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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the fans and comentarios :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 16
        Remembering is hard for the soul
    As soon as my parents heard the news, they came storming through the hospital and taking me out of there despite my doctors best wishes. I smiled at him and gave him a thumbs up to mostrar him I was okay, and he did the phone symbol and mouthed call me. I was glad he stayed por my side after that horrible ordeal, he and Cadence stayed por side me throughout the night.
    I was spooked and I told them both about my dream, even though I was sure he doubted my story, he listened and asked preguntas like Cadence. I was happy that it seemed that he believed me, and he was extra curious about Bubble gum.
    So was I, I explained it over and over but it still seemed impossible. How could she know I was there? Was she pyschic too?
    My parents parked the car in front of our house, my mom gently grabbed me and carefully led me upstairs to my room. When we reached my room my parents tucked me in my cama and looked at me concernedly. I could see them better and my mom looked pale and scared while dad looked lost.
    “Are tu okay, sweetie?” Mom asked me.
    I nodded. “Better now, mom did tu get any sleep?”
    Mom shook her head, “doesn’t matter now, as long as your okay.”
    I nod as my mom kisses my cheek, she casts one más worried glance at me. “Call me if tu need anything.”
    “I will.”
    She gives me a dazzling smile and leaves the room, dad stares at me a few segundos before begrudgingly following my mother. It was weird, it was as if they switched roles, mom looked worried while dad looked annoyed.
    I shake my confused thoughts as I think back to the girl with the bubble gum hair, she had dicho Serache, that must be her name. But I’m sure now that she wasn’t the one who had tried to suffocate me, but she probably was just was as important.
    I’m going to need to find her. But that’s going to take some time.
    And I’ll have to wait.
    Or maybe not, I think as I close my eyes and think of the girl again and my sister, I might just get another vision if I’m lucky.
    If only my sister had something, anything, that can conjure anything up. I’ve racked my brains for hours, but still I have no idea of a girl named Serache with bubble gum hair. I sighed.
    I stood up and went to my closet, I pried off the special tile and my hand searched for something that I haven’t touched for years. It took a while but soon enough I felt my hands close on a hard surface. I closed my eyes for a second, took a deep breathe and then pulled my hand with the object out of the tile.
    It was a a craft book, designed por a giddy young pre-teen whose family was happy back then. There’s all kinds of pictures of us in there, I remember dedicating most of my time into this. And when our family did break apart, I put even más time into it, I’d take thousands of pictures, I remember even Dorothy complaining.
    Serache didn’t look familiar, none of them did, but maybe, just maybe, I met them. Probably walking por them on the street, o when Dorothy and I went to the mall and a ton of her friends stopped her to say hi. It could’ve been anytime, I had to spot at least one of them.
    I flipped the pages, cringing at our extremely bright smiles, if only we knew what would’ve happened, we wouldn’t have been that happy. It was agonizing to look at every picture without having to feel the wave of sadness, hopelessness, and anger that course through me, but I pushed aside my thoughts and kept looking at every picture.
    I had to study them, and look más closely, in case there was a detail I’ve never noticed before. After minutos of endless nothings I stopped at one certain picture. It was of me and Dorothy, bright smiles pastered on our faces and hands on our hips in a sassy attitude style.
    There was probably nothing wrong with that, but if tu looked behind us there was something strange. They wore normal clothes, looking ordinary. Their head was turned toward us, their hair long that it reached past their belt, covering their face perfectly. All I could see was a portion of their lips, which were full and pouty, their body was obviously female, I would probably be worried if that was not the case.
    The only other indicator of importance was the hair color, a dark sheen of black, the same color I have a reason to believe my attacker’s hair was. Could it be?
    It was hard to tell if I had seen her before, she was shielded perfectly. Did she do that on purpose? Did she know the camera would get her? I furrowed my eyebrows as I studied her hard, waiting for any fuente of recognition, but it never came.
    Frustrated I took that picture aside, and started to look through the other ones. But they barely had anything except indicators of where my sister has been. One picture made me pause in particular, we were at one of those shopping plaza’s, it was a sister-sister thing we wanted to try.
    I was practically floating the morning of our day, Dorothy was having a good laugh at my happiness, but I couldn’t help it. I got to spend time with a sister I adored, it was one of the happiest days of my life.
    I closed my eyes and smiled, remembering how I felt, and then when I opened my eyes I was standing the plaza shopping place.
    I smiled to myself, finally a good memory, even if it was a vision.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19    
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into más prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed o anything, but because the minuto I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasía :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, o at least siguiente to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...
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His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a segundo he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought tu here, dicho I was the only one that could save tu so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....
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I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd dicho firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the cuchillo against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....
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posted by alicia386
Action: Spy Fiction

Chapter Two: I May Be A Spy But Weather Can Kick My Butt Any Day

      I and almost everyone else is the world takes life for granted. I didn't realize how good I had it until something hit our jet which immediately caught on fire. Years of training for disasters like this kicked in. I was on high alert looking for the nearest exit. My dad was already at one with two parachutes. Dang it. How could he have possibly have gotten those that fast? This would not seem impressive. Our pilot was already trying desperately to control the jet. It was like he wasn't afraid of those...
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posted by 1999jacko
4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little día dream. He ran over to the mesa, tabla where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he dicho hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need tu to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take tu to your new home." All...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat siguiente to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, siguiente to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Once we were all done swarming each other, Leila helped Claire and I through the little herd of cousins, upstairs, to our room. Where usually tu would take a left and be looking at their bedroom doors and a bathroom, we took a right at the parte superior, arriba of the stairs so we were faced with a room i hadn't seen before. The interior was a pale, almost skin like beige that was cracked and peeling in some spots, especially where our beds were pushed against the wall. Beside each cama was a small mesa, tabla with drawers and a lamp. In between us was a large window, creating a distorted patch of light on the scratched...
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Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what tu would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the converse store siguiente door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
I have thirty T-shirts that say oveja vampiros Rock on them. Yeah, I amor the horror movie "Sheep Vampires." It's filled with oveja that get tortured and wake up at midnight only to turn into oveja vampiros that suck the blood out of their shepherds. It's rated R, but my parents never notice. I bet they don't even know there's a rating system. Lucky for me.
So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of coca cola left from an año hace shimmered. A misty face appeared.
"Jonas...come here to me...or tu shall suffer the consequences...like your precious ancestors," the woman screamed.
Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?
 Jonas's glass of coca cola
Jonas's glass of Coke
posted by 1999jacko
because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran adelante, hacia adelante into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY friends that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

There was this one summer I spent with my cousins, back when I was fourteen. My little sister, Claire, went to their house with me.
That first day, when we jumped out of the van, we were stunned. The house was this glorious, leaning, peeling, giant inicial on a winding dirt road. The paint was a soft baby blue, something that reminded me of rocking caballos and winter nights. Our Auntie Leila stepped onto the rickety porch and waved and smiled. Cautiously, Claire and I waved and smiled back. Uncle Jeb came to give us hugs. We returned the hugs without complaining....
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 8
    That was not subtle
    “My reports so good! I’ll get at least a D!” I squealed as Beth and I walked towards the school.
    Beth frowned. “A D? Why not aim for B?”
    “Honey the last time I got a B, was when one stung me.” I informed her.
    “You can at least try, bubs, it can’t be that hard.” Beth reasoned as reached the school parking lot.
    “Impossible tu know I- hola look it’s Grey!” I yell when I see him on his motor cycle. “Hi...
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posted by rory2011
David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the segundo floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are tu Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David dicho
" sit down please " the officer dicho
David sat on that black sofá near the officer disk
" sir ,could tu please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David dicho
" today there was a fuego in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comentarios and fans :) Please don't copy and please read and review. Note, my stories might be publicado later than usual, so your forewarned. Thanks for tuning in!!!*
Chapter 6
    Sage, the really strange red head
    I feel my blood boil when I see my gals outside drooling over football players outside with no shirts on. I suppress the urge to roll my eyes, Sage’s practically fanning herself, Ali has no shame in giving them the stalker look, and Beth is too pre-occupied on her phone.
    I stomp towards them. “How...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comentarios and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 5
    Okay I’ll- wait what
    We danced liked the crazy people we were, close yet strange, sweet yet insane, cool yet tender, happy yet…something else. I hoped that Cal was noticing, I haven’t seen him since he and Grey left the kitchen.
    Sage and Beth came back after there bathroom break and joined us, and soon we were the four friends of awesome dancing together.
    When we took break, Grey and (girly squeal please) Cal...
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posted by hgfan5602
This is a crazy song I wrote called Rotten Tomatoes, and I hired the Black-Eyed Peas to sing it. WARNING: This song was meant for entertainment, and should in no way be connected to real people, places, o things. It is not the author's responsibility for the medical bills if tu die from laughter, o possibly, thinking I'm weirdness.
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converse is awesome
The Westing Game is gruesome
My friends all ran
When they heard me say that

People say I'm weird
But look over there then,
That teen has a
White, fluffy beard

chocolate coins rock
They're the celebs of the block
They're creamy and sweet
Cuz they always go to swim meets

I amor Harry Potter
o was it manzana, apple Rotter?
It was everyone's favorite,
But it soon molded.

Now, I'm almost five
And I live in a hive,
Like my other amigos
Who live in anthills!
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for the comentarios and fans :) I just noticed I put Ch.3 for Ch.2, my mistake I can be so dumb sometimes. But! I fixed it. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 3
    We all amor the great Beth
    Back to the story, Ali was right, the new substitute was HOT, por the time class was over the girl sitting siguiente to my had drowned in a pool of her own drool. We make our way to the cafeteria and listen to one of many of Beth’s crazy stories, it’s basically this lame story that she recreates improvising as she goes along.
    That’s...
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posted by rory2011
two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought comida and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...
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posted by Problematic129
*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the comentarios and fans :) Please read, review and don't copy*
Chapter 2
    Evil takes true form
    So right now I’m talking to my best friend, Beth, as were walking to our class. As we were talking Grey Callister interrupted us.
    With his flawless gold-blonde hair and warm brown eyes, it isn’t a surprise he’s wanted por most girls. I hate to admit when I first laid eyes on him, my legs turned jello and I didn’t want to look away, but later on I realized he was a conceited jerk.
    So...
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