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how do u write about how luv feels

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por the way, this pregunta intrigued me so much I adapted it for the poesía escritura prompt in the first 2009 session of the fanpop Writer's Group.
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Cinders said:
Three words: Don't try to.

amor is the segundo most popular thing that everyone wants to write about. It's trumped only por pain. A good writer shouldn't focus on the emotions, she should focus on the story. I'm not saying that tu can't go out and write a romance story, all I'm saying is don't focus on the emotion tu want it to inspire in other people.

Generally speaking, the autor begins a story with a clear idea of what she wants that story to be. As she writes, however, the story makes its own decision about what it wants to be. In this way, escritura a story is very much like raising a child. You'll try and fight the story and beat it into what tu think it should be, but in the end, tu have to let the story be itself.

Romance doesn't come from flowery words o cliches crammed down the readers throats. Romance comes from situations. Write how your characters act around each other, not how they feel. Write what they do for each other. Do their words contradict their actions (as our words often do)?

Rather than thinking, "how can I write about love?" ask yourself, "What is love? Why do people fall in love? What do they do when they're in love? Do they act ridiculous and embarrassed, o are they in denial? What's the difference between a person's first love, and her segundo love? What makes this amor story worth telling?"

Was that helpful at all? If not, I can provide contrasting examples for you.
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por the way, I in no way endorse beating children like one may beat a story into submission.
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thanks alot that helped me so much
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1-2vampire said:
well, what i do is imagine what amor feels like to myself, then express it on paper,
for example,
'I was in a different world altogether as he kissed me, my head spun, no-one but us was in out world, his lips soft aginst mine, our bodies close, it seemed that all the stress of save-the-world was out of the way, and that everyone else was gone, the sparks flew, no sound but the frantic beating of my heart, pounding in my ears. Too soon it was over, and I was back to the world of stess and reality.' tu can take that but if its different stress o no stress tu dont have to copy it completely :)
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that to was very helpfu and great wrighting thank u
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:)
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ryans_love said:
when i write about how amor feels, i write a lot of similes; like "when i looked into his sleepy chocolate eyes, i knew i was destined for trouble if i fell for him. but i threw caution to the wind and fell into that deep, dazzling darkness called his eyes."
just one example. but since we can't really define love, it's easiest to use similes that make tu think of the one tu love.
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that is a great way thank u so much ppl think i finally got it
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welcome :)
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_Blackhearts_xx said:
well, the way i do it is to just close my eyes and think about the feelings that come to my corazón when i think about love, then i write it down, o draw it :) tu know
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thx all of ur comentarios have helped everbody thx
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dylin1 said:
To me it feels like my mom wrapping a warm towel around me, and it feels like being on fire, but in a painless not uncomfortable way. It's beautiful.
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