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 Holly's Feedback album
Holly's Feedback album
Prologue: (This is the sequal to Forbidden Love.)
Michael is half way through this tour. acebo is trying to record new album entilted Feedback full of sexual tension and despair, which is how she is feeling all the time now. She loves being a mother to the fastly growing Jenny, but she often gets lonely without Michael and feels like she has no friends in the world!


One mid afternoon acebo is at Westlake Studios with Quincy trying to put the finishing touches on the song Feedback. Quincy can tell acebo hasn't been herself ever since Michael left for the tour but he thought this album would get her mind off of it. acebo says "Qunicy can I have a playback on just the chours please." "Sure Holly." Quincy hits the playback button and automaticly the speakers are blaring with the lines

"Strum me like a guitarra blow out my amplifier
When tu hear some feedback keep going take it higher
Crank it up give it to me come on
Crank it up give it to me come on
I'm gonna feedback feedback oh
Feedback feedback oh!"

acebo says over the blaring speakers "Okay Quincy that's good!" He stop the playback. "So Quincy what do tu think? Do tu like it?" acebo questions. "Well acebo I must say its very different from what you've done before. But I really like the bajo line." "So tu like it?" "Yes acebo I like it!" "Good!" "Now I want tu to tell me something." "What is it?" "Well every since smelly left for the tour you've been wanting to make songs that has a lot of sexual undertones, and I don't understand why?" acebo laughs at his question. "Oh Quincy I don't know what's gotton into me either, I guess I just want to change it up I guess. Besides me working gets my mind off Michael." "Oh I know tu miss him acebo but look at the bright side at least he's half way through the tour!" "Yea I know but its hard with Jenny growing like a weed and Michael not being able to be part of it." Quincy smirks "Well you'll just have to give him another baby that's all." "Ha ha very funny Quincy!" "Well anyway acebo I actually have a suprise for you!" acebo starts going through some papers and mumbles "Oh really." "Yes really would tu like to see it?" "I guess I have no choice." "Okay well first close your eyes." "Why do I have to close them?" She questions. "Because miss feedback I already told tu its a suprise now close those eyes and no peeking." acebo closes her eys "Alright there closed." "Good now wait here." She hears Quincy leave the room then ten secods later she hears footsteps coming up from behind her.

Suddenly a pair of hands cover her already closed eyes. acebo is becoming restless and blurts out "Oh come on Quincy just give me the suprise already!" Someone bends down and wispers in her ear "You look absolutely beautiful today." She knew that voice anywhere! That was the same voice that sent shivers down her spine and her knees weak! She turned around quickly and saw the beaufiul man she loves with all her corazón standing there in all is glory. She jumps up into his arms and starts to get tears in her eyes "Oh Michael I missed you!" "I missed tu más baby!" They passionately kiss each other like a planes about to go down. acebo breaks it and asks breathlessly "I don't understand I thought tu were in Brazil?" "Well I was but we had to cancel." "Why what happened?" "There entire sound system went dead on them, and they dicho it would take a couple of days to fix so I decided to come back home." "I'm so glad tu did!" They hug each other tightly. "Now come on acebo I want to go see Jenny!" "Alright, but first let me tell Quincy were leaving." Michael chuckles at her "What's so funny?" acebo asks. "Baby Q already left." "He did! But he didn't even say goodbye!" "Well he knew that tu wanted to spend the rest of the día with me. Now come on after I see Jenny I have a suprise to mostrar you." "Another suprise! Michael I don't know if I can handle that many in one day!" "Oh trust me acebo tu are going to amor this suprise."

When they got into the car Michael and acebo talked about everything and anything! The time flew por so fast that they hadn't even realized they were actually home. When they got out of the car Michael grabed Holly's hand and they ran upstairs to there bedroom where they found the nurse with Jenny in her nursery. The nurse nodded her head to the two of them and quietly left the room leaving the family to their privacy. Michael looked at Jenny and got tears in his eyes at how big she has gotton! He picked her up off the floor and dicho "There's my little girl! Daddy missed tu so much!" Then he showered her with kisses. Jenny just smiles and giggles away, loving all the attention that her daddy is giving her. After an hora and a half of Michael and acebo playing with Jenny, Michael announces "Well holl its time for me to take tu to this suprise!" "You mean Jenny isn't coming along?" "I think the car ride might get her a little restless, but don't worry we'll be back." He kisses Jenny and hurries acebo out to the already waiting limo. "So tell me Michael how long is this little car trip of yours?" He gets acebo inside the limo and says casually under his breath "Oh about an hora and a-half." "What! I'm sorry can tu say that again!" "About an hora and a-half but believe me it will all be worth it. Oh which reminds me sorry baby but I have to do this." "Do what, what are tu doing?!" He grabs out of his pocket a blind fold and wraps it snuggly around her eyes denying her vision. "Michael what on God's green earth are tu doing?!" "Baby its all part of the suprise trust me." "So tu expect me to stay like this for an hora and a-half?" Michael chuckles "That's right!" "You know right now I would tortazo the crap out of you, but I CAN'T SEE!!!!!" Michael busts out laughing. "That's alright baby i'll be your eyes." He wraps his arms around her loving that she's back in his arms again. The time was flying por again when they started to talk about everything agian. Soon Michael started getting excited "Holly we are almost there." "Great because this blind fold is getting on my nerves! After ten más minutos she hears Michael open his door where he softly grabs her hand helping her out of the car. He wispers "Keep tu eyes closed." He swiftly takes off the blind fold. "Alright open." She does and the only thing acebo can do is gasp! Michael smiles "Welcome to Neverland!"

Tell me what tu guys think about this new story, i'm not really sure about it?
And i'm not sure about my other story "My Dreams With you?" But I want tu guys to tell me your honest opinion :)
 Welcome to Neverland!
Welcome to Neverland!
posted by Eternalmike
 Dahlia's Bracelet
Dahlia's Bracelet
Dahlias P.O.V
That was the longest día I have ever spent at Michael's house.I'm at my what's going to be my old house.I was at Michael's house from nine am to seven pm. Me and Michael were talking on and on. Michael was attached to me and Athena was attached to Michael! Michael suddenly asked me if he could keep my cat. I told him no. Then Michael was getting something, Athena was following him and meowing.When Michael came back with holding and petting Athena, I still told him no. He frowned and then hugged me tightly.Athena was licking his face. Then Jermaine came to talk to me. He confessed...
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posted by Eternalmike
Dahlia's P.O.V
Today is Monday, time to go back to school! I'm glad that school is almost over! It is May but early May. My cat is meowing sadly because she knows I have to go to school.My parents just woke me up two minutos ago.My cat is probably saying 'Don't go, don't go' Athena climbed up on my cama and started rolling like a dog. I guess Athena really misses me when I go to school! I'm guessing she can't wait until I have summer vacation...

Michael's P.O.V (walking to school, adelante, hacia adelante in time)
I decided to bring my journal with me. Marlon's all looking at me like I'm crazy.Finally he asked...
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posted by Eternalmike
Dahlia's P.O.V
So today was fun with Michael's family and Athena.Even though Athena kept begging me to play with her! Did I tell tu how needy and stubborn this cat is? That cat just kept meowing and giving me the sad cat face until I paid full attention to her! Also Michael kept telling me that Athena will be his.I knew Athena was part of Michael's diabolical plan to steal Athena! But luckily at the end of the day, I still have Athena! Athena is siguiente to me, cuddled up in cama with me. I am petting her with one hand and using another to write. Athena is meowing and she's doing her I miss someone...
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posted by Eternalmike
Dahlia's P.O.V
So today is Wednesday and Michael invited me to his house for Friday. I already finished school and my little homework.I have met his family, he has such a big family! I only have a big brother. I also have my cat Athena. I'm a fan of Greek mythology and plus Athena tricked me into giving her my milk! Athena is a very smart cat. Athena is also silly and curious, like Michael.Michael wanted to bring my cat home. I told him you're not the only one that loves Athena! Today when he was inviting me to his house on Friday, he asked me if I could bring my cat along! I actually dicho maybe....
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posted by Eternalmike
Dahlia's Flashback to when she and Michael first met

It was a summery día and the first día of school.I was so nervous."Mommy,what if I don't make friends?" I asked in the car on the way to school."Don't worry, tu are a very sweet girl, I'm sure you'll make friends" My mom told me. I nodded hoping that what she is saying is true.My dad suddenly stopped the car and to my surprise, we were at my school.My stomach is having lots of mariposas as I got out of the car and into the school with my dad.As we got near the school, my dad dicho " Alright, this is it. I hope tu have a wonderful first...
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posted by snehashis
Michael Joseph Jackson[2][3] (August 29, 1958 – June 25, 2009)[4] was an American singer-songwriter, actor, and businessman. Often referred to as the King of Pop,[5][6] his contributions to music, dance, and fashion, along with his publicized personal life, made him a global figure in popular culture for over four decades.

The eighth child of the Jackson family, he debuted on the professional música scene along with his brothers as a member of The Jackson 5 in 1968, and began his solo career in 1971. In the early 1980s, Jackson became a dominant figure in popular music. The música videos for...
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posted by Eternalmike
Michael's P.O.V
So today I went to school with Dahlia and had lots of fun! I was making her leche come out of her nose! After school, we were playing tag in Dahlia's backyard. She has a bigger house than me, she has four bedrooms, a living room, a kitchen,and three bathrooms. I wish I had 3 bathrooms! Unfortunately, she lives kinda far from my neighborhood so she can't stop por my house every day.I would amor hanging out with her every día but also, I have to practice Monday through Thursday.I have to play the congas but I wanna sing! I'm in a group with my brothers.I got in that group por singing...
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posted by Fashionista101
    The woman in the white suit is looking her reflection in the vanity mirror, touching her face. The man in the eyeglasses and suit looks at her, staring at her with intensity. The minuto she turns around, he quickly leaves, causing her to put her eyes down to the ground.

And It Doesn’t Seem To Matter
And It Doesn’t Seen Right
‘Cause The Will Has Brought
No Fortune
Still I Cry Alone At Night
Don’t tu Judge Of My Composure
‘Cause I’m Lying To Myself
And The Reason Why She Left Me
Did She Find Someone Else?

    It was a full moon tonight, the sky...
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I shook her hand “Yeah I'm Mr. Jackson. Call me Michael, though." I dicho as she smiled and I asked to talk with Jessie “She's in here." Leslie dicho while she opened the door and I walked in, Jessie sat up on the cama “Hey, Michael. I can explain." I put my hands on my hips “How did she get here? And why is she here after I told tu that tu should leave her?" I asked as Jessie got out of cama and got ready “I called her and she cried for me not to leave her and she wanted to see me. So I dicho she can come over and she got a ticket and por six in the morning, she was here and we made...
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posted by mjkingofpop1
Michael was holding Janelle close to him, running his hand up and down her back, trying to calm her down. Janelle had her face buried into his shoulder and she was still shaking. She was literally frightened por what Wesley did to her...well...almost did to her. Michael never thought that Wesley would do such a thing.
'I hope Martin is talking to him about that...that is just wrong and inappropriate, especially if he didn't know about what happened to Janelle when she was 16.' He thought.
He leaned back against the muro and pulled Janelle closer to him, putting her between his legs and putting...
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added by M_Annie_J
Michael in this story visits this strange abandoned house.He thinks that it's just a run down house but it's más than that...

Michael is so done with Marlon gawking at passing por girls."Ooh she is foxy,don't tu think Mike?" Marlon said."Marlon stop! tu know I have a girlfriend!" Michael said."Oh yeah,Mariah!" Marlon said."Right.So can tu please stop gawking at girls!" Michael demanded."Alright! Mariah is really pretty anyway" Marlon said."No,she's beautiful and don't forget it" Michael said. Michael saw Mariah and ran to kiss her."Hey baby!"Michael said."Hey honey" Mariah replied.Mariah...
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posted by Eternalmike
Michael went off to meet his brothers but instead found Joseph. "Hey Joseph, I was going to meet my brothers" Michael said."Oh really? Then why I saw tu with that girl?" Joseph asked." Um because she wanted to ask me questions" Michael lied."About what?" Joseph asked."The band and our music" Michael lied again.Joseph looked Michael in the eye to see if his son was telling the truth. Few moments later, Joseph finally dicho " We gotta rehearse, c'mon!" Joseph walked quickly with Michael following behind.Michael is relieved.
Michael greeted his brothers and production people." Ok so the mostrar is...
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added by mjOlik
posted by Fashionista101
Thomas Sneddon aka 'DS' is a nasty son of a bitch, the devil's son and Captain Hook of Neverland Valley Ranch and any Michael Jackson hater is his crew.
He thinks he's a prosecutor, but he's not. He's Captain Hook who's been chasing our Peter Pan, Michael Joesph Jackson, who's been making an entire fool out of himself from 1993 up until's Michael's untimely death. He's just a grotesque magical creature: ugly on the inside as he is on the outside, pathetic, an absolute loser. He attacks and talks s*** about an innocent man; going as far as to having a buscar warrant of Michael's genitals, having...
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added by cherl12345