be my hero.I know tu can save me, your the only one who can. Please" I thought to myself befor I was on the verge of dieing

My corazón was going towards it's last beat. I was dieing now. The unconsciousness tookme all the way now. My life was gone, what was I suppose to do now. No más Edward, no más life meaning. No más me.

I was completley dead now and there was no way that i could be saved.

*End Of Dream*
posted by surfergal
Ok, So I thought I took the news pretty well. But as Emmet told me I was sitting on the cama when he walk in and I what seemed liek it was in a trance aka I didnt talk for 5 mintues new record for me. Emmet finally got me to speak and then I just went to sleep. The siguiente morning Alice came in and woke me up for school but I told her I didnt feel like going, when she walked out of the room I feel back asleep. it was around 11aam when i woke up por phone telling me i had a text message. It was max asking if I wanted to come over and have a movie día because he had the día off.I texted him back saying...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
[u][b]Once Bruised, Twice Broken[b][u]

"Go Into The Storm Valiente One...That's Where Life Is!"

[u][b]Chapter One: Remember December[b][u]
So lets get things straight...
My life is okay for a fifteen año old girl I guess. My name is Eve Barnes. And I live two minutos away from my school, here in North Carolina. My parents died a año hace in a car crash. It was a head on collision. This person was backing out of there driveway, my parents were taking a short cut home, and they swerved out of the way so they didn't hit them. And along came a truck and BAM! They died. I was with my aunt and uncle...
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posted by nessienjake
I dreamt thıs ...fan fıctıon whıle ı was ın a aıroplane to Australıa and told ıt to my sıster she hand wrote ıt ın her dıary and know ı estola ıt and typed ıt warnıng dont be too hard she trıed ıt and shes smaller than me.(lol but ı trıed to ımprove ıt and make ıt longer)
CHAPTER 1 ILLUSION
İ was walking quıckly through the clouded place ın the mıddle of the nıght ın L.A
ı had my MP3 open and ı was sıngıng whıle steppıng on the wet grass.
ı thought ı heard somethıng so ı looked back stıll walkıng...ıt was only a cat lookıng for comida ın the garbage.İ...
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posted by surfergal
When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I dicho " here Emmet tu drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger asiento addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do tu think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to his house I could see him standing on his side walk. It
makes me happy when I see him. When I got out he dicho sweet ride sis.
I know it's awesome my favorito! kind of car in the world. He ask if it
had a good base in it and I dicho there's only one way to find that
out. So we hoped in my jeep turned up the música and went for a
drive,then he got a call so I took him to the base. He told me sorry
for having to leave and that he would call later.

I had the best people in my life. People to take care of me people who
actually cared. I went back to the house and of course Jacob and Seth...
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posted by surfergal
When we were done treading water it was about 5 am and we got to dry
off and go eat breakfast I think everyone was hungry. We went to class
afterward for what it seemed like forever but we watched a few videos
and answered some preguntas so of wasn't that bad. Then we all went
for a jog. It was so cold outside that tu could see your breath. We
had ran about 2 miles when I started to have trouble breathing. I was
like great. So I fell behind some of the others and Senior Chief was
pulling up the so I fell back behind him a little bit. He asked “if I
was okay” he dicho “that he could hear...
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"EDDIE! EDDIE! EDDIE!", I said. "First, DON'T CALL ME EDDIE! EVER! segundo what do tu want?", he asked. "I figured out another way to annoy Alice.", I said. "OH. HELL TO THE HELL NO!!!", he screamed."Oh, well I guess Jasper was right. Shame shame.",I started. "What did Jasper."
"Oh nothing really. Just that tu were I mean ARE terrified of a little, tinky, tiny, istsy bitsy pettite...shall I go on?",I interupted. "NO. And I am not afriad of little old..", he started to say."Me?", Alice finished. "No. We were just talking about ...", he dicho unable to finish. "How horrified of lobos he is.",...
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THIS IS NOT THE STORY!!!
I'm currently suffering writers' block. I am open to any ideas.
I was bored the entire week, so I came up with a few chapters, but I promised an explanation in the siguiente chapter, which I didn't have. I may have to skip a few chapters...

I also want to use this as a thank-you to all of my fans and people who I'm a fan of and loved my stories, which is a great boost for my eagerness to write. (Sounds cheesie, I know...)

For those who recently supported -and, frankly, pleaded until I had a headache- my escritura of Renesmee Black's Story:

princesspinkla; thanks for your support,...
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posted by pie-102
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if tu have any ideas tell me

"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
posted by CoolMandyz43
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add más descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. tu can correo electrónico your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to tu and tu can post it o change somethings I did. I would amor to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really editar stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
Edward's Pov.

I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.

"Should we do it now? o later?"

"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."

No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!

Rosalie: Uh...

Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?

Master: Alright, but just her.

Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!

NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry tu guys! I'm overwelming tu guys aren't I? I'm trying to post as many of these as I can. I'm already done with the series and is planning to write the sequel. So I kind of need to post as many as I can. It'll be confusing to put new and old story up at the same time! ^_^

Bella's POV

It has been passed 2 hours since Edward left. Sigh. To try not to make this harder than it needs to be. I mostly minded my own business. But if Aro o Royce come, I follow their lead. But I hated to do it. When I look myself in the mirror. I really looked like a vampire. I got my Blood-red eyes back for...
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posted by Bella11700
With her begging, my cold corazón softened, but I still put up an annoyed face and walked in the park. I was just sitting on the benches looking like I wanted to leave. She went to the big oak árbol and she was looking for something. I knew she was looking for what we wrote on that árbol with a silver ink pen half a año ago. If I remember it right, it said, "Chris and Susan was here, Chris had té and Susan was drinking hot chocolate. Hope Chris and Susan would always remember this day, always loving each other, forever." She was looking around for quite a while, then she came back slowly with...
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i can't get the pregunta many have ask and many have metioned out of my mind. Why did Alice and Jasper leave? Where did they go? Why haven't we got the respuestas we need is all im asking! Hi im Megan and i will be escritura a daily reportar about my opinions about twilight and other things ,And if you're thoose crazy people who can't handle other people opinions drop your laptop o unplug your computer and run forest run! Because tu will hate this.
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say lectura can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything más for this- see ya tomoorow! tu think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....


HOPE tu ENJOY MY NEW articulo SERIES!
(ps. don't worry i am nothing like the sapranos! and my siguiente articulo will be longer!)
 have a good day!
have a good day!
Hey, please comentario and let me know what tu think about the story :D



Chapter two


I started to gain feel of my body again. But then wished i had stayed in the blackness.My neck started burning and so did my wrist and ankles. The fuego was moving its way through my body. Burning everything in its path.
I wondered what i did to go to hell. I couldnt think of anything. I was only 17.
Then i started screaming for anyone to help, but no one came. I was alone. Trapped.
Sometimes i stopped screaming. There wasnt any point. No one was coming.

After what seemed like hours some one came in. As soon as he...
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The history of the Quileute tribe and their connection things beyond the human is documented in ‘Eclipse’ chapter 11. We are told that “there has always been magic in our blood” and that they were “spirit warriors” before they became “shape-shifting” people. The tale of Taha Aki enlaces the tribe for the first time with the wolf, as his spirit shared the body of the animal. This seems to have been the beginning of the possibility of being beyond both simple man and simple wolf.

The descripción of Taha Aki matches what Bella discovers about Jacob and the other werewolves. “He...
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posted by sh0rtiinedward
As we run into the woods, a very strong part of me hold me back and yelled at me to comeback home, but i just can't do it, i knew that something was wrong but i had to be with Julius and if my parents didn't like the idea they have to deal with me leaving home

"Rennesme what's wrong amor are tu ok" Julius dicho to me as he envolver, abrigo me from my waist and kiss my forehead. i can't understand this pain in his face like if something were wrong, i don't think is me o that he is worried about me.I think is something más important and i have to find out what it is.

"yes i just worried, about what's going...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
I was half asleep half awake lying on my stomach. I could feel Jason’s cold fingers slowly moving up and down my bare back. He was humming a lullaby but I didn’t know what it was.
“Do tu still want to know my secret?” he asked in a soothing tone. It didn’t help that his voice so soft that it made it harder to stay awake. “Sure.” I dicho moving closer to him.
“I’ve none tu before tu were born.” He paused a second. Probably to make sure I wasn’t going to freak out. “I was friends with your mother before tu were even born before your mother met your father. I met her...
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posted by UchihaYuki
hola Guys, Yuki here.

As some of tu know,
I've been escritura a Twilight FanFiction,
I've so far Written Six Chapters..
And I'm so Happy that Everyone seems to amor
it, I got a message, well a couple asking
when my siguiente Chapter's coming out,

I am in the thinking process,
right now.. I'm not sure what to write in
this chapter, So I wanna know what tu guys
think my siguiente Chapter should be about..
and so on, So just comentario this with what tu think.
I'll be glad to hear all of your opinions,
Or tu could message me if you'd like, either way,
It doesn't matter.

For those of tu who haven't Read my FanFictions...
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posted by AliceHaleCullen
Quotes: On Twilight


"Of course I've read all three books! A few times actually. I finished all three books, and become a fan before I was even cast!"

"Favorite Alice moment? Hmm.... there are a few but a moment that always makes me smile is the whole yellow Porsche bit.... it shows a playful warm connection between Edward and Alice."

"The Cast is amazing! Everyone pretty much 'clicks' which is very nice considering we are family now."

"Jackson Rathbone is an awesome guy! Such a fun person to be around. And I think there is a bit of chemistry with everyone in the cast. We all get along great....
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