Please can people look at a rough cut to our música video for When I grow Up? We would appreciate any input :)

i think this is wicked guys ! i look adelante, hacia adelante to seeing so much más from tu ! i think its great im 13 and i think this really inspires girls my age . ive shown friends and they also amor it!
i like the end part as it fits the beat and is very fast.
i dont like the shaky footage
over all really good though very impressed ! xoxo