Hey. I'm making a segundo story, tell me if tu like, please be truthful!:) P.S. I don't have a 'title' for the book, any suggestions will be awesome.
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I've been a vampire for years. My creator left me. I've been digging for information about my past. That's what she told me before she left.
I've beeen digging and found somethings. I found out who I was named after. My deceased aunt. We have the same first name. But I liked to me called Mary. I even had the same last name as her.
Mary Alice Brandon. My mom was attached to her, before my aunt was put in the assylum.
And a though in the back of my mind said, 'Maybe, just maybe, she was changed into a vampire like me'. But a stronger part of me dicho she died in the assylum. She was 'checked out' In 1918.
So my mother, Cynthia,and her husband. I don't know his name, one night stand. She had pictures of her all around the house. I looked just like her, accept the hair, mine was longer.
I wondered what that would be like to meet her, but that probably wasn't going to happen. I traced her back to the correct asylum, and looked at her information. Appearently some information was sent to an address in Washington.
Which gave más proof to the whole 'she's alive theory'. Whose else would look her up and get some information, about her?
I got the adress, and that led to a name, Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Great a doctor wants information, abouut my aunt.
I was enrolled in a high school. And suggestd that going to that hospital could be benefital to our education. Since it was a health class.
I could pass as a high schooler, I was nineteen when changed. With my mother we lived in Biloxi Mississippi. I now lived in Letha, Idaho.
I got the permission slips, and the tickets. All they need to do is say yes. And they did.
Our health class was going to Washington. Everyone was excited, feild trip for awhile. 3 days, to be exact.
And I managed to squeeze in a tour of the hospital in Forks. Where Dr. Carlisle Cullen was, and maybe, just mabye, my aunt.
teamalice_0
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I've been a vampire for years. My creator left me. I've been digging for information about my past. That's what she told me before she left.
I've beeen digging and found somethings. I found out who I was named after. My deceased aunt. We have the same first name. But I liked to me called Mary. I even had the same last name as her.
Mary Alice Brandon. My mom was attached to her, before my aunt was put in the assylum.
And a though in the back of my mind said, 'Maybe, just maybe, she was changed into a vampire like me'. But a stronger part of me dicho she died in the assylum. She was 'checked out' In 1918.
So my mother, Cynthia,and her husband. I don't know his name, one night stand. She had pictures of her all around the house. I looked just like her, accept the hair, mine was longer.
I wondered what that would be like to meet her, but that probably wasn't going to happen. I traced her back to the correct asylum, and looked at her information. Appearently some information was sent to an address in Washington.
Which gave más proof to the whole 'she's alive theory'. Whose else would look her up and get some information, about her?
I got the adress, and that led to a name, Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Great a doctor wants information, abouut my aunt.
I was enrolled in a high school. And suggestd that going to that hospital could be benefital to our education. Since it was a health class.
I could pass as a high schooler, I was nineteen when changed. With my mother we lived in Biloxi Mississippi. I now lived in Letha, Idaho.
I got the permission slips, and the tickets. All they need to do is say yes. And they did.
Our health class was going to Washington. Everyone was excited, feild trip for awhile. 3 days, to be exact.
And I managed to squeeze in a tour of the hospital in Forks. Where Dr. Carlisle Cullen was, and maybe, just mabye, my aunt.
10 Ways to Annoy Rosalie Hale:
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie dicho Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” por The Police. When she asks why the hell tu did it, say that she reminds tu of Roxanne.
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie dicho Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” por The Police. When she asks why the hell tu did it, say that she reminds tu of Roxanne.
9. “Superstitious old man.” (Page 239)
8. “Pretty crazy stuff, though, isn’t it? No wonder my dad doesn’t want us to talk about it anymore.” (Page 126)
7. “So do tu think we’re a bunch of superstitious natives o what?” (Page 126)
6. “I guess I just violated the treaty.” (Page 126)
5. “You wouldn’t happen to know where I could get my hands on a master cylinder for a 1986 Volkswagen Rabbit?” (Page 120)
4. “I swear the old man is losing his mind.” (Page 490)
3. “Can tu believe my dad paid me twenty bucks to come to your prom?” (Page 490)
2. “I don’t think a tank could take out that old monster.” (Page 120)
1. “So, should I tell him tu dicho to butt the hell out?” (Page 492)
I have recently read a fanfiction story about bella getting sick with something and then she has to stay over at the cullens and all this weird stuff happens to her. Then she can't feel pain. Its not after breaking dawn is before when she is still human. I don't know what it is called. That is why i need your help inding the name of it o find out who wrote it. I like the story and i want to finish it. Please if anyone has seen o hear about this story please send me a message...My name is Brittany. My screen name is EBRCBrit. tu can add me as a friend if tu want!!!
The story follows one día in the life of a very disturbed Edward Cullen as he goes about his día job. What is his día job? You'll fine out!
It's rated M for creepiness, language, and disturbing imagery.
Hope tu give it a chance, AND let me know what tu think! Thanks! :-)
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Summary: Edward reminisces about his 'lost' first love.
I really hope some will give it a read, and please leave me a review if you're on FF. o tu can leave a comentario here and tell me what tu think! :-)
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