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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood lectura the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

tu are to reportar to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one día after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The escritorio was occupied por a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in pregunta watched silently. “Do tu remember what it was tu did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no mover to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the escritorio had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And tu know why I have to punish tu for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have lost years ago. Is that what tu want! To be ruled por self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the escritorio to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced por the man as he stood and gripped him por the throat.
“I new tu were a rata the día tu were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came adelante, hacia adelante and grabbed him por the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having segundo thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, tu got the guts to do this o are tu going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the escritorio and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way o we can drag it out.” He pulled from his cinturón, correa a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor siguiente to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man dicho something to him before he started walking back to his escritorio to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did tu do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know tu don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance tu get out of this place find the main road until tu reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead tu the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are tu helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a muro where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if tu guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got más seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had dado him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be inicial free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his chaqueta and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was mostrar them.
posted by Knowitall123
 cover of the original Vamp out
cover of the original Vamp out
part 2

****2 Weeks Ago*****
I woke up thinking how this was just another usual día
"Sweetie, we need to talk." my mom dicho seriously while her dragon Vinictus flew around her head
"I didn't do anything wrong, tu don't have any proves."
My dad stopped me and put a hand on my shoulder.
"We kn..what proves?" He asked with a serious face.
"Nothing. What did tu need me?" I tried to change the subject, Dia who just stopped chasing Emmas dragon looked at me.
"Well..we got a latter this morning.." My mom started.
"And it's an Invitation." My dad continued.
"An Invitation?" I was getting interested in it,...
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posted by Knowitall123
half a año hace my friend wrote a story called Vamp out ,but after receiving some mean comentarios she gave up on it and when I asked to do a revamp she agreed.




I have,a pretty much normal life, well not quite as normal as tu think.
You see I'm a Vampire. All of tu who just started running in panic tu can relax. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I live in the UK, to be más precise in London. Maybe tu want to know how I look like. I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and blue eyes...
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added by h3rmioneg
posted by -SilverFey-
It's funny. We're so different. Me and Kein. He's so shy. Quiet. Introverted.

But I think I would die if I couldn't talk to people.

Even our mark. He is curious, true. But he's curious in a different way. He just need to know things, then he's fine. He just needs knowledge.

Me? I need to see those things. Be out in those places he reads about. I want to leave. Go somewhere else. See something no one's seen.

I wonder about the other planes. I want to see them. Travel there. Why can't we? The Faeries are clever. And magickal. They could let us.

Sometimes I don't like the Faeries. What they did. They...
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Aznr ran down the colina to the edge of the cliff. fallen trees scattered the ground and there was no sign of life. Aznr's hair blew back in the wind and memories of the past filled his head...

*Flashback*

Aznr heard a scream that rang through the forest.
Airellion! he thought, immediately recognizing his voice.
'Aznr! LightWater!' he heard the scream again.
This time he ran through the forest towards him. Aznr burst into the clearing and saw Airellion. He had an arrow in his throat and one in his arm. He was surrounded por an army of goblins, all heavily armed.
'Airellion!' called Aznr.
Aznr raised...
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Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something tu don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, más than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope tu like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....
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Ash
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I hurried down the hall, keeping an eye out for Tonia. God, how was I supposed to ask the girl out if I couldn’t find her?
    Out of the corner of my eye I saw movement. I glanced that way, thinking it could be Tonia.
    No, it was just Zoë. She swept out of the bathroom and down the hall. It looked like she was crying.
    “Hey. Zoë,” I called. She didn’t look back.
    I moaned and hurried after her, caught up with her. Then...
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Quin's point of view.
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“I’m dropping out of school,” I announced, slamming open my locker.
    “Why?” Lisa asked, glanced up from stuffing a jacket, a pocketbook, and a stuffed hippo into her backpack.
    “Why do tu think?” I asked. “My secret’s out. I need to drop out of school.”
    Lisa rolled her eyes. “Quin, you’re taking this way too seriously. This is one of those things that everyone teases tu about for one day, and the siguiente day...
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posted by alicia386
I ventured out into the forest. My mission is simple. I must find the woman who gives out free wishes. It was a long journey but the mere thought of what is to come kept me going.

The más I kept walking, the stranger the path got. The trees became short and pink, the sky turned a light pink, and the césped, hierba turned soft as silk. I was near her cave.

"Queen of beauty, luck, and love, mostrar your face to me!" I shouted at the heavens hoping she would come out.

"Who's there?" A whispery voice asked me while I searched for the keeper of the voice.

"It is me, Jason Hills," I dicho to the sky. "I have come...
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The light dimmed, and the first thing Garren notices is the cold, hard ground. Then he notices the howling wind. Then there was the 800 foot drop in front of him....Wait, what?

Garren scrambled back, trying to put as much distance in between him and the cliff edge. Once he was no longer in danger of falling and splattering his guts all over the rocks, he noticed one más thing. His wounds no longer hurt.

Garren lifted his shirt. All of the cuts and bruises the gryphon had dado him had all magically healed. He wondered if the voice had anything to do with this. As if on cue, dicho voice began...
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posted by SilverWings13
"Sethus!" William shouted as he neared the double doors of the sky-scraper. Militiamen stood in a line at attention, modified rifles in their hands. They were garbed in the same black uniforms, armor, and helmets as William and his troops. One of them stepped out of line. He wore a red band around his upper arm.

"Sir?" the youth said.

"Command your men to stand down and retreat."

Without arguing o hesitating, Sethus shouted the orders to his men and ran through the double doors. William waited until every man was inside before he followed.

Civilians in business suits were rushing out the back...
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When I see you,I don't know what to say
I think of you,just about everyday
When your around hysterical,it's unpredictable...with me,I try to be serious,buts it's no use...

(Chorus) When I look at you,I turn away,When I hear your name,I try a different way, (fast) Your smile is alluring,and your eyes always occuring on my mind, If I explain I'll go insane,so I'll keep my mind blank,The ángeles are jealous about tu from up above,and though tu dont know it;you always give me La-la love,yeah,La-la love

When I sing,to me,you play the music,Im intrigued-sing with me,oh oh
When I dance tu tu dance too,In everything I do,To me,Your here,so what Im having fantasies,who cares?

(Chorus)

My corazón is pounding,No sound surrounds me,exept your velvety voice...I'll say it once again,Your the música in my head,I can't build up to it any other way,Ive already done as much as I may...

(Chorus) LA,la,la,la,la tu give me...love
posted by Problematic129
*So I really don't know where this came from, it just popped in my head. It's a bit sad, but I hope tu enjoy. I dedicate this to all kind people and people who are having hard times. Please don't copy, comentarios and fans would be lovely*
These are tears, tears that I cry
    They leak down my face, from my raining eye
    The pain, how it hurts, oh if it wasn’t so
    My life could be easy, my life could be nice
    But yet I’m still writhing, stuck in the ice
    I feel so cold, as I scream and...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter 11: When It All Comes To An End

Senior Year
      This was the most legendary party ever. All of the seniors were invited to meet up at Glynn Academy. They was going to throw the wildest and most illegal party ever and it was all thanks to Jason Rivers, Jena Ross, Joseph Knight, Marco Martinez and Carter Stone. They all were in the D.B.E together o Drive por Enterprises. Sammy Mitchell had chosen Jason who chosen his friends to be apart of this business.
      This business was to help make the world a better place. If someone has a problem with somebody else, tu have to kill that...
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Welcome all to the segundo issue of Everything Eden, your fuente for…well, everything Eden. In this issue, we'll be looking at the finall six libros of the Eden Chronicles. These six volumes tell of love, life, death, and hatred. Let's have a look.

A LITTLE BIT más THAN LOVE
As this volume has been discussed many times, it is not necessary to reveal anything here.

RISE OF THE DEMONS
Young Areana grew up sheltered from the battles her parents fought. Now, with the demons rising, new threats will make themselves known.

ROKUJO'S REVOLUTION
This book deals with the Failed Revolution. Crown Prince...
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posted by alicia386
One más chapter left!

Chapter 10: Do tu Swear to Tell the Truth and Nothing But the Truth

      Simone stared wide eyed through the bars locking her into the cell. It was the only thing that kept her from snapping everyone's heads off. The guard was gone but replaced por another man. He was tall, muscular, and had the most unscrupulous  grin on his face. It made Simone feel extremely uncomfortable. He had jet black hair and light green eyes. His eyes were sincere at time when he looked at her, but other times he made the hairs on the back of Simone's neck stand up. She didn't like this guy...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 10!!! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I had school, I'm now in high school! Freshman! So it was really time consuming, but I couldn't let tu down, I own nothing, all these pictures are not mine. There here fro the main purpose to inspire tu and put that smile right back on your face. Renew your faith, laugh at the sky, smile forever, and never cry. I believe in tu guys, I amor tu guys, tu are awesome, beautiful, amazing, cool, and you. And I don't need a picture of tu to know that, don't let them take tu down. In the end be the one standing and never lose hope. I won nothing. Enjoy!
A/N: here's chapter 2 of my story

So for 8 years the Twins where kept inside there inicial with no connection to the outside world. They had learned How to control there powers when they where 8. They kept on getting stronger each día that they practiced, they practiced 2 times a week.

The now 12 año old girl sighed looking out the window, she wished one día that she could go outside and meet people her own Age.

"What's wrong?" she turned around to see her brother Flame. "nothing, its just I want to go out there." her brother sighed as well "yeah me to, I want to see this land and the people. Frosta...
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posted by alicia386
(i thought this would be a very interesting teenage short story to tell. FYI i completely made this up on the spot. i have a very creative mind)

It was that perfect moment. My boyfriend, Liam, and I were just causually on the sofá watching another episode of America's siguiente parte superior, arriba Model. I was watching it for the fashion and he was watching it for the girls although he would never admit it. We were just sitting their having fun and sometimes makeouting but tu dont need all the details.

His tan arm was around me and i was laying my head on his chest. I thought nothing could possible ruin this moment...
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posted by IlovePatch97
im gonna be away so here is 2 chapters for you. please comment, it will make me a better writter. Thank tu :D




CHAPTER 3

I woke up to an extremely bright sun in my face and hot sand in my hair. I must not have been in the sun for long because I hadn't burnt yet. I could hear the sound of human laughter but it felt like it was coming from the inside of my head, all I could smell was smoke from a camp fire. I rolled over and pushed myself up off the sand and I looked around, still trying to figure out what happened. All I remembered was the egg, the flash of colour, and feeling I was falling from...
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