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posted by ktbminnie12
Bella’s POV

    I felt the blackness come over me. My lungs started hurting. I felt like I couldn’t breath. It was really hard. I felt the cold hands hold something over my mouth. I tried to scream, but the hands held something there to muffle my screams. Finally, I passed out. I didn’t know how long it was, but I felt the blackness and numbness going away.
    Suddenly with a jolt, I woke up. I sat up straight and looked around. I didn’t know where I was. It was dark and the only window this room had, had planks on it. I could see through the cracks that it was dark outside. I didn’t know what time it was, where I was, o even if I’m dead. I couldn’t be dead. I was in pain. My head hurt and so did my lungs. I touched my forehead and found a small bump on it.
    What happened to me? Now I was freaking out. I could tell I wasn’t around Edward anymore. I still had the clothes on from the party, because I felt the jeans and blue shirt. Suddenly, I saw a light coming from above me. I then could see the room. It looked like a basement. I was chained to a muro and in the corner.
    I looked to the parte superior, arriba of the stairs and saw a figure standing in the doorway.
“Your finally awake, tu puny little human,” the figured said.
I then realized it was the same person from the party.
“Who are you?” I asked.
“My name is Lorenzo. I’m one of your boyfriend’s old friends. Well, not friends anymore. Not after he killed my girlfriend. Anyways since he decided to kill my girlfriend, I decided to kidnap his.” he dicho coming down the stairs. He stopped right in front of me.
“Are tu going to kill me?” I asked suddenly scared.
“Oh, no. Not unless tu want me to. But I will say, tu will never see your perfect little boyfriend again.”
    I felt the tears coming down my face as he dicho this. I could feel the depression I once had when Edward left me last year. I could not go through this again.
“He’ll find me, tu know,” I said.
“I beg to differ. Your little friend Alice can’t see me. And if you’re with me, she won’t see tu either. See, I’m half witch, half vampire, so that means she will never see me. That’s how I got away with this stunt in the first place,” Lorenzo said.
“Where are we?” I asked.
“I’m not telling tu that.”
“Okay,” I dicho wiping away my tears.
“Now, listen to me, tu fragile human,” he dicho grabbing my hair and pulling my head up to look at him. “You only get 2 meals a día and 3 bathroom breaks. While tu are on these breaks, I will be watching your every move. And don’t try to escape, because I can run faster than tu and it will only make me hurt tu worse.”
    I got scared as he dicho these words. Only hurt me worse. As in, he’s still going to hurt me. Would I ever see my family again? Would I ever see my friends again? And worse yet, would I ever see Edward again. We had a wedding in three weeks. I felt más tears fall down my face as I thought about never seeing him again.
“Stop crying. Here,” he dicho throwing a tray of comida at me. It slid on the floor and stopped in front of me. The light showed what it was. It was chicken and beans with a glass of water.
“Eat, and from now on, tu will call me master. tu got that?” he said.
“Yes, Master,” I dicho looking down at the food.
“Good. Now, be quiet and go to sleep. tu get a bathroom break in the morning. If I hear one little peep come out of your mouth, you’re going to be wishing tu weren’t even born,” he said.
“Yes, Master,” I dicho reaching for the food. I was actually hungry, so I decided to eat.
    He took one last look at me and then I felt it come out of nowhere. He slapped me across my face. I felt the sting.
    He then walked back up the stairs and slammed the door shut. I was crying my eyes out. I felt all alone and scared. I’m sure Edward was out of his wits searching for me right now. I didn’t even want to think about Charlie. Then I remembered something. I still had my phone in my bra. I was glad Alice suggested to put it there.
    But the pregunta was, would I be able to be quiet enough to make 1 call. I decided to give it a try. I quietly pulled out my phone and turned it on. I’m so glad I kept it on quiet before I turned it off. I waited for it to load up. When it was finally done I scrolled through my contacts. I hit the call button and turned the volume down to the last notch. It rang one time when he picked up.
“Bella! Where are you? What happened?” Edward said.
“Ssh! He can probably still hear tu and me. Listen, I don’t know where I am. All I remember is being suffocated. It’s dark here. I’m really scared Edward. He’s going to hurt me,” I dicho crying.
“It’s okay, Bella. We’re going to find you. I promise,” Edward said. I could hear the sadness in his voice.
“How long has it been since I was gone?” I asked. I was actually scared to ask, but I forced myself to ask anyways.
“It’s been 3 days. Bella, we’re going to find you. I promise,” Edward said.
“Edward, I amor you,” I said.
“I know, Bella. I know. I amor you, too,” Edward said.
“WHO ARE tu TALKING TO DOWN THERE?” I heard Lorenzo say. The door suddenly flew open. “I thought I dicho to not hear a peep out of you.”
I was frozen with the phone stuck to my ear. Oh man. This was not going to be good. Lorenzo was down the stairs in a flash. He snatched the phone from me and answered it.
“Who is this?” he asked. He listened for a minuto and smiled. “Well, Edward. Now tu can hear me beat your little girlfriend.”
I was now scared. Lorenzo put the phone down on the floor and leaned over me. He raised his hand and smacked me across my face again. Then he pulled off his cinturón, correa and whipped it across my back. I screamed at the pain. He hit me for another 5 minutos with the belt. And the screams, pains, begs, and pleads continued until I blacked out.
    
thanks for the great comentarios im escritura as fast as i can go lol

Noah's pov

While this jacob was in the air i raised a muro from the floor to protect my amor my world
Renesmee
how this Dog could tell me that the girl i amor is his and then attack me while she was so close of course he didn't amor her as much as i do

Nessie was crying her deep brown eyes were so miserable
i had to make this stop seeing her like this was worst than any toruture i've been through
i kissed her in her forhead both her cheeks and at her lips and walk to face ,and kill the dog that had make so miserable my reason for...
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up I was lying in a hospital. Alice and jasper were sitting on a loveseat holding hands and Emmet was sitting in a chair and Rose was sitting in his lap and Esme was standing por the window with Carlisle. Nathen was sitting in a chair right beside my cama holding my hand with his head down like he was asleep. Everyone looked cena worried and then all of the sudden everything hit at once all the flashbacks of what happen a coue if days ago. Carlisle came over to my cama and ask;
Hey Addi, everything is gonna be okay. He said.
It feels like a truck hit me in my side. I told him.
Do...
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posted by teamalice_0
I have this story on two spots, Twiight Fanfictio and The Twilight spot. Enjoy!
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I paced the room with 10 minutos 'till the others would wake. I had to get dressd. I went to my suitcase and pulled some clothes out.

I pulled, some dark washed designer jeans. Black tortuga neck, A black baseball hat, and a hoodie. It was just in case thing. IF my aunt was alive I looked just liked her. I could have someone noticing me as her.

But I know I would see the Dr. so I couldn't be noticed por him. I would be at the back of the group, I can...
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posted by teamalice_0
I have this story on two spots, Twiight Fanfictio and The Twilight spot. Enjoy!
teamalice_0
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I paced the room with 10 minutos 'till the others would wake. I had to get dressd. I went to my suitcase and pulled some clothes out.

I pulled, some dark washed designer jeans. Black tortuga neck, A black baseball hat, and a hoodie. It was just in case thing. IF my aunt was alive I looked just liked her. I could have someone noticing me as her.

But I know I would see the Dr. so I couldn't be noticed por him. I would be at the back of the group, I can...
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posted by RATHBONE07
I llove escritura about Victoria so i hope tu guys are enjoying it:))Heres another:)<3


It was 11:00p.m. Mary wasn’t in the house, but I knew were she was. She was out drinking right now, with Sir. Thomas. He was the worst man I had ever laid my eyes on. He was always drunk, women on each of his shoulders, and hand little money. Mary didn’t care, she clung to him like an unwanted decease. Her cama was empty siguiente to me, Mom would never know… o would she? I silently crept down the stairs, making sure not to wake anybody. I went to the door, and locked it, then I walked towards the windows...
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posted by RATHBONE07
Thanks for all the good feed back:) this ones for tu guys:)

“What’d tu do over the weekend?” Lizzie asked me as we ate our lunch.
“Nothing. Cleaned, did my homework, the usual.” She looked down at her half eaten sandwich, and then carefully put it back in her bag.
“Have tu noticed Ashley lately. She’s gotten so skinny, all the boys are paying to much attention to her, especially David.” She said, that last part a whisper. Lizzie had like David for as long as I could remember, she never really admitted it, but I knew that this really bothered her.
“Its Okay, trust me, he’s...
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today was monday and after school i was going inicial jacob would watch vic while i do my inicial work then i would help jacob with his and we would make super for billy and charlie, as i was walking out of my last class with angela jassica came up to us "so bella what are tu doing after school?"she asked
"well i have a buddy coming over and we are going to do homework and make cena, comedor for are dads when they get back from fishing."i dicho smiling at her

"oh well that...sounds...like fun got to run bye"she dicho and ran off
"wow she is such a bitch."angela dicho i laughed
"well i dont care"i dicho
"so what...
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posted by surfergal
Once I got up stairs and into my room I checked the surf reportar and it dicho it was flat. Great what am I gonna do now. I can't stop thinking about Cody he kent so much to me and he was always there for and always protected me from everything from other vamps o just tripping and falling. He was always there to catch me and now he wasn't and I didn't know what to do. I went back to my cama and just lyed there thinking of Cody. I couldn't help it, we had been together ever sinse we meet. I guess the pull the amor I felt toward him was only me. I feel asleep crying again. I hated when that would...
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~ hola guys! I'm really into escritura fanfiction (hence I joined three fanfiction websites), so I've decided to write one on here! This is just the summary/trailer because I want to see if tu guys like the plot. Tell me what tu think! Also this takes place after Edward leaves Bella in New Moon and she discovers a little site called Blogger... (grins) - musiclover755 ~

TRAILER/SUMMARY
Bella's POV

It's been six months since Edward has left me. Charlie says I'm pretty much a zombie almost. And I agree. As much as I miss the Cullens' with a passion, especially Edward, I've been in need to find...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Zoey. 
Alice's POV
I didn't know if Jasper and I were maknig the right decion my waiting to make her a vampire o not.  I sat in the middle Jasper and Seth. Seth had his head down on the cama holding her hand. Jasper was sitting beside me holding my hand. It was torture to just sit here and wait for the time to change her. Carisle came in and asked to speak to Jasper and I. We walked to his office and sat down in the chairs. Carisle-I wanted to talk about which venom we want to give her. Jasper dicho -he didn't understand what he ment. Would tu like Zoey to have my venom o one of your venom...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Emmett and I watched tv for hours. I sat in the same position with my phone in my hands waiting for Collin to call. My phone started ringing and I picked it up and dicho hello very excited. It turned out to be a wrong number. Emmett and Rose were laighing at me. I ate cena and Collin still had not called. Alice told me to wait for him to call but he never did. I stayed up till 2:30 in the morning, me and Emmett was watching tv and playing video games. I didn't really play much attion to the game, I was hoping that Collin would call. It was 3 am so I decided to go to bed. I didn't fall asleep right away. I heard/ felt Jasper come in my room. hola Jasper. hola Zoey. There was a long pause... So Jasper what do tu want, its 3am? Nothing I thought I would he trailed off. Help me sleep I contued for him. Yeah, so he did and than before I knew it I was asleep.
before I start I just want to say thank tu to my friend Alicelover92 and also princesspinkla for helping me with my writers block thank tu and also Stassja thank tu for your brill comentario :)


Chapter 3 The cult


“What tu on about.?” I was shaking with anger. How dare she say what I am and what I'm not. “forget you”
I walked away from her, suddenly James was in front of me, smirking at me. He had a evil glint in his eyes then he slowly vanished.
I had to get out of here.
By the time I come back it will be to late. I was walking down the empty calle the sun had set already. How long have...
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Chapter 5- Refuge

The siguiente morning I woke up, unaware of where I was and not knowing what I was doing there. All I knew was I was sore everywhere and I had a splitting headache. I sat there for what seemed like hours in pure agony, when everything came rushing back. It had been Charles... again.

As soon as I could gather the strength to stand I changed clothes, wrapped a scarf around my head and headed to the inicial of the only person I felt I could trust, that was in the area anyway.

“Esie? Is that you?” Tom asked as he opened the door and took in my probably horrific appearance.

I nodded....
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Summit Blames Rachelle's "Lack of Cooperative Spirit" for Eclipse DissSource: E! Online Thu Jul 30, 2009, 3:44 am EDT

Blood is starting to boil over in the Twilight zone.

Earlier today, the deposed Rachelle Lefevre revealed that she was "stunned" and "greatly saddened" por Summit Entertainment's decision to recast Bryce Dallas Howard in the role of villainous Victoria in The Twilight Saga: Eclipse.

And now Summit has fired back, saying the Canadian actress failed to inform the studio until July 20 that she was planning to be in europa shooting an indie film when the Twilight gang was convening...
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posted by surfergal
Ok, So I thought I took the news pretty well. But as Emmet told me I was sitting on the cama when he walk in and I what seemed liek it was in a trance aka I didnt talk for 5 mintues new record for me. Emmet finally got me to speak and then I just went to sleep. The siguiente morning Alice came in and woke me up for school but I told her I didnt feel like going, when she walked out of the room I feel back asleep. it was around 11aam when i woke up por phone telling me i had a text message. It was max asking if I wanted to come over and have a movie día because he had the día off.I texted him back saying...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
[u][b]Once Bruised, Twice Broken[b][u]

"Go Into The Storm Valiente One...That's Where Life Is!"

[u][b]Chapter One: Remember December[b][u]
So lets get things straight...
My life is okay for a fifteen año old girl I guess. My name is Eve Barnes. And I live two minutos away from my school, here in North Carolina. My parents died a año hace in a car crash. It was a head on collision. This person was backing out of there driveway, my parents were taking a short cut home, and they swerved out of the way so they didn't hit them. And along came a truck and BAM! They died. I was with my aunt and uncle...
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posted by nessienjake
I dreamt thıs ...fan fıctıon whıle ı was ın a aıroplane to Australıa and told ıt to my sıster she hand wrote ıt ın her dıary and know ı estola ıt and typed ıt warnıng dont be too hard she trıed ıt and shes smaller than me.(lol but ı trıed to ımprove ıt and make ıt longer)
CHAPTER 1 ILLUSION
İ was walking quıckly through the clouded place ın the mıddle of the nıght ın L.A
ı had my MP3 open and ı was sıngıng whıle steppıng on the wet grass.
ı thought ı heard somethıng so ı looked back stıll walkıng...ıt was only a cat lookıng for comida ın the garbage.İ...
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posted by surfergal
When I got into the car, emmet scared the crap out of me he was sitting in the backseat. I dicho " here Emmet tu drive". "no Max will notice if someone is sitting in the front passenger asiento addi" Emmet said. Okay fine I said. When we got far enough away we switched seats to where emmet was driving. I started crying I couldn't control it. Awe Addi, please dont cry on me He said. Do tu think I'm crying on cause i want to? I ask but continued before he could answer. I can't control this Emmet, I can't stop feeling like crap. I just, I don't know anymore. Addi its ok, he said. I'm sorry I shouldnt...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to his house I could see him standing on his side walk. It
makes me happy when I see him. When I got out he dicho sweet ride sis.
I know it's awesome my favorito! kind of car in the world. He ask if it
had a good base in it and I dicho there's only one way to find that
out. So we hoped in my jeep turned up the música and went for a
drive,then he got a call so I took him to the base. He told me sorry
for having to leave and that he would call later.

I had the best people in my life. People to take care of me people who
actually cared. I went back to the house and of course Jacob and Seth...
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posted by surfergal
When we were done treading water it was about 5 am and we got to dry
off and go eat breakfast I think everyone was hungry. We went to class
afterward for what it seemed like forever but we watched a few videos
and answered some preguntas so of wasn't that bad. Then we all went
for a jog. It was so cold outside that tu could see your breath. We
had ran about 2 miles when I started to have trouble breathing. I was
like great. So I fell behind some of the others and Senior Chief was
pulling up the so I fell back behind him a little bit. He asked “if I
was okay” he dicho “that he could hear...
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