he guys I would like your opinion about a kinda book I'm writhing, it may become a series who knows. here's the opening part, please tell me what tu think of it!

The beginning…

The prophesy foretold that every 1000 año a child will be born on a full moon, this child will have the gift of controlling the fifth element of nature, Spirit, the child will be the one that will unite the other four elements these are the Dragomirs controllers of fire, the Obrians controllers of earth, the Petrosias controllers of wind, the Nereidas controllers of water and the last family the Petrovs into which the child will be born. This child will not only unite them but also destroy the evil that lurks and prays on the weak. But in order to do so the five elements must be one, only that can the evil be destroyed for good until than it will enslave the weak and control them.