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posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 21
I WANT TO THANK LEISHA4 FOR HELPING ME.WITHOUT HER I WOULDN’T HAVE publicado CHAP 21 SO SOON CAUSE I DIDN’T KNOW HOW TO CONTINUE MY STORY.
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When his hands touched mine an electric current flashed through my body something so strong,something I wasn’t familiar with.
I held his hand tighter in mine then I felt his cool breath on my neck,I tore my gaze from are hands and looked him in the eyes,his beautiful eyes that made my weak human corazón to rip its way out of my chest.then I realized I was falling for him again so I pulled my hand from his and sat on the bed.
Why am I so stupid.whats wrong with me?? I covered my face with my hands trying to comfort myself then edward sat beside me
-Bella I'm sorry I don’t know what to do so tu can forget me
Pain washed in his eyes the pain was to much I couldn’t oso, oso de watching him like this I wanted to tell him it was ok but I controlled myself and sighed
Edward started talking and told me every thing that happened and how he felt when he left me
I was so concerned and saw the pain in his eyes so there was no way he was lying to me I just felt like betraying matt then I had a flash back of me and matt
*FLASH BACK*
I turned to matt and smiled when I saw his beautiful face and grabbed his neck and forced him closer to me
-well were where we?
He asked looking amused and then I kissed him he hugged me closer andgot a hanful of my hair in his ands and started playing with it I started to push my self closer when I heard a ripping sound and laughed his camisa, camiseta was ripped in two I pulled his camisa, camiseta and throw it on the ground looking at his beautiful chest then I came closer andtraced his beautiful chest with my hands then Ihe hugged me closer to him and I put my head on his shoulder
-I amor you
I whispered in his ear this was the first time I told him this he pulled away and made me worried he saw the worrie in my eyes and smiled then he looked me in the eyes and said
-I amor tu too
I was so happy! I hugged him like he was a teddy oso, oso de and kissed every spot on his face and his neck he pulled my face to his then he kissed me like it was the end of the world he started to pull my camisa, camiseta off when we heard a strange sound we both pulled away
*END OF FLASH BACK*
I sighed then Edwards face twisted in pain and said
-Bella your not betraying him
-how do tu know?
-I can read your mind!
He dicho a little happy I searched my gifts to find the shieldi one(if tu have forgot I have 3 gifts 1.my shield 2.controlling my thirst 3.when I think of something I want it just appears out of thin air)
Then I found my shield and actived it
-wow tu have 3 gifts that's so cool!
Edward dicho like a kid that found out there is a santa claus(I just made that up I don’t know if it means anything I just wanted to describe that he's full of joy)
-yup!
-can tu bring down your shield
Edward dicho annoyed
-nop!
I dicho enjoying his anoyence( hehehe I'm so evile!!)
Then he looked me in the eyes and made a perrito, cachorro face and said
-Bella will tu forgive me please?i am so SORRY!icant even forgive myself Bella I'm begging tu to take me back I'm such a……..
I putted my finger on his lips I didn’t like it when he got all sad
-I forgive you!
I dicho and smiled at him

bellas dress!

LabraLege and arianaggs like this

joe-edwardfan yay chap 21 hope u like it that was the final chapter i think so im going to post some short storys(5 or 10 chaps each story only)but as much as exiting so tell me what u think! and thanx 4 the support!:)

arianaggs OMG I LOVE THE END !!!! AND WOW THE DRESS ITS AWESOME !!!! UR DOING AN AWESOME JOB !!!! WILL THEY GET BACK TOGHTHER AFTER BELLA FORGIVE HIM ????

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Learning to let go ch. one

posted by Funnygirl77

Leting go of the ones tu amor is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Leting go of the ones you love is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Nothing is harder then losing the one tu love. The One person who understands tu the most, The one who give anything to keep tu seguro and happy even if that means losing their own life to save yours. I learned this the hard way, When a año hace today, I lost my parents, my brother and my sister, in a house fire.

May 19 2010 Monday 12:01 am
It's been a año since I lost my family, and it hasn't been any easier. I have nightmares about what happen, ever nightmare is the same. It starts off with me being with my family, Everyone is laughing and having a good time, then out of no where, there faces...

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amor kills chapter 13

posted by hannah_vampire

I woke up and felt the cold hit me, it was a weird sensation and I felt light headed something was happening but I couldn’t work out what. It was around midday when I had decided to go and visit Blair, When I got out of my car I felt weird once again, there was a darkness around me o at least some where around here. When I got near the door, I had seen that someone had forced it
Open. I pushed the door open and run inside, ‘No no Blair’ I thought as I saw him on the ground not breathing.

I got to the inicial phone but it was hard to dial the number in, I was shaking violently. Oni answered...

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Hate Your Smile, Hate Your Laugh. Hate The Way tu Made Me Fall In amor With You(2)

posted by lollipopszx3

"Hello." I dicho to a boy sitting siguiente to me in English. I was hoping that they would be like Brett. This boy had purple eyes with gray flakes inside. His blonde hair was shoulder length and his bangs were covering his face.

He smiled at me. "Hey..." He dicho and leaned over to me. "What's your name?" He seemed pretty nice right now.

"I'm Leighton. What's yours?" I asked.

"Chase. I like your shirt." I looked down. It did look pretty nice. But I noticed that his eyes stared at my chest area for a little too long. I used my hand to cover it up. I think siguiente time I'll wear my camisa, camiseta that dicho 'My face...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 2 Hidden Creatures, Hidden friends Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

“Alec, what the hell is a Rokurokubi?” dicho Marley. “I don’t bloody know, maybe some sort of ancient demon” dicho Alec. “We Rokurokubi are creatures like tu from the other realm; we are also seen in Japanese history” dicho Mia who seemed very happy to talk about her race. “So are tu some sort of badass, fuego breathing, soul sucking, body eating, shapeshifting, winged beast from the depths of the great abyss?” dicho Marley taking a few steps back. “Umm... my race aren’t like that, there are stories of us eating bodies and drinking blood but that is a false accusation, the...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 1 Antiworld Part 3

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Some vampiros have a certain side effect to when they bite a human. This mostly happens with pure bloods o half bloods that gained their power from their vampire history. vampiros who were bitten and had their blood changed will rarely get this trait because their blood was once human so the DNA does not release this effect in their blood. Marley, Alec and Opal each have a side effect when bitting someone. The People Alec bites start to concentrate a lot on their amor life, this is because Alec cares a lot about his amor life (One of the many reasons he does not bite men) The Side effect People...

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missing chapter one

posted by kayleebabee

"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward dicho hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 37

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

I hated seeing her cry. Knowing it was my fault immediately made me hate myself, not that I didn't already. I needed to hear her voice, know she was really here.

Some part of me registered the fact that I'd sat down, and that I had touched her, if briefly. I had said, "Tell me."

She met my gaze, looking terrified. She closed her eyes firmly, as if she was living a nightmare. Maybe she was.

"I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry," she whispered, looking anywhere but at me. "I thought it would be better that way, tu had your whole life ahead of tu and I couldn't take that away because of my...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would tu care? tu don't even know me."
"And tu don't know me. How would tu know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 5

posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her o anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after...

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Gods: Chapter 6: Love.....ugh

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Later on that día when I am in my bedroom and Ethan is downstairs watching the game. I lay on my cama doing nothing but thinking. I hear my name being called I get up and walk downstairs. Ethan is at the door, someone is asking for me. I start to walk towards the door and see Adam he sees me and smiles I smile back. Ethan turns and sees me his expression is anger, he walks away. I walk up to Adam. “Hey, I didn’t see tu at school today” he said. I wondered how he knew where I lived and why was he here. “Ah yeah I’m a bit sick” I dicho putting on a husky voice. “I see that anyway,...

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The Powerful Word, "Because"

posted by Pushkin319

THE POWER OF BECAUSE

You're standing in a long line to pay for your groceries. Which sentence do tu think will get tu through?

1. "May I go ahead of tu please?" Put on a really sincere face.

2. "May I step ahead of tu please, because I'm really late for my doctor's appointment?"

Using the word "because" will get tu closer to 'yes' in almost any circumstance. Why? Because your request is followed por a reason, an explanation for the request. If the request is reasonable, then why not say yes?

The word refers the listener to some background, some circumstances, a framework related to the request....

disney Females as Real Humans

posted by DisneyGirlFan0

Ever wonder what the disney princesses look like in real life? Well, now tu can! I looked through many pictures of women emulating disney princesses o just disney females in general and found many that looked almost real! I picked from the ones I thought looked most like the character, and I was astonished at how well these people made themselves resemble those characters. So, be amazed at how much these women look like the character they are portraying and enjoy!

Ariel from The Little Mermaid

Aurora from Sleeping Beauty

Belle from The Beauty And The Beast

Cinderella from Cinderella

Esmeralda from The Hunchback Of Notre Dame

Jane from Tarzan

Jasmine from Aladdin

Kida from Atlantis: The Lost Empire

Megara from Hercules

Merida from Brave

Mulan from Mulan

Mulan as a Male

Nala from The Lion King

Pocahontas from Pocahontas

Rapunzel from Rapunzel

Snow White from Snow White And The Seven Dwarves

Tiana from The Princess And The Frog

Tinkerbell from Peter Pan

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Do We See What We Are Doing?- Poem

posted by Firewriter

People down every turn
Pain inside their hearts
A girl with scars on her wrists
A boy with a cuchillo in his chest
She hides in the dark
Wondering when the pain with end
He stands up to fight in defense
Only to get knocked back down again
She fights with her parents
They don't wanna support the child
She's left to fend for herself in the cold
Alone with the child
Do we see what we are doing when we say the things we say?
Do we see who we are hurting with the actions that we're taking?
What we need
Are broken families reconciled
We need hearts to mend, scars to heal and battles to end
We. Need. Love
To stand up for the broken
We. Need. Hope
To give a hand to the hopeless
We need the world to care.
What are we doing with the words we are saying?
Who are we changing
And what effects are they having?
Lets be the change.

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How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon

posted by daisymae1

Disclaimer: *I'm only on Season 3 Episode 16 & I have not read the books!*

The Vampire Diaries is my guilty pleasure. It's painfully corny, overly cliche and not to mention has some less than perfect actuación but for some reason; I'm addicted. I have all this pent up frustration about the situation between the three main characters so I've finally broke down and decided I need to talk about it. This is a little overview as to how I feel about each character.

Let's start with Elena:

I can't stand Elena, no matter how hard I try, I just can't. I have sympathy for her because she has suffered...

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So Sad :'(

posted by CupcakeMal714

I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all día long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his evil...

A Screenwriting Dialogue Master Class & más with William C. Martell

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Let Us Try.

posted by hgfan5602

When will this end?
Mass shootings
Terrorist attacks
Police brutality

They say it's just a gun control problem
They say it cannot be fixed
I say the problem is deeper
I say there is hope

When will this end?
Income inequality
Veterans living on the streets, penniless,
Dying por their own hands everyday.

They say this world can change for the better
But nothing has changed...
And I truly do fear
Nothing ever will

When will amor start?
The día we offer a hand to the fallen
Instead of cringing back in shock
And running away

When will our world change?
The día we amor too much to kill
The día others' pain is our pain
The día we act instead of just talking about it

"It's impossible"
"We're too broken to be mended"
"It's a hopeless battle"
I say, let us try.

The día tu Slipped Away (Part 2)

posted by NagisaTomoya

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The día tu Slipped Away: Middle
I do not know what caused me to do it. I stood with my son in my arms, holding his head to my chest as embers flew and people scurried to put out the fuego I caused. I had lit Euphoria’s house on fire. No one needed it anymore, for I was taking Thomas to Yun Gong and Euphoria was… Well, tu know. I watch embers float por and one lands of my pale cheek, burning it ever so slightly. It was only más pain to feel. Thomas was shaking as if he was cold, though the...

Dimension Jumper Ch 6

posted by jedigirl

"Caleb? How? What are? Your a dimension jumper?" I ask, finally able to complete a sentence.
"Yeah I am. How are tu even here? Your not suppose to know yet," He stares at me.
"Same as tu apparently. Dimension jumping?" I guess.
"Yeah, I got that, but how are tu even in here. No one jumps in o out of here. tu have to be brought."
"So I've been told." I say. He looks at me. "And what do tu mean I'm not suppose to know?" I eye him accusingly. He looks guilty, like he just gave away a secret.
"You weren't supposed to know I can jump until later. Like Two years from now. When tu found out you...

Dimension-Jumper Ch 4

posted by jedigirl

I pull up to our house with dad right behind me. He rushes me into the house like we're being followed.
"Don't worry Kodi. We'll fix this," He tells me.
"I don't want this fixed Dad! I want answers. I'm tried of lying to myself. Telling myself that they're just daydreams, when clearly they're not! Don't keep me ignorant anymore. Please," I plead. For years I had been complacent about his silence, but not anymore, because now I have information and I will use it.
"Sweetheart, tu not knowing is the safest place to be right now. Until tu have full control."
"Control of what Dad? I can't control...