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posted by delta117
i awoke pain everywhere it felt like my skin was melting but yet i did not scream traing kicked in and i found my black armoar to any normal sentient bieng it would be like an anchor but i am not normal am i after that i grabbed my weapons the first was a set of 2 curved assian knifes curved and made for my hands segundo standard ar rifle it had no scope only sights all i needed to kill at 100 yards third a shotgun normal used in swat teams tactical 12 guage shot gun bomba action forth 44mm glock i holousterd it and my knifes my knifes at arm length pistol on my hip then an explosion rocked my cell and soilders poured in i dispathed them with my a.r 5 dead hundreds to go i stepped outr my cell through the hole my enemy s made my radio head set in my casco crackled to life " mac come in mack this is alpha team we are in poisition" i paused looked for any más targets and replied " copy that alpha team this is mac i am on my way any word frombeta o omega?" " beta's in poistion no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" good know i could get my three teams out of this base and get back to the HQ. down a carfully polished corridor i searched for the enemy no sighn it was eerily quiet the only noises were the sound of my boots hitting thewaxed floor and my silent controled breathing that was bad.after three floors up i found some action i had switched to my shotgun for close combat. two teams of well trained soilders 2 sets of pistolas aimed at my head 2 easy. each team consitsted of five soilders so there wetre tenguns pointed at me i had a small windo w of 3 minutos to kill them o they would have help so i targetetd the first team i shot two of them dead an injured one there i shot the injurd one and got knocked on my back por a smg i lifted my pistol up as i fell and shot my shooter in his face he crumpled to the ground then the other was stuned a how i had killed his theam in four segundos i keep time on this stuff then i knocked him in the neck with the handel of my gun and he fell to the groungd he had a broken thacea and larenix instant death i reholstered my pistol and and picked up an anti-personal fragmentatin grenade from a dead soilderpulled the pin and threw it at team 2 it landed in the center and blosumed into a firey flor of shrapnel i pulled my pisol back out and checked the bodies one injure d1 shot in the head changed that all others dead in 7 segundos i was good
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posted by StarWarrior
PROLOGE
“You can’t!” I screeched, griping the thick césped, hierba beneath my paws.
    “The whole forest will belong to the Pack of Shadows!” the dark lobo exclaimed enthusiastically, his pelaje, piel flickering like shadows, “No lobo will stop us!”
    I have to do something! I couldn’t let it end like this! Not with the alpha in this state! Not with the pack división, split in four!
    “Out of my way pup!” he tossed me aside like a tiny mouse.
    “No!” I leaped at him, biting and clawing with all my strength.
    “This is pointless! tu cannot defeat me she-wolf!” I felt him bite me and fling me away again. I was too tired to mover now, after traveling this far without resting, I can no longer breathe enough to live.
    I’m over; this is the end of the Pack of Ice! I lay winded and defeated, awaiting death’s arrival patiently.
posted by emmett
~Let tu Go~

1: On and on ~ the days go by
Without a sight of tu o my sanity
I'm lost not found ~ I wanted to mostrar tu , I wanted to tell you...

Chorus: If I say I'm sorry will tu believe me?
If I amor tu again will tu never leave me?
I made a mistake when I dicho no
I never should have let tu go...

2: I ring your phone but no one answers, I'm alone
Days are spent lectura your old letters, but with a groan,
I'd put them away, In the draw they'd lay until tomorrow...
Tomorrow...

Chorus-

3: This moping, not coping is killing me
My soul is not at rest when I long for it to be
I wish you'd come back o my fears may come true
When I left you, I still loved tu and I think tu knew

Chorus-

Darlin' don't forget me
I'm locked and you're the only key...
posted by Sephisis17
Another poem por me. This one came out kinda lame,but I'll let the rating be the judge (assuming there will be any).

That Girl

Have tu seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?

Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.

She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.

She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.

Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
posted by fangs286
I ran as hard as i could, my feet smaking the ground, crushing leaves and twigs.
I heard my own breath ragged but i kept running. David had already been taken and so had Amy but i wasn't giving up that easily. I threw another look over my shoulder, even though i didnt hear anything. Of course there was nothing there.
They were to smart for that.
In my haste, i tripped over a árbol that had fallen. i tried to scramble back up, but i hard set of arms grabbed my shoulders. I screamed, but i knew that no one would come for me. So when the hand clamped over my mouth i stopped my protests. Of course...
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posted by Vampiyaa
"Hey, aren't tu supposed to be in bed?" Toyo asked, when he spotted Aiko lying down on the sofá lectura one of May's magazines. Aiko didn't respond. It took a few segundos for Toyo to figure out she was sleeping.
"Silly," Toyo laughed, kneeling beside her. "You'd better wake up before the monitor finds out tu didn't mostrar up at your dorm." He attempted to prod her awake and then gasped as his entire body went numb. Something dark inside him stirred, and he widened his eyes and locked them on Aiko's neck. Unconciously, he reached out his hand and slid it onto Aiko's neck. The monster inside...
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posted by juicyjossy9
Where are tu at this moment
Only in my dreams
You're missing, but you're always
a heartbeat from me

I'm lost now without you
I don't know where tu are
I keep watching
I keep hoping
but time keeps us apart
Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring tu back home?

Winter lies before me
Now you're so far away
In the darkness of my dreaming
The light of tu will stay

If I could be close beside you
If I could be where tu are
If I could reach out and touch you
And bring tu back home

Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring tu back home?

To me...

* * * * * * * * * *
LivHILuvAlwaiz♥jj9
posted by Funnygirl77
 amor bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell tu the can hear your corazón beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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added by IloveMyLord
this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good o not before I enviar it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear amor tu once were a shining ray.
In my eyes tu meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about tu is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your amor is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our amor is coming to its new close.
colores were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would amor to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our amor has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our amor left it took tu along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying amor was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me amor would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
posted by ZekiYuro
Basics: Hannah Meyer age 17, Born August 1, 1995. Lives in Bradenton, Florida
Blond hair, blue eyes.

What is your happiest memory? My happiest memory was when I finally got to meet my mom's
parents. They lived on the east side of Berlin and did something that got them put in prison for a while.
I'm not sure what they did because my mom won't talk about it.

What don't tu want anyone to find out about you? I am afraid to let my guard down. What I mean is, I've seen so many of my friends get hurt in relationships o por their parents breaking up. I hear my parents fighting a lot and so I'm afraid to...
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posted by PotterLambert93
His name was Charlie Brown. We first got him in the fall of 1999. He was cute cocker spaniel, perro de aguas with the color of brown and had dark eyes. For 13 years, he was a part of our family. We played with him, took him for walks, gave all the amor we had and so much more. He was also a ruff dog as well. Whenever people would come over he would bark at them, thinking that he was trying to protect us from danger. He would also bark at other people's perros when we took him for walks and, he was very capable of biting badly. Despite all of that, we still loved him, and he loved us.

Around a few years ago, he...
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posted by thirteen_times
He didn’t want money o fancy cars; all he wanted was to be loved por someone, any one at all. He needed someone to care about him, not his wealth, not his ties to the rich and famous, someone that actually cared about him, the boy with bright blue eyes that sparkled in the sunlight, curly raven black hair and a boyish grin permanently plastered on his face hiding the pain of being alone. Yet no one did, all they saw was the heir to the Jeffrey Empire, the boy that was going to inherited it all. The boy, who was the prefect son living up to the Jeffrey name. They never saw the boy’s who’s arms were covered in cuts, the cuchillo against his skin, the blood dripping down staining the carpet, his eyes closing never to open again. No one read the note tucked into his pocket cause no one cared.
posted by Rae-Ash
I’m finished
I’m done
I can’t do this anymore

I’m through
I can’t last another second

It’s all I’ve ever seen
Surrounded por chaos
Filled with fear

Its’ all I can think about
All the lost love
All the broken hearts
All the destroyed dreams
All the hopeless children
And devastated parents

Everyone who turned their cheek
Who ignored the cries
Of help and distress

No más kindness
Only monsters and demons
Who always kill

tu took her from me
And now you’ll pay
‘Cause I have one final thing to say
—Good-bye World
—Hello Death and eternity
posted by hgfan5602
There is strength in my heart.
I have looked for it
For decades now.
Yet I have not found it before.

Now I have.
It will get me over every obstacle,
Every region,
Every country.

It makes me proud
To see this.
To see my strength
Laying there,
Waiting for me.
And me only.

This type of strength
Is called courage.
Perseverance.

Perseverance is the best type
Of strength possible.
And I have it.
Yes, me.
Never before,
Will tu see me cower within the shadows
Again, like before.

I have changed.
And I am sure tu will see that.
I have strength in my heart.
posted by AshleyA-Brizzle
I looked into the window

to see the girl before me.

she was gorgeous, and beautiful

She looked strong,

she looked independent.

Her Mask was no longer there,

but what was on the outside was visible.

tu can see the scars on her heart,

tu can see the hurt in her eyes,

and the pain on her face.

But tu can also see how it made her stronger.

She has dicho "Enough is Enough, Today is the Day, and today i will be victorious"

she strikes the match,

and drops the flame, to burn her past

She smiles at me, and touches her face,

and she dicho the words "Today is the Day"

Today I finally discovered, The girl looking back at her,

was me. :)
posted by earthangel
    Hug me, I said.
    He did.
    Hug me harder, I say.
    He does.
    A little more, I urge.
    The grip tightens.
    Perfect.
    Thank you, I said, humbly.
    He just rocks me.
    
    I bury my face in his grey scarf, breath in, breath in, breath in. It smells like him, I think. The fresh smell of rain and the rarest drop of sunshine. His love, his warmth. Lord, it smells...
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