anime Article: Thorn

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Thorn

posted by rosethorn

"----REMBER! DO tu REMBER ANYTHING?" the voice was fuzzy at first then más clear. "Ugh" the sound of her voice was strange to her. "young lady do...do tu rember what happened?" "What...what happened?" Her eyes opened and she saw the face of a older man he was holding her wrist and staring at her intently so that she was oddly disturbed. "Where am I?" "Hm tu don't rember anything ether. None of us do but if tu do then tell us its important" "o-ok" she felt strange like she was forgeting something important that she had to say something but she couldn't rember "so where are we?" "We we don't know" he dicho then he smiled "well foods here get some o tu won't see comida for another month." "Thankyou" she said. As she stood up something flashed in front of her eyes and then...blackness.

blackpanther666 and teashaC like this

rosethorn i would except anything that will help in part 2 or just what you think her past or what she was forgeting is.

brownstar wouldn't your article be better if you give more details to it and make it a bit more interesting, it's makes it good, but it's ok

cutiekendra5728 I have to agree with brownstar sorry calley.

tokyomacncheese i think its pretty good to start with though but yes myb just a little bittle bit of more details other wise pretty good :]

I_DONT-KNOW its a good storyline, u have a goos idea. But you rushed into it, mabey the doctor and the girl discuss where they are, and that brings us to the naext point. Where are they? Even if the narrator doesnt know she can still DESCRIBE where abouts she is. God im sorry for going on but once i get started......