amor Article: The empty eyes

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posted by irena83

amor me...
Don't...
Hate me...
Don't...
Touch me...
Don't...
Hurt me...
Don't...
Save me...
Don't...
Rape me...
Don't...
It's the same now,
whenever i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me,
but your hands are still warm...

And i know,
oh i know my corazón still
belongs to you,
and tu hate me,
oh tu hate it...
tu hate my pure love,
but your hands are still warm...

And i want you,
oh i still want you,
but i'm scared,
oh i'm scared,
and now i see,
oh i see the emptiness in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me.
But tu don't care,
you'll tear my soul over
and over again.

And tu hate me,
oh tu hate me,
'cause i amor tu so,
oh tu hate my pure love,
and you're smiling to my pain,
but now i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
oh now i see so clearly,
but your hands are still warm...

27-5, LOveOTH16 and 4 others like this

Lovetreehill So hard this time !! Still sad and dark ! Love rhyme with sorrow :( Very beautiful poem !

reneemonique Hmmm interesting..... I'm crying!!!!!! :((( So a man doesn't love the women,but why are his hands still warm? because eyes sometimes tell lies... Very well written,yet again! Very intense love that never really was. Beautiful ❤

irena83 Thank you Sylvie. This one is devoted to my ex boyfriend, who never truly loved me. He broke my heart in pieces. Now he+s gone. My feelings too.

irena83 Thank you sweetie. Oh i'm so sorry that i made you cry. :(

TBGB1970 This so beautiful

irena83 Thank you. ♥

Invisible-Tears Love It <3

clanbillr I love how sometimes they describe eyes as a way to see in a person's soul!!! The poem also first makes me think of the pulling of the peddles of the flower, she loves me... she loves me not...!!! It makes me feel like you keep giving this boy so many chances "His hands are still warm"!!! He doesn't even look at you he just keeps taking everything with nothing in return!!! And the more you say he hates you it feels more like you hate yourself for letting him keep on doing the same things and expecting different results!!! I do love the picture because of the praying hands for the hope that he may change!!!

Michelle-Bieber I love this it's awesome ur an amazing writer!!!<3

irena83 Thank you so much. :)

darkkhorn19 To be honest I laughed my ass off when it said "Rape me..." "Don't..." XD But other then that I love your poems. :)

irena83 lol Interesting comment. :D Thanks.