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posted by twilightlovie14
This time I will get the POV of Turner, Brook and Adam, along with Erik, Gabbie and me! This is a brutal chapter for me to write,so enjoy!

End of pt.7,Sarahs POV:"I must be going,too." dicho Adam, winking at me. Then, the two were gone.I looked at Erik.
"Don't worry, we won't be interrupted again tonight, Sarah." He smiled that sexy smile of his. I smiled back. He playfully sucked on my lips, and I let out a high-pitched, girly laugh. I bit his lip back, and he threw me to the floor, getting on parte superior, arriba of me. We laughed together, and it sounded like music.
Adams POV
I was going to see her, and we would be together again. I knew that Erik planned to come back to Sarahs house later, but I could not wait a moment longer.I knew that my kind outtershell fooled many, but not Erik and Turner. They knew everything about my past...almost. The one thing that the didn't know was that I had been in amor with this girl since I had seen her for the first time - when I saw her walking inicial from school, all alone... and I just happened to be there. I saw her face, and wished I could walk her home. But when i didn't, I had lost all hope. I never thought I would see her again, nontheless be WITH her. I know she likes me, and I just can't help myself. I needed to be with Gabbie. So I rang the door bell, hoping that she was the one who would answer the door that was keeping us apart...
Turners POV
God, I hope I don't scare her off. I really want her to be mine. It's almost like a sick obsession with how i feel around her. I feel...alive. I can't get her off of my mind. I think Brook is great: shes funny, shes sweet, but most of all, she was a hot young school girl. She was a good girl, but I don't think I would have much fun with someone that can't get loose. I knew she could. And I knew she would. I would make her loose. The best part is, I don't even think I would have to force her to. She definitely seems up for such a challenge...
Brooks POV
Oh my god! Turner was actually coming! i am so glad that I didn't come off as the desperate type. Then I would lose him, for sure. I think he was the hottest thing to walk this earth. I don't even know where to start. I had to play it cool, like I was exspecting them to come, like it was no big deal to me. But it was. That is the hard part about this. I am trying to be something I am not. But, I think he sees through it, and likes what he sees. At least, that's what it seemed like to me. In the middle of my thought train, the doorbell rang.
Gabbies POV
End of pt.7,Gabbies POV: She nodded with wide eyes and ran into the bathroom. Just then, the doorbell scared me.
I scrambled up, eager to see Adam again. I didn't exspect him to see me for a while. He seemed to be the kind of person that was always busy, having better things to do. But, then again, it was really late. I opened the door.
"Hi! It's so great to see tu guys again!" I said, grabbing a hold of Adams wrist, leading him in. Turner followed in behind Adam with a bright smile on his face. But I could tell he was looking for Brook. "Um, she's in the room at the left, down the hall, Turner. tu can go see what she is up to. Make yourselves comfortable." I said, turning back to Adam with a smile that I hope looked sweet. And with a warm smile of his own, he picked up my hand ans kissed it, maintaining eye contact with me the whole time.
"How are you?" He whispered in my ear when he hugged me.
"I'm great." yeah, now that he was here.
Eriks POV
I threw her to the ground,being sure not to hurt her, getting on parte superior, arriba of her. I had barely known her for a day, and she already made me crazy. There she was, under me, and I wouldn't let her go anywhere without me tonight, and I the same. I wanted her so badly, and I barely knew her. I couldn't live without her, and I knew so already. We have only been together for a few hours, and I was already initiating sex. We both wanted it, i was sure. But why take advantage of her already? I knew it wasn't right, but right now, I just didn't care. I needed her now, and I needed her badly. I kissed her everywhere. She moaned so loudly I thought that maybe I accidentally punched her in the gut. I stopped to look at her.
"Whats wrong?" I asked. She wrapped her long legs around me and pulled my camisa, camiseta off.
"Nothing, now." she said, her sweet, sensual laughter, Filling my eardrums with her sound of happieness. She rolled herself over me so she was on parte superior, arriba and took off her shirt, too. She put her knees on either side of my thighs, leaning down to kiss me on my neck, my chest, and all the way down to my pants. Slowly, she unzipped my pants and began to pull them off when my cell phone rang from inside my pants pocket.

OHH! OHH! What do tu think? I know that Gabbie and Brook didn't get much action in this one, but, don't worry, I assure tu that their times will come...!:)
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"Damon, why are tu here." My pregunta didn't sound like one, más of a demand.
"I figured tu could use some help."
"Uh, no. tu can leave now." Uhg. Why was he here?!
He bowed his head and put his arms out in defeat.
"Fine, I'll leave. But you'll see; tu will need me." A devious half-smile spread across his face.
I tried to twist my face in digust, but I'm not exactly sure what it looked like - his smile made my corazón do stupid things, therefore making it harder to hate him.
A thought occured to me - I was going to play with his corazón like he was playing with mine.
"You're right ... there's...
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"Damon ... Oh Damon, tu shouldn't have. It ... It's beautiful!" I could feel the water start to swell in my eyes.
"Only for the best." We were going on our one-year anniversary, and as a gift, he had dado me the most beautiful crystal, hand-crafted and a deep, rich blue.
I leaned up to kiss him; I just wasn't ready for the feeling's I'd have when I did. We'd kissed a thousand and one times, and I ... well, I had never had this feeling before. His mouth shaped perfectly around mine, making me forget what día it was, who he was and who I was. He had me pinned against the wall; I couldn't move...
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- Your escritura is beautiful, totally amazing, at the end of EVERY chapter i either had tingly fingers o am i utter awe of your talent! It's stunning!

- Your the kindest person i have ever met, seriously. Everyhting tu do brings a smile to people, well definatly me.

- We can have SUCH a laugh its unbelievable, we laugh about anything. And we soooo think the same!

-Our convosations are unforgettable! They make my days, every day. We can agree on anything, and even if we dont, we always seem to make a joke from it. Music, Writing, Books, AMERICA! anything!

-I seriously smile at the computer screen...
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Ok, I had a new idea for a story. This girl's name is Rebecca Alice, and she had her boyfriend lived in Chicago in the 1960's. Her mother and the rest of her family lives in Estill, South Carolina. This is just the beginning, the rest will be told out. Tell me watcha think! :D







What had I done wrong? Nothing I had thought. He told me he loved me. My corazón was broken, still shaken. My head and arm was throbbing, everything in sight spinning. I was laying on the ground, not being able to recall every detail of what happened, but enough to know I was hurt. And alone. He had left with his wife beaten...
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posted by brooki
Ok guys, I've decided to stop escritura Rebecca Alice. At least for right now. Of couse I will continue the others, rest assured of that. I'm excited about the possibilities for Creatures of the Night (COTN). I have a vague idea of what I'm going to do with Stares, but I can tell tu that everything's only going to get steamier from here. ;)
Please comentario and let me know what tu think of COTN o any plots ideas. I would amor to use some of yall's ideas. (Are tu listening, Gabstaaa?! :))
Thanks guys! :D




Love,
B
posted by brooki
Eeeee ...

Elena's POV

Why did I feel this way? I knew that what Ben told me was not true. I kept telling myself this, but his words kept coming back to me.
I dicho nothing the whole time we ate, not wanting for my fears to be confirmed just yet. After we finished eating - and yes, I was completely surprised when all four vampiros downed their comida - Lillian finally spoke to me.
"Elena? Will tu please take a walk with me?" She rose from the mesa, tabla gracefully. I looked to Damon and he nodded, encouraging me to go.
"Sure, that'd be great," I tried to sound happy. I was más than relieved just to get...
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posted by brooki
Wow ... Pt. 11.

Elena's POV

We were still going at it when the sun rose up. Apparently time never did really stop. "Damon, we have to stop. We have school and we can't risk telling anyone what we're d-"
He cut me off, besar me again. I had to stop before my brain would disconnect from my body and let this go any further. When I had to resurface for air, I took advantage of that time. "Look, we have got to stop. I have to go to school, and I'm sure tu do too."
He smiled and mezmorized me with his eyes. His expression turned to pleading. "Please, Elena? It wouldn't hurt tu to miss a day of school,...
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Saul's POV

I slammed my fist on the table, frustrated at myself. My other hand pinched the bridge of my nose, trying to make myself see straight. I had just gotten back from getting the mail, now I was sitting at the cocina mesa, tabla checking to see if there were any bills Mom hadn't paid off yet.
Sarah; it was getting worse. I know that she blamed herself for Maggie's death, but everyone knew that wasn't true. She would always wonder what would have happened if she would've been there to stop her. I couldn't do anything about the mess we were in, making me feel helpless. I killed me to see her...
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posted by brooki
This one is a lot longer than what I'm used to escritura ... There was just no stopping point in this chapter. ^_^ Hope tu like! New characters, dudets! Yaaay!

Elena's POV

"Tell me about Ben. tu seem to know him rather well." This new clue to Damon's past was still hazy to me. Maybe once I knew más about him, then I could piece together reasons.
"Oh the troubles I've gotten in with him," He sighed as he began. We were still swirling around with the music, though the rythms had slowed and it was a couples dance. "He's very opptomistic and diplomatic. He believes what he says and says what he...
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posted by brooki
Ok, so I'm giving writer's block a run for its money. So .... yea. Likes it? ^_^

Elena's POV
I couldn't stop myself. I had to make sure some part of my past still exsisted. Maybe this was just a nightmare, and he would suddenly appear and take me back.
I walked down my front steps, through the yard and out to the park. I was biting my lip all the way to the woods. I knew this wasn't the safest way to go, but it was quickest. The quicker I made sure that place where I spent some of the greatest days of my life still exsisted, the better. I took a deep breath as I turned around and looked to make...
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posted by brooki
Wow ... 20.

Elena's POV
About 3 weeks later
I woke up, feeling ... different. Then I realized Damon wasn't right here with me. I started to panic, worrying that he'd left me here, o had been hurt. Then reality hit, and I knew that wasn't the case. Damon came walking through the hall, unscathed and possibly más beautiful than I had ever seen him. He was wearing his jeans, but ... no shirt. His hair was still wet, so I guess he just got out the shower. When he came closer, I saw the water still on his skin. I know that I looked like an idiot staring at him the way I was. I just ... I couldn't...
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