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Please would tu tell me if this poem is good?

“Wings of Moonlight”

Flying softly on beams of moonlight
Floating softly on beams of light, tonight
Hearing fragments of distant conversations
Swiftly drifting over nations
Moonlight reflecting on his wings
The campana of a distant chapel rings
Then he descends to the earth
What, to him, is life worth?
Through an open window he flies
Waiting for the surprise
In he flies on moonlight wings
His bow of death, he strings
He aims, he shoots
This he does with all his recruits
The arrow hits its spot
The horse of death is in its trot
He flies away on moonlit wings
He flies away on moonlit wings

 Claudia4599 posted hace más de un año
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bookworm103 said:
HOLY CRAP that is amazing.
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THanks!
Claudia4599 posted hace más de un año
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