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Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see tu again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, o that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that tu are still a “vegetarian” How do tu do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all tu need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castillo now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My corazón wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.
We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castillo that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.
The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a taburete and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have tu done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, tu are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed tu if I thought that tu were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find tu again. I brought tu here to tell tu this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told tu when I changed tu that humans could not know that tu are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have tu ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampiros as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.
He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)
I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he dicho was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell tu when he took tu away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, tu know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while o if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that segundo though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.
She thought that he told me about the Volturi
What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see tu again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, o that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that tu are still a “vegetarian” How do tu do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all tu need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castillo now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My corazón wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.
We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castillo that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.
The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a taburete and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have tu done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, tu are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed tu if I thought that tu were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find tu again. I brought tu here to tell tu this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told tu when I changed tu that humans could not know that tu are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have tu ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampiros as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.
He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)
I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he dicho was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell tu when he took tu away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, tu know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while o if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that segundo though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.
She thought that he told me about the Volturi
What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
I promise to remember Bella
Each time I carelessly fall down
And I promise to remember Edward
When ever I'm out of town
I promise to obey traffic laws
For Charlie's sake of course
And I promise to remember Jacob
When my corazón fills with remorse
I promise to remember Carlisle
When ever I am in the Emergency Room
And I promise to remember Emmett
Every time there's a huge boom
I promise to to remember Rosalie
When ever I see something that holds pure beauty
And I promise to remember Alice
When I'm at a mall and a cute outfit spots me
I promise to remember Renesmee
When I see that beautiful bronze hair.
And I promise to remember Esme
When someone tells me they care
I promise to remember Jasper
Whenever my stomach isn't curled
And I promise to remember the Volturi
When someone speaks of dominating the world
Yes I promise to amor Twilight
Wherever I may go
So that all may see my obsession
Because I know what the Twilighters know.
Each time I carelessly fall down
And I promise to remember Edward
When ever I'm out of town
I promise to obey traffic laws
For Charlie's sake of course
And I promise to remember Jacob
When my corazón fills with remorse
I promise to remember Carlisle
When ever I am in the Emergency Room
And I promise to remember Emmett
Every time there's a huge boom
I promise to to remember Rosalie
When ever I see something that holds pure beauty
And I promise to remember Alice
When I'm at a mall and a cute outfit spots me
I promise to remember Renesmee
When I see that beautiful bronze hair.
And I promise to remember Esme
When someone tells me they care
I promise to remember Jasper
Whenever my stomach isn't curled
And I promise to remember the Volturi
When someone speaks of dominating the world
Yes I promise to amor Twilight
Wherever I may go
So that all may see my obsession
Because I know what the Twilighters know.
I have all the Twilight books, but I lost Eclipse and really want to read it. Does anybody know a website tu can read the whole book on? I've been dying to read past the first chapter tu get from New Moon. It sucks I really want to read it, and I can't do that. Please help me with this. From a fan to a fan. tu know how great the book is so help me, a person who wants to read it. Please just find the website and post it to me. Thank tu so much! I hope tu already know one, o can easily find one. Thank you!!
Danie turned into a blob of manzana, apple sauce, then shape-shifted back into a human. "There" She said.
"Hey Erin! So I see tu got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! tu have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, tu tell me about tu being part of the Volturi."
"How did tu know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did tu find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so tu know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't tu tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, tu are my best friend; I tell tu everything, tu should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
"Hey Erin! So I see tu got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! tu have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, tu tell me about tu being part of the Volturi."
"How did tu know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did tu find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so tu know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't tu tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, tu are my best friend; I tell tu everything, tu should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!
2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.
3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.
4.This one is más about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?
5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!
6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!
7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
EDward took off his shirt.His abs were hawt.I then went under the covers.I then felt his cool skin agaisnt mine.
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry amor tu will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up tu know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My corazón beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my corazón was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry amor tu will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up tu know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My corazón beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my corazón was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward o jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she dicho when edward asked her,
" are tu sure tu made the right choice, i have never seen tu in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she dicho when edward asked her,
" are tu sure tu made the right choice, i have never seen tu in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better