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Is this a good poem and do tu think más could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke o saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
tu had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
o your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
tu dicho it was akward
And that tu still amor me
But I think I pushed tu too far
What did I do
To make tu push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want tu in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for tu even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if tu want me back
Prove tu won't hurt me again
Never again tu will tu hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
tu fucked up









 MattxAliceNine posted hace más de un año
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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think tu have to add anything else its perfect :)
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posted hace más de un año 
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Thank you. Im glad tu liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
MattxAliceNine posted hace más de un año
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
wolfgirl985 posted hace más de un año
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Glad tu liked it
MattxAliceNine posted hace más de un año
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