So my original articulo with Chapter 1 can be found here:
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If you've forgotten, it's about Kate visiting Bellatrix in Azkaban right after the Longbottom torture. Please tell me what tu think, all feedback is appreciated. Thanks!The man’s expression changed after Kate spoke.
“You one of them no good Death Eaters?!”, he yelled, leaping up. Kate tried not to smirk.
He leaned adelante, hacia adelante and grabbed Kate’s left sleeve. Kate shrieked and tried to hit him as he yanked up the sleeves of her long dark capa and dress.
He gaped and let go when he saw the smooth, pale skin of her arm.
“No-no mark”,...
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