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Chapter (17):
"Glad tu came dude" dicho Josh, "Yeah" replied Noah "Aren't tu three going to sit down o wait to be invited?" asked Bonnie, Noah stalked away from Abbie and Leo, and settled himself siguiente to Bonnie, Abbie and Leo sat in the two remaining chairs side por side, "Your Noah's sister Abbie right?" asked Josh, Abbie noticed that Bonnie and Josh weren't pale haired but there hair was deep golden blonde like their mother, "Yes, your Susie's cousin right?" she asked, "Yeah, I am do tu know her?" he answered with a ghost of a smile, "Yes, we go to the same school and she's in few of my classes" dicho Abbie, Josh opened his mouth to say something to Abbie but Noah cut him of, "How are tu feeling?" he asked, "Better now that I have actual company" he dicho grinning at Abbie, Leo and Noah "Uhh..Sorry for the loss of your cousin Lily" dicho Abbie quiteley to Josh and Bonnie, "It's okay Abbie" replied Bonnie noticing that her brother's eyes filled with tears the moment he heard Lily's name, "What's wrong Josh?" asked Noah, "Nothing man..I just think I saw her" answered Josh, "Oh here he goes again!" dicho Bonnie, "What?!" asked Leo "When he died for a few minutos back in the ambulancia he claims he became a ghost and saw Lily's" dicho Bonnie, "It's true I did see her and if it weren't for her I would have been dead for good!!" yelled Josh, and again he let out a yelp of pain and clutched his stomach tightly, "Josh!!" Bonnie shrieked again, "I'm fine, I'm fine" he said, "Bonnie can I have a word with you?" Noah asked Bonnie, "Sure" she replied looking surprised, "In private.." continued Noah "Okay" she dicho and got to her feet, Noah followed and they both headed out of the room, "I'll go get some drinks, want anything tu guys?" dicho Leo, "Coffee please" dicho Abbie, "Just a bottle of water" dicho Josh, "Okay" dicho Leo and he headed out of the room, there was a very short silence in the room, "Abbie" dicho Josh breaking the silence, Abbie looked up "Yes" she replied, "nothing just checking if tu were there cause tu seemed so lost in thought" he dicho smiling at her, she smiled back at him, "How old are you?" asked Abbie, "How old do tu think I am?" he replied, "I don't know maybe nineteen.." dicho Abbie, "Close..I'm twenty, and you?" he replied, "Seventeen" she said, he smiled at her again this time más stronger than the weak smiles he gave them all before, she smiled back at him, "This may sound really weird but...are tu single?" he asked,"Yes..why ask?" she dicho now struggling to hold in an laugh, "I think your cute..that's why" he answered now grinning, "Well you'll have to wait till I'm eighteen." she dicho grinning back, "Or I could tell parents that I'm eighteen" he said, they both laughed Abbie was surprised that Josh could actually laugh after losing his cousin and getting stabbed in the stomach, but she couldn't help but wonder that maybe She was the reason he was laughing, "What's so funny?" asked Leo who just stepped into the room holding a two steaming styrofoam Coffee cups in his hands and a bottle of cold water under his arm, "nothing I just told Josh a joke, thought he could use some cheering up" dicho Abbie grinning at Josh and accepting the steaming coffee cup from Leo, "Have tu ever wondered if your Best Friend could use some cheering up" dicho Leo handing Josh his water bottle, "Umm..No your always happy" dicho Abbie, Josh choked on his water on his attempt to hold in a laugh, "Where are Bonnie and Noah did tu see them on your way to the canteen and back?" asked Abbie, Leo opened his mouth to answer when the door burst open and Noah and Bonnie stepped inside, "Quickly turn on the televisión it's about the murder!" panted Bonnie, Leo tossed the remote to Bonnie who turned on the T.V and both she and Noah squeezed them selves in a chair side por side, "This a just in..two days after the Murder of innocent eleven año old Lilian Gellar, an investigation has been held in the crime scene in Mapel creek" dicho the news anchor in the T.V, "Lilian's backpack was found in the creek, just two hours hace from now inside it was a number of school books, textbooks and a bloodstained nine inch pocket knife, shown in the picture of the right side of the screen" she continued her tone stiff,while a picture of the bloodstained nine inch cuchillo appeared just as she dicho on the right side of screen, Josh, Bonnie, Leo, Abbie and Noah all examined it closely,  "The blood on the pocket cuchillo was analyzed and it turned out to be an exact match Lilian's, the pocket cuchillo also contained the initials 'BTC' which definitely could belong to the murderer, who might have attempted to drag Lilian in the creek after her backpack, who knows? But 'BTC' who and where ever tu are, tu will be found" she concluded and Bonnie turn the TV of, "Wow, not only our cousin died but she died stabbed with a nine inch pocket knife" dicho Josh tossing his empty water bottle aside, "And who the hell is 'BTC'?" asked Bonnie hoping to get an answer out of them, "Maybe that's the guy which Susie dicho ran away once he saw her in the bushes" dicho Leo, "or girl" added Noah, "Yeah maybe, but Susie told us that Lily went out for walk" dicho Abbie, "What?" dicho Noah, Bonnie and Josh at the same time, "I'll explain,when we found Susie and Lily's body she told us -Me and Leo-,that Lily asked their mom if she could go for a walk then Lily didn't mostrar up for hours so she went looking for her and she heard her scream twice, so she ran and hid in the bushes but the murderer noticed her and I'm guessing stabbed Lily again and made her scream and ran away, then on my way inicial Susie asked me how did we find her and Lily's body and I remember that we told her in the crime scene that we heard Lily screaming, so I wondered why would she ask again and finally I heard her mom in the funeral say that She was at work." dicho Abbie, "Yeah, that's right I heard her too" dicho Leo looking confused and surprised at the same time, "Could it have been possible that Lily was attacked on her way inicial from school and that Susie might have been involved in the murder o that she witnessed it but was threatened to shut up o get killed?" asked Noah and the five glared at each other in complete silence.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 15
        A Gal’s talk
    “Talia, I’m so sorry that tu have to leave so early, but my parents, not very trusting. Plus they already have a full plate…so…the gal’s are leaving soon, again sorry, looking adelante, hacia adelante to the siguiente sleepover.”
    Gosh, I almost believed myself!
    “Sure!” Talia beamed, clueless. “See tu later, Pal!”
    “Buddy,” I saluted her.
    Ryler shook his head as soon as the...
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posted by 1999jacko
action o fantasía I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on parte superior, arriba of the tall, sturdy árbol looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen o heard nothing and decided to make the oscilación back to the árbol he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying por at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with frambuesa yellow, o remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be friends glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...
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escritura Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at escritura on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as tu write, if tu worry about spelling, grammar, o how to sell your book while tu write, tu are escritura with a dull pencil.

There are many libros written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story tu are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the título "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope tu all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A fantasía NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years hace ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by alicia386
I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This lista is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, o cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places o events where escape is impossible o when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces o of being in public places. Fear of leaving a seguro place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
My alarm went off telling me that my nightmare aka combat training with Dimitri was about to begin in a half hour. Although I wanted to go back to sleep like any other normal person in the neighborhood, I came out of bed, dressed and went downstairs to eat something light. I knew the consequences if I wasn’t on time, Dimitri would give me one hell of an culo whooping training and I would be the one who would get the post punches. Dimitri was one of my father’s best fighters and God knows how many battles he’d won, the guy was fast as hell. I could only guess what kind of training he would...
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posted by Problematic129
*I've gotten the first six chapters done, still working on it and Remember me. Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Friends and my dream guy
    One thing tu need to know about me, is I am not normal. I tend to do things differently, right now, I am sitting on my bed, rifling through my awesome ipod in my favorito! colores green, orange, and yellow.
    If tu have an ick face on, I’ll mostrar tu my favorito! finger. I happen to like these colors, there eye popping, different. A color that most people breeze past to...
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posted by hgfan5602
It's sad
It's the truth
Fighting through what it is
But I'll be stronger

I've gone through
Mounds of pain
I've been through
The deepest waters

Nobody can change my past
It's the truth, and it changed me
Sad to even hear the truth
Sad to...say the truth

Reality's always sad
And no one's gonna escape it.
It's how I became who I am today
It's how I didn't brag.

Why does this have to happen?
Why did it have to end?
Why does the world have to be so confusing?
Why did the fun have to end?

The world's just a crazy place
And no one's gonna stop that thought
Cause I'm broken for good...
Because of...the truth.
posted by dragonsmemory
In Eden, there are many different races. As a whoe, they are called Kinds. Each Kind has a capital city, sends its rulers to the Ruling Council, and contributes its own history to that of Eden. In this article, I will be discussing the Ruling Council and draconian politics, as both are difficult to understand.

THE RULING COUNCIL
The Ruling Council is comprised of the leaders of each Kind (except demons) in Eden. The Council meets at the summit of Councilpeak, located in the corazón of the Broadplain area. There is a single road spiraling up the mountain, as well as a landing ledge on the south...
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the first part: link

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help tu sir, are tu sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank tu i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- respuestas Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask tu some pregunta mrs...-
-Samantha White- respuestas the girl -And of...
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 My terrifying enemy, Cat.
My terrifying enemy, Cat.
(Okay, so this is one of my weirder entries, but I just thought what it would be like for that yarn. This big thing pouncing on tu and stuff, anyway, here it is.)

So, today I was just lounging in the sewing room when this big naranja thing swiped a paw at me and caused me to roll out of the basket. The thing swiped at me yet again and I remembered what my parents were talking about one night. "That cat thing almost rolled me completely out of shape and into a completely flat string!"
"That must have been horrifying, honey!" My dad had replied. I wasn't paying much attention to the conversation...
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posted by Problematic129
Just a little uplifting, includes pictures that's funny, and things that I hope makes tu smile.
Because smiling and laughing are very healthy to your corazón and your emotional being, if your down get happy.
Life sometimes gets hard, and when I smile I usually feel better, so if your feeling down this will be a great help to.
We all have problems, o something that sets us off our course. Life was never meant to be easy, we just have to accept that and take that step forward. Let go of all our fears, because there’s nothing to be afraid of.    
    Your...
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posted by wantadog
The Succubus, Prologue!
Downsized


“You called for me?” the young succubus, Odessa, knelt before her lord. She knew that she was about to be chewed out, but she didn’t care anymore, she would take whatever punishment he deemed fit, then leave his presence until her siguiente one. Lord Arlon glared at her.
“You have some nerve, tu have repeatedly disobeyed me in the past, but now tu have gone too far. tu have broken one rule too many, and this one was a serious one.”
She kept her head bowed respectfully, but inwardly sneered at the fool. “You and I have differing opinions, my lord.”
Arlon...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Tell me darling why tu cry,
Your tears stain the cama tu lay upon
Could it be tu miss the ones tu clung to so tight,
Nothing but a scared little fawn
The flames burnt away your past and future,
The hate did nothing but balance your grief
What now? That’s presents question,
Something so fragile like a branch being clung to por a leaf
Where is your mother little dove?
What happened to those loving others who filled your empty nest?
How many word of the world can tu rhyme with love?
Perhaps someday we will know with, proper care and rest
When pursuing dreams take chances and strive for nothing less than best
Then only then can tu be sure you’ve completed life’s most demanding quest
posted by hgfan5602
Almighty eagle,
Soar, soar
Soar beyond your wildest dreams.....

There's no limit
On how much tu can soar
No one can
Break your wings and kill you

Soar for the skies,
Don't let the feelin go
Just soar, soar like never before
No one's gonna stop you
From believin

There wasn't a time
When nobody could never soar
But there was a time
When people never believed

And tomorrow
Isn't the día to fall
And nobody's gonna push tu down
Oh almighty eagle

We're gonna be the powerful eagles
We're not gonna let anyone
Be our ruler,
We're not anyone's slave

Almighty eagle
Oh soar, soar towards the sky's height
And soar toward your dream
Let nothing keep tu away

Almighty eagle
Soar beyond your wildest dreams
And we're gonna fly tonight
Let nobody keep us down.
posted by Problematic129
*Sorry for the wait, writer's block showed it's ugly head. Thanks for all the comentarios :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 3
    A strange vision
    “Was he hot?” My best friend Jessica asked. I groaned, of course that would be the first thing she asked.
    After that introduction, I drove straight to Jessica’s house, knowing she would rebel and not go to school, because she dicho and I quote ‘Monday doesn’t count as a school día in my book’. Ever since the first día of eighth grade, she hasn’t attended...
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posted by sadiebugz00
Life can be hard. Especially for me, Lily West, your almost-average 16-year-old girl. Most people think it's weird I'm bald. Others think I'm going to die. Then there's the occasional person who tries to take pity upon me. I'd rather they not, because some say it like I'm a helpless little tortuga on its back. Sometimes I wish I die already, and sometimes I wish that I was a completely different person. Yes, it's tough having cancer. I just wish that they would respect me for a person instead of a helpless little bug.
posted by Dhampires
I ran fast my corazón pounding hard against my chest, my breaths short causing my sheet to burn like fuego from the icy cold. I could only hear those pounding footsteps behind me I have to keep going, keep even an inches distance from him. I couldn't no I would not let him of all people catch me.

I ran faster and faster hard as I could I was tempted ti look back but was to afraid if I did he'd appear right behind me. "Brother! Save me please!" I crude out into the dark I got no reply back "Brian please come to me, I need tu I don't want to die brother! Save me!" I screamed out at the top...
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