-Ray picks her up and takes her to her room and lays her down when hes about to leave Mari says something-
Mari: They killed my mother..
Ray: *walks to her cama and sits on the edge* Who?
Mari: Her boss and his boys...they shot her in front of me. Her boss was mad because she wouldn't fecha him...she knew how I felt about her dating. *breaking down* she was my best friend *sobbing* she tried to be the best. Days when she was down she still tried....my mother never missed anything. And now *crying hard* she's gone.
Ray: *lays beside her and holds her* I know she is smiling from heaven because you've managed to stay strong. You're a strong girl Mari.
Mari: I amor tu Ray.
Ray: I amor tu too Mari.
-Many weeks go por and the boys' behavior changes. All thanks to the girls. Their grades are better. They help everybody that's in need. Not only that but they all start dating...one día Nique and Gigi are hanging out at the park until this misceláneo girl comes out of no where.-
???: I've been seeing tu with that low down nigga. *eyeballing Gigi*
Gigi: Who? And...stalker much.?!
???: Roc
Nique: Why the hell tu worried?? And who the heck are you?
Ki: Nothing its just that when he o should I say they treat y'all girls like shit don't say a word and I'm Ki'Loni.
Gigi: Listen, Ki'Loni..the fellas have changed so hop off and leave us alone..Nique let's go...*walks away*
-About three months go por and everybody is closer than ever, until Gigi's segundo period...there is a new boy and he sits with Gianna.-
???: Hey.
Gigi: Umm hi.
Dre: I'm Andre Ford...you are?
Gigi: Gianna Freeman...look I have a project and no partner so I need all the silence in the world.
Dre: Shawty, I can be ya partner. We did this at my old school.
Gigi: Thanks.
Dre: Come over tonight I live in Miranda Gardens.
Gigi: My boyfriend lives in that neighborhood.
Dre: *scoffs*
Gigi: Is there a problem?
Dre: Nah babygirl.
Gigi: Don't ever call me that. I let it slide once. We just met, but when I come over we can talk. Sounds good?
Dre: Yeah. I'm sorry.
Gigi: Its okay just help me.
-For some odd reason school let out really early and everybody went home...The girls went to Miranda Gardens and chilled while Gigi was with Dre.-
Mari: They killed my mother..
Ray: *walks to her cama and sits on the edge* Who?
Mari: Her boss and his boys...they shot her in front of me. Her boss was mad because she wouldn't fecha him...she knew how I felt about her dating. *breaking down* she was my best friend *sobbing* she tried to be the best. Days when she was down she still tried....my mother never missed anything. And now *crying hard* she's gone.
Ray: *lays beside her and holds her* I know she is smiling from heaven because you've managed to stay strong. You're a strong girl Mari.
Mari: I amor tu Ray.
Ray: I amor tu too Mari.
-Many weeks go por and the boys' behavior changes. All thanks to the girls. Their grades are better. They help everybody that's in need. Not only that but they all start dating...one día Nique and Gigi are hanging out at the park until this misceláneo girl comes out of no where.-
???: I've been seeing tu with that low down nigga. *eyeballing Gigi*
Gigi: Who? And...stalker much.?!
???: Roc
Nique: Why the hell tu worried?? And who the heck are you?
Ki: Nothing its just that when he o should I say they treat y'all girls like shit don't say a word and I'm Ki'Loni.
Gigi: Listen, Ki'Loni..the fellas have changed so hop off and leave us alone..Nique let's go...*walks away*
-About three months go por and everybody is closer than ever, until Gigi's segundo period...there is a new boy and he sits with Gianna.-
???: Hey.
Gigi: Umm hi.
Dre: I'm Andre Ford...you are?
Gigi: Gianna Freeman...look I have a project and no partner so I need all the silence in the world.
Dre: Shawty, I can be ya partner. We did this at my old school.
Gigi: Thanks.
Dre: Come over tonight I live in Miranda Gardens.
Gigi: My boyfriend lives in that neighborhood.
Dre: *scoffs*
Gigi: Is there a problem?
Dre: Nah babygirl.
Gigi: Don't ever call me that. I let it slide once. We just met, but when I come over we can talk. Sounds good?
Dre: Yeah. I'm sorry.
Gigi: Its okay just help me.
-For some odd reason school let out really early and everybody went home...The girls went to Miranda Gardens and chilled while Gigi was with Dre.-
amor WITH A TURN mb amor story ep1
Characters:Diamond-me
Angel-Diva167
Tiara (more to come!)
Diamond pov
Today is a special día see my best friend trey moved after he became part of the group mindless behavior now he of course goes por roc now and I can't wait to see him. End pov
Rocs pov
I'm visiting inicial today and I sorta really hope I get to see my best friend diamond we haven't spoken much since I been on tour with my bros. End pov
Ray:roc dude reality *waves hand in front of his face*
Roc:what tu want ninja?!
Ray:come on we gotta go they are waiting to drive tu and me inicial prod and prince taken a diff car
Roc:iight I'm comin calm yo ratchet a** down
Ray:stfu let's go *mumbles* take longer then a girl
Roc:*rolls eyes*
*narration* as they arrive rayo, ray went inicial but roc parents are visiting his sick grandmother for a week.
Diamonds pov
Since my parents are on a business trip for two months so I decided to invite everyone over . End pov
Characters:Diamond-me
Angel-Diva167
Tiara (more to come!)
Diamond pov
Today is a special día see my best friend trey moved after he became part of the group mindless behavior now he of course goes por roc now and I can't wait to see him. End pov
Rocs pov
I'm visiting inicial today and I sorta really hope I get to see my best friend diamond we haven't spoken much since I been on tour with my bros. End pov
Ray:roc dude reality *waves hand in front of his face*
Roc:what tu want ninja?!
Ray:come on we gotta go they are waiting to drive tu and me inicial prod and prince taken a diff car
Roc:iight I'm comin calm yo ratchet a** down
Ray:stfu let's go *mumbles* take longer then a girl
Roc:*rolls eyes*
*narration* as they arrive rayo, ray went inicial but roc parents are visiting his sick grandmother for a week.
Diamonds pov
Since my parents are on a business trip for two months so I decided to invite everyone over . End pov
Walking inicial from school today a little boy from a diffrent school picked up a cd and threw it and it hit a ladys car and the boy kept walking and put his hand on his mouth and tried to say my bad and there was two ladys in the car and they were saying that it was not funny and that she was gonna tell the school but the boy dicho that he did not care and he started cusing that lady out while saying I don't care and she asked him what's his name but he dicho I don't know and kept his culo walking and then one of his friends started walking and he told her to hurry up and she ran and they both walked inicial together while the boy talked about what had happend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hola y'all
I just wanted to apologise to the fans of the 'An angel's cry' story!
I know that its been a while since i uploaded but if tu still want me to continue with the story just post on my wall!
If there are still people who want to be in the story, just post on my muro and tell me your prefarred name, who tu want to be with (optional) and what type of character tu want to be, e.g psycho, smart etc!
Oh, and if tu want to see some new celebs/characters on this story, please do tell me because i want this story to accomodate as many genres and people as possible to make everyone happy! :^)
Thank tu !
P.S dont forget to post on my muro if u interested :)
I just wanted to apologise to the fans of the 'An angel's cry' story!
I know that its been a while since i uploaded but if tu still want me to continue with the story just post on my wall!
If there are still people who want to be in the story, just post on my muro and tell me your prefarred name, who tu want to be with (optional) and what type of character tu want to be, e.g psycho, smart etc!
Oh, and if tu want to see some new celebs/characters on this story, please do tell me because i want this story to accomodate as many genres and people as possible to make everyone happy! :^)
Thank tu !
P.S dont forget to post on my muro if u interested :)
