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Is this good for a tweve año old? Its a song called " i miss you" written por a twelve año old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if tu do the same, while tu look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked tu out of all the guys. now will tu do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of tu día and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do tu miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss tu and your gentle touch. i wish that tu were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that tu could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till tu reach me... and wait for tu to kiss me.
 Monicaluv posted hace más de un año
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 año old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine por the time she is 17 o so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This escritura isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good escritura wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve año old. :)
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