escritura My song!

Raeneloves1D posted on Jun 16, 2012 at 04:55PM
hii! So i have been working on a song for a week now and got it down! here it is
[Verse 1]
Shes a girl with the best intentions
Hes a man of his oun inventions
She looked out the window He walked out the door
But she followed hima nd he said "Whatcha' looking for?"
[Chours]
She said i want something that i want
Somethig that i tell myself i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Something that i want
Something thati tell my self i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Yeah
[Verse 2]
Hes been living in a pure illusion
Shes gonna come to her oun conclution
Right when you think you know what to say
Someone comes along and shows you a brand new way
[Chorus]
She said i want something that i want
Somethig that i tell myself i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Something that i want
Something thati tell my self i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Cause-
[Bridge]
Its so easy to make belive
Seems live your living in a dream
Dont you see that what you is
Standing in front of you?
whoaaa
[Chorus]
I want something that i want
Somethig that i tell myself i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Something that i want
Something thati tell my self i need
Something that i want
And i need everything i see
Yeah yeah yeah
Wont you give it to me now

Thanks for reading! tell me what you think of my song. thanks again and Bye!
~Raene(: xx

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hace más de un año Raeneloves1D said…
The songs name is Somthing That I Want!
Enjoyy!
hace más de un año hugebleachfan1 said…
big smile
its a good song really good song just minor mistakes but other than that its a good song
hace más de un año Raeneloves1D said…
smirk
ya sorry about those mistakes =/ but thank you so much!
hace más de un año CallaLily11 said…
smile
I really like it I didn't know what the beat would be so I did the beat lik in Clint Eastwood By Gorillaz (XD) If you made a beat, I think it would be a very good song. :)
hace más de un año Raeneloves1D said…
wink
thank you means alot!!!
hace más de un año Louistomlinson9 said…
meh
wow this song is great
but i dont know the tune =/
hace más de un año Raeneloves1D said…
heart
ya :T im working on a video cover of it. ill send you the link when i post it :D thank you so much Lou it means alot coming from you
hace más de un año ZekiYuro said…
smile
The lyrics are so cool!But I wish I knew how to sing it
hace más de un año ZekiYuro said…
wink
Keep on writing^^