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What should I call it? Would tu read it?

im escritura a new story. its about a human girl who falls in amor with a vampire (yes, tu may think of Twilight if that helps tu mold an outline into your mind). the human's name im planning to be Deidre (dee-druh) Berkley and the vampire's im planning to be Damian (dont hav the last name yet). tho they may get changed because my mind is never settled XP.

how it starts off is Deidre goes to live with her father and older brother because her mother died. in the first scene she comes across a mysterious teenage boy and cant keep her mind off of him, even tho they never even spoke a word to each other. Deidre goes to school after that weekend and sees the boy, along with other whiter-than-sheets kids. none of them are nice to her except Damian's adopted brother Wesley who's half human, half vampire, and he developes an infatuation ;D. Deidre enjoys having Wesley as a FRIEND but he is persistent on making her his.
during the course of all this madness Damian, who once seemed to hate Deidre, talks to her. they become friends. he feels he has to speak to her, thats its only right, because of the special ability vampire's have to tell when they have found their other half (i started thinking about it and it seems to me that the special ability that my vampiros hav is just like the one that the werewolves/shape-shifters in the Twlight Saga hav, called "imprinting").

i dont know if that sounded confusing o not....
what do tu think an appropriate name for this story would be?

would tu read it?
(maybe ill post the first chapter up once i finish it)
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im thinking that maybe i should change Deidre's name to Esmeree (ez-mer-ay). i was going thro my drawings yesterday and found one of a girl who i had named Esmeree and i dicho "oh my gosh, i forgot about that name!" Esmeree Something. any suggestions on a last name??
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gosh, im soo undecided....
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true, very true
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adamk said:
Sounds interesting, and not just because I'm a vampire fanatic. I'll give it a read if tu post it. :) BTW, about titles, I have no idea, that's totally up to you, but I'll read it regardless. :)
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ok, thx anyway. as soon as im done with the first chapter ill post it and send tu a link :)
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Moonlight_Kitty said:
The problem I'm having is I don't know what this story is fully about. Yes tu put a pretty good descripción of the story here, but..... I don't see a conflict (not that there isn't one, tu just didn't post it here) and I don't know their personalities, and so on and so forth.

The only reason that's a problem is that it's extremely difficult to make a título for a story tu know nothing about.
It's hard enough making a título for you're own story, in which tu know pretty much everything about it.

Good thing is that everyone has this problem. Even authors who have had several libros published go through this problem. The trick is finding a way to 'discover' the título of you're book.

What I do is I think about what the book is about; the characters, what they go through, what is happening, those things. Then I write down things that relate to that, and sometimes I find a title.

example:
In the book I'm escritura the main character has a unique power, has no memory of his past, and gets taken from his adoptive inicial to someplace else to learn how to use his gifts. (brief overview)

titles that I could give it based of that info could be:
Blue eyes (because his eyes are ice colored)
Memories lost
Hidden memories
Taken
Lost
Secret past
ect.

These are just a few examples.

Sorry if this confuses you, and that I can't be of más help.
I hope tu find a good título for it. It really does sound interesting and deserves a name fitting for it.
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it does not confuse, i understand what youre saying. thank tu for your help. i will try out that "activity" tu suggest :). if tu want to, tu can read a sample of the story (the rough draft of the first chapter). heres the link: link
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