Sonic fan Characters Article: Ruby the hedgehog spy Part 4 Emma's speaks the truth

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Ruby the hedgehog spy Part 4 Emma's speaks the truth

posted by zelda4559

"Did tu bring me the chaos emeralds" Eggman
says "no, not yet. I have an agent wroking on it"
"good, here is the siguiente one I tarcked it on this radar" Eggman says "ruby, I need tu to go to the forest for the siguiente one" I say "how do tu know this" Eggman takes the radio covers where ruby can't hear "say tu got info-" Eggman gets cut of por ruby's scream I take the radio "ruby what's wrong" there was no answer "ruby" I say into the radio once more. still nothing I look down at the ground. "Is she the agent" "yes" I say "well I might know someone that would kiddnap her.

Ruby's view

"Emma would never do that" I say "you can hear Eggman in the background" Tails dicho I tried hard not to cry "Emma how could you" I say into the radio "Ruby, you're alive I thought tu got hurt"
emma says "I don't want do hear any más lies tell all the truth" I say as I come más angrey "all" emma says in a low voice "all" I repeat "ok, well I've always wanted to be más famous" "famous, really well is being Evil a way" I say "I-" Emma starts to say "NO! it isn't" I scream "ruby" "No, I don't want to hear it" I throw the raido out of the helicopter. "I feel like jumping out of the helicopter" I say "please don't ruby" Cream says "we'll help you" sonic says "thanks, what I can tell my sister" "sister?" tails says I get on my cellphone "hello?" sandy says "meet me at Eggman's base"

Giz_4ever, shadowluvgirl and 2 others like this

zelda4559 The next part is planing time.

Milesprowerfan I like it. Very fast paced again, but you offer shock to your readers. If you had more practice with writing, you could build up the mystery over a longer period of time. That way people could really go :O! It's hard to learn, but well worth it. Again, I truly see talent in your fanfic. It takes guts to get this far. As you continue writing sequels or other stories, you'll gain progress and wisdom. It's a long process, but I have faith that you'll succseed.

NickleBackFan nice story

NickleBackFan poor ruby finding out that though

zelda4559 thanks

Haze the Hedgehog Prt. 6 - Xiz vs Typhoon!

posted by marksmen456

"Why don't tu mind your own... BUISNESS!!!" Yelled Xiz as he sticked his hand out,engulfing Typhoon in flames.

"Heh heh heh." Chuckled Xiz.

"Really? Is that all tu got?" dicho the hedgehog from inside the inferno,the flames cleared around him,and showed a spiral of wind around Typhoon,sheilding him from the blast.

"What?! Why tu little!" Suddenly a slash went across his chest,then Typhoon jumped,and then slammed his foot in Xiz's stomach. Typhoon then,uppercutted Xiz,foot still in stomach. Xiz went back alittle,rubbing his face.

"Impressive,you seem to be más tougher then I first suspected......

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Haze the Hedgehog Prt.4 - Damayz's challenge,Xiz gets the first strike!

posted by marksmen456

4/6/11 3:33am - Dear JOURNAL,NOT DIARY. Me and the others,where walking through the jungle,no food,or water,on occasions,Mother would suggest too eat Caboose,I dicho no every time,Who would like too eat a stupid android,and that's literally when I say Stupid,why in fact,Caboose thought a chameleon was a pie! A frikin PIE! Not only the fact he kept it for the whole trip,and kept on trying too eat it when he has NO MOUTH,honestly,this journal is the only thing keeping me sane right now.... I just wonder what the others are up too-

"Hey Haze!" dicho Mother,as she snatched away the "Journal" away...

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Haze the Hedgehog Prt. 2 - A team is formed.

posted by marksmen456

"Nocturn huh? Well that's a weird name." dicho Haze.

"Well at least my name isn't 'Haze'" Nocturn snapped back.

"Right,hey,have tu seen my helmet?" Haze asked the stranger.

"Oh,you mean this is your helmet?" Nocturn held up Haze's helmet,it's visor shattered,and blood stains covering it.

"Why would tu need this peice of junk?" dicho Nocturn,puzzled.

Haze growled as he speaked,"I NEED THAT HELMET!"

Nocturn jumped back,"Okay,okay geez,let's just FIX the damn thing first!"

Haze crossed his arms. Nocturn walked off,and motioned for Haze to follow. He did,eventually they went to a camp.

"Alright Haze,welcome...

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Frostmourne - Book 1, Prologue

posted by skoish

Ifuen leaned over the table, keeping himself up por propping his arms on the table. He stared at the holoscreen, formulating a secret plan in his head. Now usually, he wasn’t this quiet; whenever he had some life-threatening, daring plan of action, he would usually require a little help to think it up, but now he couldn’t trust anyone. He wanted to trust his best friend Jace, who had been at his side since they were little. He wanted to trust Anya, who he had always loved from the bottom of his heart. But letting someone in on the plan would be dangerous; not to him, but to everyone else....

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Q&A With Haze cruzar, cruz the Hedgehog! :D

posted by marksmen456

A little Q&A with my new Haze the Hedgehog character,You'll see him in the Typhoon stories! :D

Q: Does Haze get nosebleeds sometimes?
A: Yes,but tu can't see it.
heh heh,helmets are awesome.

Q: Can Haze talk?
A: WELL DUH!

A: Does Haze have a girlfriend?
Q: Erm,no?

Q: Is Haze better then Shadow?
A: ........Who's Shadow?

Q: Does Haze EVER take his casco off?
A: NO!

Q: Is Haze religous?
A: My visor is a CROSS.

Q: Does Haze fight alot?
A: Only when I have to.

Q: Can tu turn your casco White instead of Black?
A: Somehow that sounded racist.....

Q: Which sword does Haze like better,a Longsword,or Katana?
A: Katana,cause it's faster.

Q: Can Haze tell jokes?
A: Knock knock.
GTFO
D:

Q: What does Haze think of fangirls?
A: As long as they don't steal my helmet,clothes,etc. I'm fine with them.

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Typhoon the Hedgehog Prt.5

posted by marksmen456

"Er,Ugh!" dicho Typhoon,getting up from the cold ground. "That damn bounty hunter will pay..." He said,weakly. He floated all the way back up,and ran off.

The Commander slammed his hand on the ground,"I WANT THAT HEDGEHOG DEAD,YOU HEAR ME? DEAD! Send in Shadow and Rouge to help Alyosius!"

The Soilder responded,"Yes sir!" And ran off.

"Ugh,What am I going to do?! Every time I try and put him here,he keeps getting out,HALF of my troops are dead because of HIM! One hedgehog! Something that not even the great Alyosius can kill!"

"Calm down already,I'm sure we'll be able to kill Typhoon with Shadow...

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Typhoon the Hedgehog Prt. 3

posted by marksmen456

Typhoon,the hedgehog that slaughtered the G.U.N base,was heading towards the woods,he probrably thought he would be seguro there,he was wrong....

Up at a helicopter,A wolf,wearing sunglasses,asked what he needed too do,and where he can find this,'Typhoon'

The Commander dicho to him,"Typhoon has been located in the forest,find him and kill him."

Alyosius nodded his head.

Soon the helicopeter landed in the forest,and the Black Knight Alyosius walked out,he automaticaly searched around for movement.

Typhoon suddenly felt weak while walking,"What's going on?" He asked too himself,then he remembered.

"THE...

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Sonic and the Chaos Warriors Episode 2: tu look just like me!

posted by ImAFanOfTails

John was running hard in the forest. He had sticks and leaves stuck in his fur. “Yow!” One of John’s tails had gotten stuck in a rooted that had been sticking up from the ground. He yanked at his tails, trying to pull it out. “Ow!” To John’s surprise, it hurt even more! So he had to carefully push it out. There! It was free! Now John could get to the crash. There seemed to be a clearing ahead and what John saw was not good. There were small fires that dotted the ground. Pieces of twisted metal was scattered everywhere. And what was left of the main body was trashed. It looked like...

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Depressed Herat book II charapter II

posted by NickleBackFan

Murderer stuggled to open his eyes. When he finally did he saw Carter and Kat siguiente to him. "Hey sleepy head 'bout time ya waked up." Kat said. Carter nodded. Murderer looked back and forth. "I'm sorry but who are you?" he dicho confused. Kat giggled. "You should take a look at your self first." Murderer looked down at his hands. "Hmmm skin?" He dicho surpised. Then he looked at Kat. "So tu are Kat in human form." Kat nodded. Murderer looked over at Carter then looked back at Kat with a helpless look on his face. "It's Carter." Kat laughed. "Oh." Carter stood up. "Well now that we are done reinorducing...

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The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul pt15: Final Part!!!!

posted by Milesprowerfan

“You were created to be a guardian, Shadow.” Myzak began, waiting Shadow's fingers glide across a keyboard. “First to Maria, and then...you corrupted, somehow. Now, tu will have no purpose unless tu protect others. Once that is down, tu will be alright.”

“But,” Shadow said, staring at the monitor of the same lab that Dr. Gerald Robotnik’s memory chip was inserted into Myzak's brain, “am I really the Ultimate Life Form? o am I a clone?” He got the head-band ready.

Myzak smiled. “You were always the original. For one thin', clones don't bleed. There's a bloodstain on your...

Depressed Herat episode 3 part 3 final part

posted by NickleBackFan

Rocket ran to Olley. "Hey Olley can i borrow a voice recorder?" He asked. "Sure" Olley dicho as he gave it to him. "Oh no i need a small one." "Oh ok." Olley gave Rocket a small one and took back the big one. "Thankies." Rocket dicho as he ran back down to where Izzy, Bullet, and his Dad were. Carter was tapping his foot in announace. "Why did tu call me back here?" He asked. Rocket put the voice recorder in one hand and patted his dad on the back with that hand too. "Ohhhhh you'll see." Rocket dicho in a fake cheerful tone. Rocket took his hand away from his dad's back. The voice recorder was...

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Depressed episode 3 part 1

posted by NickleBackFan

Bullet found himself dozzing off while he worked on the shack for Maiyumi. 'Why am i even doing this for?' He thought. 'i barely even like her! i guess snice Bloosom will being staying here too i might aas well do the best i can for her at least.' Izzy climbed up to the roof where Bullet was. "hey how's it hanging?" she asked. "okay iguess. i had to work like this when i was eight for my first gruadian and i hated him más then i hate Maiyumi." Bullet repeiled. "Why do tu hate her anyways?" Izzy asked. Bullet put down the hammer and took the nails out of his mouth. "Well i kinda like her but...

Cynthia the Dark spirit, The Dark Beginning 4, The secret of the Hedgehog

posted by Dethklokrox90

"Alright Cynthia, were home." says Silver as they arrive back at the apartments."Thanks Silver, I gotta get back to work." respuestas Cynthia as she hugs Silver good-bye.

"Ok, see ya later!" Silver admits while blushing.
Cynthia runs up to her apartment, unlocks the door, going to her computer.

"Time to learn más about that Hedgehog." says Cynthia as she types in Mars the Hedgehog in a buscar area.After a little waiting she clicks on a full study about Mars.

"This wil-" stops Cynthia as she looks at the information about Mars in the location box as it says "Created in a Military Base."

Cynthia stops...

Cynthia the Dark spirit, The Dark Beginning 3, The Battle for treasure & a new secret

posted by Dethklokrox90

"Fine Mars..." says Cynthia as she aims for an attack,"I accept a battle."
"Excellent." respuestas Mars as he puts the esmeralda on the box.

Cynthia looks behind Mars and sees a door that is being hit on por someone behind it.Cynthia thinks that Silver might be behind the door and trys to think of a plan.

"Bring it!" Mars jumps in th air about to hit Cynthia on the head."What?" Cynthia looks up and dodges the attack as fast as she could making Mars break his hand.

"OWWW!!!" yells Mars as he trys to get up after the fall.Cynthia grabs the esmeralda and yells,"Chaos War!"

The ground opens up making demons...

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Cynthia the dark spirit, The dark beginning 1

posted by Dethklokrox90

*Cynthia runs down a lot of stairs*

Cynthia:Mom!Dad!

*Hundreds of voices fill the air then 2 screams fill the air*

Cynthia:NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Cynthia falls off the side of the staircase and falls to death*

*Cynthia screams and wakes up after nightmare*

*Cynthia puts her hands on her face*

Cynthia:Why do I keep dreaming that?

*Cynthia grabs her cell phone and dials numbers*

Cynthia:I got something else to take care of though.

*Cynthia opens balcony door and walks out to it*

*Amy Rose respuestas the line*

Amy:Hello!

Cynthia:Amy its me.

Amy:Hi Cynthia!Are tu ok?You sound scared.

Cynthia:Nightmare, listen...

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The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul: Pt 8

posted by Milesprowerfan

“Are we there yet?” Tails whined sleepily.

“We’ll get there when we get there!” Knuckles snapped. Sonic snored on the wing. Myzak was playing another long crossword puzzle. “Besides, you’re the one who’s driving!”

“But we’ve been flying through fog for hours!” Tails groaned. The X-Tornado tilted slightly, causing Sonic to fall onto Myzak’s crossword. “When did the Mystic Ruins get like this? Wait. Don’t tell me! It happened after Eggman left. Right?”

“Yeah!” Knuckles snapped. “Can tu stop complaining?”

“But, I haven’t gotten my coffee yet!” Tails snapped...

The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul: Pt 4

posted by Milesprowerfan

Note: This is a continuation of Part 3. tu need to read some of the other stuff first.

The rush of wind flowing past his ears made Sonic feel alive again. Of course, he wasn't running at the speed of sound, exactly. He was just running faster than 60 miles an hour, because he had both Tails and Knuckles following him at 50 miles an hour.

"Feels like old times, huh?" Sonic called back. "Man! I'm unstoppable!"

"Just like old times." Knuckles rolled his eyes. "At least I have a life and a career! I'm not living in my mother's basement!"

"You don't even know your mom." Tails snapped. "Anyway, the...

The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul Pt:2

posted by Milesprowerfan

Note: If tu have not read Part One, I strongly suggest tu do. This part is longer than the last one. más for my fans!

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Maria.

Her face lit up every memory of his existence. Dr. Gerald told her once everyday that he loved her.

Myzak spat. Once the machine was finished, he'd get rid of Dr. Gerald once and for all. "It's a living heck." He kept telling himself. All he needed was a chaos emerald, and it'd be done. How to acquire the chaos esmeralda was the problem...but not for long...

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Rouge's fingers moved swiftly across the keys. "Why can't I just find that chaos esmeralda first?" She whined....

Character Bios #1: Cyber the Echidna

posted by CyberEchidna

Okay, so for starters, this is sorta half fanfic and half bio. It explains him a lot better. So,without further ado...

It all began in the Hurricos Village, hidden deep within Green colina Zone. A mother, Emera, gave birth to Cyber the Echidna. The father, Revon, noticed a strange marking on the newborn child's forehead. He immediately notified the doctor, whom gasped in surprise. "We have been blessed!" He exclaimed, "Your child has been marked as an Elemental Echidna!" Both in shock and ecstatic, the young elemental's father went to the village elder, to explain what had happened.
Not long after,...

Zula's Backstory

posted by NothingButNerd

This is the backstory for my new OFC (Original fan Character) :

Her name is Zula. Zula was born on the 12th of January. As a child her insane witch mother, Seena, took the spirit of Zula's father, who was a mass murderer, and planted it into Zula's mind. The reason that Seena chose her father's soul was because he was planning to kill her and Zula. A mark appeared on her left cheek and over the years has grown around her neck. When Zula gets extremely angry she goes berserk and the Spirit of her Father takes over her body. When Zula was 7 years old she killed her best friend, and mother, so...