Life Without chocolate is No Life at all

One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. tu know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your preguntas and comments!

I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces por pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

Part 4!!!!!!!! Thanks to tu guys, I made another one! Again with lovely inspiring freedom pictures, and it has to do with the title, i hope tu enjoyed it. I found some of these pictures on tumblr and we corazón it, both great websites and really inspiring. I don't own any of these, but I hope tu enjoy this and it inspires you, it sure inspired me.
I'm going to make another Inspired soon, so look out. Hope I'm inspiring tu my lovely readers and writer's. Write on and live on!
I don't anything (especially the pictures). Enjoy!

We share it everyday,
Oh yes we do.
They are the treasures of the world
That we use.

It's not gold,
Zinc, copper, o silver.
Oil, not even close.

They are
Courage, determination
How women could have their rights
Today

The treasures of the world
The one and only place
Where tu can find people
Of different color and sex

Where tu can find blacks,
Asian, Syrian, and Australian
Oh the people of the world
The treasures of the world

The treasures of the world
Use them wisely
Do not leave them in chains
For the people tu break
They will break tu back.

Oh the treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world