This is a fan fiction written por Charlotte, a friend of mine. We both went to Eternal Twilight, the convention, and she entered the fan fic competition with this story and got into the final. Thought I would post it here xD
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a nube in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the césped, hierba and the scent of flores hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my corazón beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different colores his russet pelaje, piel had in the sun o how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my corazón glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t por my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, imágenes of us together, running side por side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned adelante, hacia adelante and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… tu know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a nube in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the césped, hierba and the scent of flores hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my corazón beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different colores his russet pelaje, piel had in the sun o how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my corazón glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t por my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, imágenes of us together, running side por side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned adelante, hacia adelante and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… tu know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
one eager look from tu and por corazón starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would amor tu more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side por side.i want all of tu forever.no less time will ever do
tu say how can tu ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long hace when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of tu and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me por the hand and lead me anywhere.with tu my time is yours to share. i amor you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would amor tu more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side por side.i want all of tu forever.no less time will ever do
tu say how can tu ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long hace when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of tu and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me por the hand and lead me anywhere.with tu my time is yours to share. i amor you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight fan I have joined this club. I fell in amor after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of lectura the books. If tu could please at least say in the beginning of your articulo that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the libros so much más and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for lectura when I shouldn't be. Thank tu so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were oro and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend o girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in amor and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would amor edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the libros yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank tu for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comentario of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in amor and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would amor edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the libros yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank tu for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comentario of wat u think of my article...=þ
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for lectura im really new at this as some of guys can tell