hola tu guys that like vampiros can tu do me a favor???

i have the first chapter of a new possible story but i want to see if anybory is going to read it..,
and i was wondering can tu guys read it and ell me what tu think in a comentario o email?
and i don't no the name yet so can tu guys help out with that? to its not very long o hard to read.oh and i can give tu i link to it.