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Hows my story so far??? and any ideas to continue it?

Im escritura this story about my classmates but its fictional and it takes place in a school and (small spoiler) they get super powers etc.... anyway how is it?? oh and please tell me the parts tu like that could help me. anyway oh and also the narrator/main characters name is faith (1st narrative) Here it is...

I sat in class being almost bored to death listening to my teacher talk about science. I was so bored! Usually Mrs. Hansson’s class was so much fun! Suddenly, an unfamiliar voice appeared on the intercom “Hello everyone I am Mr. Robinson your new principal! Welcome to school!” Then he continued with the announcements. Afterward the intercom shut off then I thought “What? We are getting a new principal, out of nowhere?” I was very confused. Then I raised my boney hand. “Yes Faith?” Mrs. Hansson dicho with the first smile I saw all day. “Why do we have a new principal, the año only started a mes ago?” I replied “Well apparently our old principal got very ill and that’s really all I know”. I knelt back into my chair. My friend Tara leaned toward me. “That’s strange; he was as fit as a fiddle!” She dicho then leaned back into her chair. “Anyway, I am happy to announce we will be having a field trip to the Spacelisionian!” “Also your other teacher, Sr. Moreno and his class will be attending as well” Mrs. Hansson added. All of us were excited. A field trip at the beginning of the year, how awesome is that?


    Later at lunch everyone one was buzzing about something. I had no idea what about so I walked up to two of my best friends Sara and Ember. “What is everyone talking about” I asked. “You haven’t heard! Austin Tilton disappeared!” Sara answered “He was here early today then he just disappeared!” Ember added. This was very strange, very strange indeed. “And I’m so Happ… sad about it” Ember added. I could tell she was trying to say happy because a beginning of the año knowledge competition w
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well i might of made the subject change to fast...
coolcatsRus123 posted hace más de un año
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Yes, but, it is good. And tu should do más twists in this story. :D
Mariya_Maja posted hace más de un año
 coolcatsRus123 posted hace más de un año
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IsidoraSmiley said:
It sounds like an interesting story! :) I like it
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