Star:is some thing wong?
Shock:nothing it's only that I'm tired!
Star:ok let's rest then!
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One super Emily min later!
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Shock:ok so how do we get to ángel island?
Star:how should I know I'm only 6 years-old!
Shock:wow! I'm 11 years old.(or is he 10?)
Star:I think my uncle John lives here?
Shock:-_- omg!
Star:you do no that I can fight 2!
Shock:OK OK! Now let's go find your uncle!
And I will stop there! JK!
Star:ok!
One super Sonic min later!
Shock:it's getting late let's go and (yawns) sleep!
Star:(yawns too) ok.
So they left and whent to sleep some where. And I well stop there! Well that's all folks!
Shock:nothing it's only that I'm tired!
Star:ok let's rest then!
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One super Emily min later!
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Shock:ok so how do we get to ángel island?
Star:how should I know I'm only 6 years-old!
Shock:wow! I'm 11 years old.(or is he 10?)
Star:I think my uncle John lives here?
Shock:-_- omg!
Star:you do no that I can fight 2!
Shock:OK OK! Now let's go find your uncle!
And I will stop there! JK!
Star:ok!
One super Sonic min later!
Shock:it's getting late let's go and (yawns) sleep!
Star:(yawns too) ok.
So they left and whent to sleep some where. And I well stop there! Well that's all folks!
Star:(wakes up) um.... Where am I? (starts to walk around)
Shock:WOW this mexicin comida is great!
Star:Um hi my name is Star.
Shock:(turns around and sees her all wet) omg what to tu happen?!
Star:I.. I don't know?(eyes get watery)
Shock:don't cry! Please don't cry!
Star:Why?
Shock:ok let's just go and find some one who knows tu ok!
Star:ok.
One super shadow minit later!
Shock:do tu know some one who lives here?
Star:um no I live with my brother Jason.
Shock:ok where dose he live?
Star:On ángel Island!
Shock:-_-'
Well I'm going to stop there see ya later!
Shock:WOW this mexicin comida is great!
Star:Um hi my name is Star.
Shock:(turns around and sees her all wet) omg what to tu happen?!
Star:I.. I don't know?(eyes get watery)
Shock:don't cry! Please don't cry!
Star:Why?
Shock:ok let's just go and find some one who knows tu ok!
Star:ok.
One super shadow minit later!
Shock:do tu know some one who lives here?
Star:um no I live with my brother Jason.
Shock:ok where dose he live?
Star:On ángel Island!
Shock:-_-'
Well I'm going to stop there see ya later!
The Story
It's all very nice, Shock's gonna save teh world, even a little subplot with the whole 'JUDAS MALICE' thing.
Problem is, I've seen it before....
The Problem
NUMBAH ONE.
Shock is kinda a weird form of the Messiah.
All liek, 'WEWT, IMMA REDEEM THE WURLD =D'
Maybe más closely being related to Aang (it's AYNG, ban tu M. Night Shamalan. tu SCREWED UP THE SERIES AND I WILL FOREVER HATE YOU.)
Aang has been reborn countless times and stoof, and has epic powas to save teh world from the fuego Lord.
And the whole, 'WHY, MALICE?! WHYYYY?!!!'
Ish overused -3-
Wouldn't the NAME Malice tip tu off, Shock?
[b]THANKS FOW READIN, THETACOMAN[/i]
It's all very nice, Shock's gonna save teh world, even a little subplot with the whole 'JUDAS MALICE' thing.
Problem is, I've seen it before....
The Problem
NUMBAH ONE.
Shock is kinda a weird form of the Messiah.
All liek, 'WEWT, IMMA REDEEM THE WURLD =D'
Maybe más closely being related to Aang (it's AYNG, ban tu M. Night Shamalan. tu SCREWED UP THE SERIES AND I WILL FOREVER HATE YOU.)
Aang has been reborn countless times and stoof, and has epic powas to save teh world from the fuego Lord.
And the whole, 'WHY, MALICE?! WHYYYY?!!!'
Ish overused -3-
Wouldn't the NAME Malice tip tu off, Shock?
[b]THANKS FOW READIN, THETACOMAN[/i]