ok guys a really long one here. Hope tu enjoy it though.
Edwards POV
I really wanted to tell Bella it was her I liked but it would be too soon
"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." I dicho in a rush
She opened her mouth but dicho nothing. Oh great she probably hates me now. I should probably ask anyways.
"Do tu want to...you know. Go out?" I asked her. She looked really shocked
She looked like she was going to faint because she was so shocked, and she did end up fainting. Her eyelids fluttered and she fell completley silent, then she started to fall. I caught her befor she hit the floor though. Thank god. If I eperlano her blood - out of her body - I would go crazy. I would kill her right on the spot. Im glad I caught her though. I could never kill someone as beautiful as her.
I picked her up in my arms and ran to my house just to make sure she wasn't in a coma o something. I really hoped she wasn't. I would need to phone Carlisle befor doing any tasks on sweet Bella. Carlisel was at the hospital though I would have to call His escritorio telephone instead. He wouldn't have his cell on him inside the hospital and he would have it on silent anyways. The others were hunting till six O'clock and Carlisle wouldn't be back till late at night- which ment that when Bella woke up which should be soon I would have alone time to talk to her about this relationship situation.
I ran to the house, and was there in two minutes. I placed Bella in the medical mesa, tabla and started to buscar for my cell phone. I ended up finding it on the escritorio in my room. I ran straight back down staris and dialed Carlisles escritorio number.
"Hello"Carlisle answered
"Carlisle I need your help , I have Bella at the house. She fainted, should I give her somethingor check on anything. She hasn't woken up yet, its been ten minutes." I told him
" Umm...just check her corazón rate and if it's over one hundred beats per minuto o under eighty then just hook her up to the geart moniter till it goes back up o goes back down. She should wake up soon and Im sure something good will happen of the amor tu feel for her Edward. Giver her some comida when she wakes up if shes hungry ok? I'll see tu tonight. Bye"
"Bye" I hung up my cell and placed it on carlisles desk. I went straight over to Bella taking her hand in mine hoping she would wake up ata cold touch,but she didn't.
I grabbed the stethescope out of Carlisles escritorio cabinet. I ran over to Bella and laid the stethescope on her chest. I could hear her heart, but it was very fast. I counted one hundred and twenty one beats per minute. I put the stehacope away and brought out the heartmoniter. I hooked her on to it and sat at Carlisles escritorio looking at his paper work on fainting o unconscious patients.
Bellas POV
"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." he dicho in a rush
I fainted when he dicho that
*Dream*
I fell off the cliff screaming. I saw the ground beneath me but I felt arms to. I turned to see who it was. I was really shocked at who it actually was.
"Edward?" I asked
"Its ok Bella, your seguro now" He dicho then placed me on my feet. He bent his head down to my level and kissed me on the lips with a lot of passion. His lips were cool and hard. I didn't know why but I like him this way best. I put my arms around his neck. His hands were on my back pulling me closer to his chest. He stopped besar me and settled for hugging me instead. He put his forehead to mine and hugged me still. He didn't let go for a while
"I amor you" He dicho soft and velvety.
I looked up at him and just smiled " Thank tu for saving my life Edward" I dicho lovable and caring. I looked back down
"Hey!" He lifted my chin up so I would look at him again "I'll always be there to pick tu up when tu fall down . It's my job. I amor you."
"I amor tu to." I kissed him quickly on the lips
I never noticed till now that when he smiles he had fangs for eye teeth and he had just exposed them to me.I never knoew he had them. So what was he a...a...a vampire?
I was seriously worried now. He probably drank human blood. I knew his deepest darkest secret.
I started to back away and he didn't stop me. I kept shaking my head back and forth.
"Bella please, let me explain. It's not what tu think."
I just kept on shaking my head. I was backening away into the forest. Edward was following me. I turned around and started running home. He didn't follow me after that he knew our relationship was over now.
I ran inicial and got some clothes packed. I was going the air port. I was going back home. I got into my truck-when I finished packing all of my clothes and personal belongings- and took off down the road. About fifteen minutos towards the airport I saw two lights infront of my truck. I didn't know what they were from until I crashed into it. It was a transport truck the lght were form. I should have changed lanes but my hands woulsn't have obeyed me and they were locked in place around the steering wheel. My truck swirled in a circulo, círculo and I gainded control of the tires and swerved stright into the direction of a river.
I tried to turn the wheel the other way but that didn't work so I tried to open my door. It wouldn't open so I tried to reach for the passenger door but I couuldn't reach it.
My seatbelt was locked in one of those crash positions when tu go flying adelante, hacia adelante and i flys tu right back. I then tried to undo the asiento cinturón, correa but that was stuck in the buckle. Was nothing going right tonight?
por now I was in the river and about a quater off the way under the water. I knew immedietly thatI was going to die for all of about four reasons :
1. There was no one around to help me get out of this so called good truck and I couldn't get the door opened either
2.The transport truck driver was probably already dead por now
3.The truck windows were don and that ment that when the water got up to the windows i would die faster from drowning and
4.nothing in my tuck wanted to work. not even the windows. my truck was broken now
I kept pulling at the seatbelt but it was no use and I knew that i would not succed at trying to get it out. Water was already pouring in the truck now. A couple of segundos later the water was at my legs and then my stomach and then my neck. My truck then was completely filled with water. I was holding my breath for about 1 minuto and couldn't do it anymore. I was sucking in nasty river water. I was drowning now and Bet noone was going to camoe and save me from my death. I started to choke on the water but i couldn't mover anywere so I just had to sit there in the dumb truck to die.I was almost dead now. My corazón was beating really slowly.
"Goodbye Edward, I amor tu still. I never ment what I dicho o was doing. I know your still a good guy. Please...I don't care if your a vampire just please, come and rescue me. Be my hero.I know tu can save me, your the only one who can. Please" I thought to myself befor I was on the verge of dieing
My corazón was going towards it's last beat. I was dieing now. The unconsciousness tookme all the way now. My life was gone, what was I suppose to do now. No más Edward, no más life meaning. No más me.
I was completley dead now and there was no way that i could be saved.
*End Of Dream*
Edwards POV
I really wanted to tell Bella it was her I liked but it would be too soon
"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." I dicho in a rush
She opened her mouth but dicho nothing. Oh great she probably hates me now. I should probably ask anyways.
"Do tu want to...you know. Go out?" I asked her. She looked really shocked
She looked like she was going to faint because she was so shocked, and she did end up fainting. Her eyelids fluttered and she fell completley silent, then she started to fall. I caught her befor she hit the floor though. Thank god. If I eperlano her blood - out of her body - I would go crazy. I would kill her right on the spot. Im glad I caught her though. I could never kill someone as beautiful as her.
I picked her up in my arms and ran to my house just to make sure she wasn't in a coma o something. I really hoped she wasn't. I would need to phone Carlisle befor doing any tasks on sweet Bella. Carlisel was at the hospital though I would have to call His escritorio telephone instead. He wouldn't have his cell on him inside the hospital and he would have it on silent anyways. The others were hunting till six O'clock and Carlisle wouldn't be back till late at night- which ment that when Bella woke up which should be soon I would have alone time to talk to her about this relationship situation.
I ran to the house, and was there in two minutes. I placed Bella in the medical mesa, tabla and started to buscar for my cell phone. I ended up finding it on the escritorio in my room. I ran straight back down staris and dialed Carlisles escritorio number.
"Hello"Carlisle answered
"Carlisle I need your help , I have Bella at the house. She fainted, should I give her somethingor check on anything. She hasn't woken up yet, its been ten minutes." I told him
" Umm...just check her corazón rate and if it's over one hundred beats per minuto o under eighty then just hook her up to the geart moniter till it goes back up o goes back down. She should wake up soon and Im sure something good will happen of the amor tu feel for her Edward. Giver her some comida when she wakes up if shes hungry ok? I'll see tu tonight. Bye"
"Bye" I hung up my cell and placed it on carlisles desk. I went straight over to Bella taking her hand in mine hoping she would wake up ata cold touch,but she didn't.
I grabbed the stethescope out of Carlisles escritorio cabinet. I ran over to Bella and laid the stethescope on her chest. I could hear her heart, but it was very fast. I counted one hundred and twenty one beats per minute. I put the stehacope away and brought out the heartmoniter. I hooked her on to it and sat at Carlisles escritorio looking at his paper work on fainting o unconscious patients.
Bellas POV
"Ok. Ok, Bella It's you. I like tu I really do. Your really pretty." he dicho in a rush
I fainted when he dicho that
*Dream*
I fell off the cliff screaming. I saw the ground beneath me but I felt arms to. I turned to see who it was. I was really shocked at who it actually was.
"Edward?" I asked
"Its ok Bella, your seguro now" He dicho then placed me on my feet. He bent his head down to my level and kissed me on the lips with a lot of passion. His lips were cool and hard. I didn't know why but I like him this way best. I put my arms around his neck. His hands were on my back pulling me closer to his chest. He stopped besar me and settled for hugging me instead. He put his forehead to mine and hugged me still. He didn't let go for a while
"I amor you" He dicho soft and velvety.
I looked up at him and just smiled " Thank tu for saving my life Edward" I dicho lovable and caring. I looked back down
"Hey!" He lifted my chin up so I would look at him again "I'll always be there to pick tu up when tu fall down . It's my job. I amor you."
"I amor tu to." I kissed him quickly on the lips
I never noticed till now that when he smiles he had fangs for eye teeth and he had just exposed them to me.I never knoew he had them. So what was he a...a...a vampire?
I was seriously worried now. He probably drank human blood. I knew his deepest darkest secret.
I started to back away and he didn't stop me. I kept shaking my head back and forth.
"Bella please, let me explain. It's not what tu think."
I just kept on shaking my head. I was backening away into the forest. Edward was following me. I turned around and started running home. He didn't follow me after that he knew our relationship was over now.
I ran inicial and got some clothes packed. I was going the air port. I was going back home. I got into my truck-when I finished packing all of my clothes and personal belongings- and took off down the road. About fifteen minutos towards the airport I saw two lights infront of my truck. I didn't know what they were from until I crashed into it. It was a transport truck the lght were form. I should have changed lanes but my hands woulsn't have obeyed me and they were locked in place around the steering wheel. My truck swirled in a circulo, círculo and I gainded control of the tires and swerved stright into the direction of a river.
I tried to turn the wheel the other way but that didn't work so I tried to open my door. It wouldn't open so I tried to reach for the passenger door but I couuldn't reach it.
My seatbelt was locked in one of those crash positions when tu go flying adelante, hacia adelante and i flys tu right back. I then tried to undo the asiento cinturón, correa but that was stuck in the buckle. Was nothing going right tonight?
por now I was in the river and about a quater off the way under the water. I knew immedietly thatI was going to die for all of about four reasons :
1. There was no one around to help me get out of this so called good truck and I couldn't get the door opened either
2.The transport truck driver was probably already dead por now
3.The truck windows were don and that ment that when the water got up to the windows i would die faster from drowning and
4.nothing in my tuck wanted to work. not even the windows. my truck was broken now
I kept pulling at the seatbelt but it was no use and I knew that i would not succed at trying to get it out. Water was already pouring in the truck now. A couple of segundos later the water was at my legs and then my stomach and then my neck. My truck then was completely filled with water. I was holding my breath for about 1 minuto and couldn't do it anymore. I was sucking in nasty river water. I was drowning now and Bet noone was going to camoe and save me from my death. I started to choke on the water but i couldn't mover anywere so I just had to sit there in the dumb truck to die.I was almost dead now. My corazón was beating really slowly.
"Goodbye Edward, I amor tu still. I never ment what I dicho o was doing. I know your still a good guy. Please...I don't care if your a vampire just please, come and rescue me. Be my hero.I know tu can save me, your the only one who can. Please" I thought to myself befor I was on the verge of dieing
My corazón was going towards it's last beat. I was dieing now. The unconsciousness tookme all the way now. My life was gone, what was I suppose to do now. No más Edward, no más life meaning. No más me.
I was completley dead now and there was no way that i could be saved.
*End Of Dream*
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if tu have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add más descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. tu can correo electrónico your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to tu and tu can post it o change somethings I did. I would amor to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really editar stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? o later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? o later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say lectura can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything más for this- see ya tomoorow! tu think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....
HOPE tu ENJOY MY NEW articulo SERIES!
(ps. don't worry i am nothing like the sapranos! and my siguiente articulo will be longer!)