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posted by TakTheFox
I wake up again. I don’t remember how I fell asleep. I am in my bed, not the couch…I don’t remember coming here. I thought I was still siguiente to the wheel that I had weighed down. “What was the point of doing that anyway…” I mutter.

I do remember making one discovery before everything went dark. I remember a worm-like shape that I found out seemed to be attached to my back. I realized it was my tail, and that was it before I went black.

I throw off the covers and step off the bed, landing on my large spread feet. I remember how I was able to lean back with them, so I do it again, for… fun I guess. I do so successfully, though unsurprisingly. I end up going so far back that my head can actually touch the ground, though it does require my back arch a bit, as does it with my neck.

I feel tension in my legs and feet, mostly my feet, but it is small… it slowly gets larger, and I pull myself up before I lose the strength to do so. My feet feel normal again. They must run out of energy after a while for that.

I decide to test how much energy is used por waiting a half-minute sitting on the bed, and notice that my claws have made holes in the carpet with their sharpness. I cringe and lift them higher up to avoid doing that anymore.

I’m rested, and stand up, grasp the floor with my toes, and lean back. I can now do this for two-hundred and twelve seconds. That divided por sixty equaled three minutes, and thirty-two seconds… It is now that I pregunta how I know these numbe- equations. And now I pregunta how I know what numbers are.

I recall not understanding what the raench was, o the Fridgerator, but some of these things are very easy to know, like the scale, what pounds are, the wheel, the treadmill. And why does the treadmill seem easy to understand while the raench does not? It is bigger, it is más complicated. Was there something wrong with my memory? Am… I in some place that keeps me alive but keeps me from the outside world? What is the out- “AAAGH!”

I clutch my head and fall to the floor. I had passed the two-hundred and twelve segundo mark, and lost myself in thought. My feet gave away, and I bashed my head on the ground. The scream was hosted por this, but encouraged por the preguntas in my mind. “I know what hosted and encouraged means but not what that wheel was…” I sigh.

I decide now to test if I can lean forward. I can, and while it is not as far adelante, hacia adelante as I can backward, it is far and I am impressed with myself. So naturally I freely bend my feet to the side to test that. I hear a crack, and I feel a gush of pain, then collapse again, hugging my foot as I whimper.

Something in my foot is broken, I can feel it. I feel like my blood is gushing and filling my foot, it feels really weird and I want it to stop. I consider tearing at it, but that will only make it worse. I bite into my pillow, and leave large holes with my sharp teeth as I scream while flailing on the floor, waiting for it to end.

My eyes are teary, very teary, and everything is blurry. Something is above me from the ceiling… it… it’s meta- NO NO NOT THAT THING! I pull at the ground, and slowly slide away, trying to escape the return of that metal arm.

Of course I can’t get away from it, and it does grab me por the arm again. I decide to use my tail, and envolver, abrigo around the arm with it, pulling at the arm, but it does no good, it is too strong. I do notice though how easy I can control my tail. I don’t think this is normal.

Then another arm comes from the roof, as if things weren’t bad enough. This one grabs my foot and pulls it out. Is it examining it? I scream from having my joint being forced to move; why won’t it just let me go?!

The arm does let me go after a good minuto o so, as does the other, and they go back into the ceiling. I continue pulling myself away from the ceiling, and go out the door. After that I spend a while under the mesa, tabla siguiente to the sofá again.

Because of my sleep I do feel a bit drowsy still, and soon I nod off. I don’t know what time it is when I wake back up, but I do not feel like I’ve slept for very long. My foot feels about the same still so it must have been less than an hour… unless it does not heal that quickly. I don’t know.

My foot still stings, but I have had enough of being on the floor. I pull myself out from under the table, and pull myself up with my arms and the table. The mesa, tabla leans towards me and I almost fall backwards, but my tail breaks my fall and I use it to push myself back up.

“Useful…” I say to myself while waving my tail in front of me, back and forth. “Maybe…” I envolver, abrigo my tail around the lower part of my hurt leg, and use it as a brace, and a third foot. It feel awkward but I think I can walk now.

I take a step forward, good it works. Alright, what should I do now? My stomach instantly growls so I decide to go towards the cocina again. I fear it less now, probably because I have already encountered the robotic arms, and they seem to only come once a day… I hope.

The cocina looks the same as before, so I don’t expect anything special in the Fridge. I open it and find a new plastic bag of salad, with stringed carrots, and red triangle… things. They look juicy. To the side of it is a bag that holds these grainy rectangle-like things. The dressing, Raench, is where it was last.

I put them all together once again. If I were not so hungry maybe I would be más picky, but it all looks good at this level of starvation. I do not remember eating más than once yesterday.

It tastes very good actually. The rectangles are crunchy, sort of like the bread, and I learn that the triangles are called to-ey-ma-to-eses from the bag.

Alright now I am fed. Where should I go? I suppose the wheel is the best place at the moment. I make my way there and see that all I had done has been undone. It is no longer tied down por the sofá cushion and other items, o spinning. I gape at first, with sadness filling me. I worked very hard and now it is all gone.

“So much for that…” Now… I feel something else… sort of like hunger, I’m… thirsty; yes that is the word. I remembered the dispenser in the cocina and walk back there. I do not find any cups in my ten segundo search, so I just stick my face under it and push the lever. I’m hit in the nose and eyes por slices of ice, and jerk back.

“Wrong dispenser…” I go to the other one, this time it gives me water, though now my whole head is practically soaked. It does not take long for it to make me cold. But I am replenished, fully now. And I want out.

I go around the house until I find a tall lamp, long and metallic. I pick it up, though it is heavy and sways a lot. I decide to drag it instead of carry it. It makes a lot of unpleasant sounds. I get it to the muro opposite to the sofá and bang it against the wall.

It makes a dent instantly, and a hole. Dust flies in my face and gets in my eyes. I shake my head quickly, trying to get it out, and drop the lamp. It does not land on me tha… thaful… “Why can’t I remember these words!?” I yell while rubbing my eyes

I pick the lamp up again and hit the muro a segundo time, this time I keep my eyes closed, and close my mouth as well. I do not want the dust in my throat. The hole gets big enough for me to stick my head through so I do so.

It is very dark but I can see something about ten inches in front of me. I push my hand through the hole and reach out at it. It feels cold and smooth, and very hard. It’s metal. “Of course it’s not that easy.” I pull my head out of the hole and go back to bashing at the muro with the lamp.

I keep banging at the muro until it is almost half gone from parte superior, arriba to bottom, left and right. I need room to get the siguiente wall. “OW!” I feel my hurt foot again as it is being braced no more. I collapse on my side, and the lamp almost falls on parte superior, arriba of me. I roll to the side and it breaks its lamp. I’m grateful that I had unplugged it.

I sit up and pick up my tail. I realize now how sore it actually feels. I can barely mover it. Holding it in position, and using it to push myself up for so long must have tired it out. “I can’t bang at the muro like this…”

Is my foot healed enough? Let’s see. I feel pain, a lot of pain… but… it does not feel as bad now. I decide to keep it off the ground for now. I want it to heal completely before continuing. Now though I need something else to brace it.

I measure out my tail and manually envolver, abrigo it around my leg. It holds but still hurts. It isn’t going to work a segundo time for today at least. I lay it out on the ground and use my arm to measure its distance to see how long my new brace will have to be.

The length needed at two feet. I would be upset about knowing these words and not others, but at this point being bothered por it just annoys me. I turn to the lamp and hoist it up. siguiente I use it to pull me up, and for now it will keep me upright, but it is too long to be my brace.

I notice the mesa, tabla in front of the couch. The… things, posts? N-no… legs, the legs are the length needed. I stumble over towards them, and drop the lamp as I go. It’s too heavy now to lift repeatedly. Had I two legs to lift it, the journey would be easier, but as the lamp was my other leg, it could not be used as both.

Since I don’t have the lamp anymore in my heads, I fall forward. Quickly I brace my arms on the table, slamming against it. I hear it cracking. At first this scares me. If it breaks I’ll fall, but then again, if it breaks, the legs will be free.

After many shoves the mesa, tabla gives way, and the legs break off. I am prepared to pato but even while prepared my jaw bashes against the back of the table. My teeth barely miss my tongue as tears fill my eyes once again.

Ten minutos of laying on my back and whimpering later I decide to get one of the legs. As I sit up and turn to the table, I feel my jaw and the oozing wetness beneath it. Blood is on it, and a bruise is forming. “Not now…” I ignore it and look over the legs. One is almost broken off, but slightly connected to the rest of the wood.

I twist it until it breaks off, scraping my arm on a sharp piece of wood in the process. I don’t even bother to groan o scream this time. After a long-day’s work I’ve fashioned two legs at my side, and wrapped the cushion-covers in strips around the legs. I make it so that it braces against my knee but it still hurts and pushes past it, ruining the brace.

Later still I have broken the lamp off into two pieces and replace the leg on the outer side of my own leg with the lamp. This way I am able to push with my hand to keep the weight even. With the lamp in two pieces, this is much easier to do.

I feel accomplished, but then I feel discouraged. After all of this time, not only was my tail strong again, but there is no way I can try breaking through the metal muro in this condition. There wasn’t a clock so how would I know how much time had passed?

There are no windows in this house. I have examined everything… I think I did at least. It is a box. It scares me to be in this box. I want out. The air feels stuffy, and I begin to breath strangely. My head becomes dizzy, I have to calm down. It’s the hyper… thing again. Deep breaths, I take deep breaths…

What is the reason for me being in here?



“Sir, Subject D-F E-2 is-“

“Doing much better than her brothers.”


“But it’s mental-capacity, it’s unstable.”

“So were the other two when they first gained consciousness.”

“I suppose… but what happens if-“

“I’m interrupting tu because tu have doubts. Do tu doubt me?”

“… I…”

“Then leave.” The Doctor ordered. The agent walked out. Starring over a control-pad, the Doctor selected a single button. Metallic arms came out of the roof inside the house again.
posted by Shade2145
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of tu are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give consejos in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!

Chapter One

Mary Sueing is when tu bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.

N00b133!!!: I shoot tu then telport tu inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B tu JUST MADE UP AN WORD

See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no tu never.


Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we mostrar ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do tu want that? No.

Chapter 2.

Never Mary sue.
That is all.
posted by TakTheFox
Yeah it took a while for me to think up something to whine about X{D, but here’s one. FIGHTING IN ROLEPLAYS. NO, this isn’t going to be me complaining about “VIOLENCE IS BAD! NERRRRRRRRR!” I mean… yeah Violence is BAD, but th- okay right, off topic, sorry.

Anyway, Fighting in Roleplays is usually… one of the most annoying things ever. If someone is fighting someone else in a roleplay, it is can be at times what I like to call “Stubborn-one-sided” where both side will act like no matter what, they are the ones in control, and the superior. Now I originally was going to say that...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Everyone ran to the room that Rose was in. See was at the far wall, staring. Thorn ran to her and hugged her," Rose! I'm so happy you're alright! I was so worried I-...Rose?" Rose was staring into the purple mirror, the mirror reflected nothing but flames. Thorn stepped back and looked at Flare," What's wrong with her? Why isn't she responding?!" "She's being controlled por these stones called nightmare crystals. If tu stare into for even a second, tu go into a dreamlike state, where your nightmares seem real. tu could be stuck there for days, and it would only feel like seconds." Flare said...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Flare looked around for some way out, but everything looked locked tight. " Do tu see anything that could help us, Thorn?" Flare asked. Thorn shook his head and then noticed the rusty bars of their cage," these look like they're really really old, maybe we can break them?" Thorn grabbed one bar and shook it. The bar became loose, but was still stuck in place. "It's moving!" Flare yelled, then suddenly covering her mouth so Bard and Scar wouldn't hear. Bard had fallen asleep and so had Scar, and they still seemed to be snoring away. Flare helped Thorn try to mover the bar. It seemed to get more...
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posted by LukkyRosa
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She dicho softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They dicho "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was o were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get inicial ASAP."
posted by Rachel_Savaya
Follow My Dreams (Rachel's Theme)
by: Rachel Savaya

verse 1:

ive been hurt
ive been crushed
ive been told
im just crazy
but i will not listen to them
anymore

chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my corazón wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take me
ill follow my dreams
anywhere

verse 2:

ive been lied to
been shut down
i just cant
take this anymore
but now ive got friends to
help me through this
and i will hang on cause

Chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my corazón wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Rose immediately let go of the people's arms. " No...No it can't be!..." Rose knew these people because the people were Rose's parents. "Rose, help us!" "You're not my real parents...You can't be..." Rose's parents stepped adelante, hacia adelante her. "Remember the fuego Rose? The fuego you created? The one that killed us?" Her father said. "We always told tu not to play with fire.", dicho Rose's mother. Rose shook her head. " It wasn't me! It was an accident, caused por a cloth being por the stove!" Her parents got closer and as they did, they became más and más fire. " No, stay away! I don't like the fire...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat walked down the tunnel, hand against the muro and flashlight on. She walked around until she came to an open room. Nat walked around gazing at how big the room was. She shone her flashlight around and then something caught her eye. The light was reflecting off of something. She walked towards the shining object. Then she stepped on something. She looked down and noticed some purple crystals. "What are these doing in these tunnels?" She looked up and saw a mountain of treasure. She stepped back in awe and tripped over something. She got up quickly and was face to face with eight giant eyes....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Rose stared at Nat in disbelief. "What?!" She said. Nat sighed, " I've had these dreams lately, just suddenly coming to me. It was about me wondering into the woods and I kept hearing a voice. I followed it to this hole, where I was pushed in and while I was falling, I saw two dark figures looking down at me. One of them was your brother." They all stared, then Flare looked into the hole. It looked as if it was a bottomless pit. "Rose my brother is down there? Why would he go down there?" Nat got up and walked to the hole. " There's only one way to find out. We have to take our chances and...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat finished making some eggs and tocino, bacon when Flare woke up. "Good Morning. Did tu sleep well?" Nat asked, getting her a plate. "I slept like a baby! How about you?" Flare answered, digging into her breakfast. "Not one of my best sleeps, but I'll pull through the day." Nat answered then yawned. She got herself a plate and sat por Flare. "Did tu have any dreams? I had a strange one about going to the public pool and then ending up in the ocean and finding treasure. Very strange." Flare said. " Nothing interesting, I'm sure of that." Nat said, uneasily. Flare seemed to notice. " You're lying....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the comida they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I por a tree? She went to put the...
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posted by mephiles97
The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11



Kyle released a quiet groan as he slowly began waking up from the effects of the tranquil dart that he had been hit with. He struggled to open his eyes as his stamina very slowly began returning to him. He finally did manage to open his eyes, struggling to focus his blurry vision on his surroundings. He was sure that he had been captured por the Dark Horses.

Finally managing to get his eyes to focus, Kyle slowly moved his head around to observe where he was. He was in a fairly large cell made of solid concrete, so they would most likely be very sturdy. Since he was...
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So the small city-like village of Crystal city was in a bind,with the greedy tyrant Bubba closing in to take all the folks prisoner,the people of Crystal city worked like clockwork to retrieve the gems from the caverns in order to pay off the bill.However all the gems were incinerated due to the heat surrounding the smoldering remains of MTL's pod,The villagers quickly gathered everything and brought it to Bubba,however it didn't meet the proper amount,Angered por this,Bubba shouted "Cheapskates!I was generous enough to give tu vermin the título of this land and tu try to trick me out of it!?You...
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Part Two “Problematic Circumstances”

Talon slowly opened his eyes. He was weary and dizzy. “What… wh-where?” He slowly turned his head and pushed himself upward to get a better look at his surroundings. He was in a metal room… with a locked door… one light… and one bed… a cell? He was in prison?

“How did I get here?!” Talon jerked to his feet and yanked at the door handle; obviously it would not open, but why not try anyway?

“Wait a second…” Nick closed his eyes and concentrated on what happened before this. “There was the… fire… then I was taken por the cops!...
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Heh,I bet tu didn't think I was going to write this,huh.XD

Okay...time for the shit storm of shit storms.The original MTL series...oh dear lord,where to begin?Well the creation of my original fan character was no easy feat,Back when I created my FC I never understood the concept of Gary-stus and Mary-Sues(Until mephs pointed out sometime later),but where to begin...I suppose let's get the easy part of this articulo out of the way,My regrets and mistakes with the original series.First regret...cliche back story.Again,long before I knew anything about cliches I decide to give MTL a back-story...
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Note: If your character is already in a relationship, tu can still answer, but pretend they aren’t. And do NOT just describe their current boyfriend/girlfriend for all the descripción parts unless they actually have the wanted traits.

1.    Describe your character in five words.
2.    Is your character looking for love?
3.    Would they rather stay single?
4.    What is the name of the first male/female that your character knows that comes to mind? (THE TRUTH)
5.    Does your character want an...
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posted by RawrMonster123
(This is the new fan fiction I made the answer for.)

"RING RING! RING RING!" the phone rung that morning.

The young 22-year-old in the cama besides where the phone was rose up, yawning and stretching. She looked at her alarm clock. It read "3:00am". "Why are people calling this early..?" the young adult thought. She sleepily tried turned the light on from lamp and tried to grab the phone.

Finally getting it's grasp, she pressed the talk button and put it up to her ear. "Hello?"

"Is this Cassandra?" the person, who sounded rather professional, on the other line asked.

"It's Casey.. And may I help...
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fecha of interview: 2012
Name: Caesar (Kai-Sar) Licentia Midiotai
Height: 6ft
Age: 19
Country of origin: England, British Empire

Likes: metal music, fire, Anarchic movements, Gypsies, animales and Tea.

Dislikes: Governments, Yaoi, people pronouncing his name wrong, Yuri, Centipedes, And most of all: Cold tea

Short story of his life (In his own words) : So tu wish to know about me do you? Alright then I suppose the beginning it is the best place to start....
I was born in 1993 to what tu could call... a broken home... No mother she died during childbirth. So that just left me with dear old daddy. Dear,...
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posted by RawrMonster123
One question: Why do tu do it?

Well your answer is probably "I can't draw!" tu know why tu can't draw? Because tu never picked up a pooping piece of paper and pencil and actually tried to! So now, kids, I'm gonna teach tu a little lesson about art:

RECOLORING AND STEALING ART AREN'T COOL! IT'S FOR NONCREATIVE PEOPLE!

You know, good drawers weren't born as good drawers. If tu believe that, you're sadly mistaken. tu know how they became good drawers? por actually drawing!

Also, tu can get arrested when tu steal people's art. Really.

Now, just grab a paper, grab a pencil, get your pencil...
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Shadey: Ok I got bored... so I start now.
Thorn: But tu dicho siguiente Saturday!
Shadey: Yeah... I know but I'm bored so... shut it! Now begin

(Rooftops 11:47 p.m.)
"The night is wonderful... sigh... why does it have to end? Why does everything have a story?" A grey hedgehog thinks to herself. "Of course why is it my problem? I'm Shadey Grey! The last dark user... nothing is darker than me!" Shadey chuckles to herself. She jumps off the roof and wanders through the city. She messes with her black limiter rings and smiles and walks home.

(Shadey's mansion 12:26 a.m.)
Shadey takes off her black jacket...
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