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This is my first Twilight fan fiction. I started escritura it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started escritura it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.


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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped o screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...
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posted by Twilight597
Chapter Two-The Party

    Charlie and I ate at the lodge than we left to Edward’s house. Edward was waiting on the porch. Charlie left and Edward and I went inside. The inside of the Cullen’s house looked like a dance club, but so much better. Alice must have gone way overboard again. It was almost eight o’clock, so guest should be joining us soon.
    Jess, Angela, Mike, Ben, Lauren, and Eric were the first to come. I found out I barely knew anybody here.
    “The mutt is still not here, but I cant see anything” Alice said...
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posted by twilight-7
Chapter 13 Guys, I wrote as fast as I could.

Jacob’s eyes refused to open. My eyes filled with moisture and tears rolled down my cheeks. I had probably killed him. I had my mind focused on his so I would be able to hear even the faintest of his thoughts, so that I would know he was ok. I was going to call Charlie but I realised that Jacob didn’t need the police. He needed a doctor. And what doctor could get here in less than three minutes?
I patted myself down, searching for my cell phone. I knew I had it when I left the house today so I must have on me somewhere. I found it in my jean pocket....
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posted by mikaela_isabela
hola guys, this is a loooooooong chapter, i had a lot of inspiration...so enjoi!

As we pulled into out drive-way, I was pretty much on the edge of my seat.
We were finally home, and I needed to see Bella. Carlisle could feel my tension.
“Edward, there’s no point going to her now, she’ll be fast asleep. It’s almost 7 in the morning.”
You’ll need to give her sometime, Edward. Let her cool off. Esme, always the logical thinker. But she has had over three months to cool off, and if I don’t see her now, I might just explode.
As soon as the car pulled to a stop, Alice said, “Have fun…”...
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Let me start off por saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being dicho here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.
posted by Twilight_F
Here is the long awaited Chapter six....well not very long awaited...but here it is!!!! I got my ideas from the Twilight libros so there are connections. Please READ, RATE AND COMMENT!!!! ENJOY!!!!!

CHAPTER 6

This chapter is a flashback from the time when Bella’s parents died. Bella’s mum’s POV. (Renée’s POV)

It was raining heavily as Charlie, Bella and I were coming back from a supper. Bella was sleeping deeply in the back seat. When suddenly a flash of lightening came down from the sky. I heard a CRACK and in front of us fell a huge tree. Charlie braked vigorously. But it wasn’t enough....
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posted by Twilight_F
This is my first one so please read and comment. I got my ideas from the Twilight Saga. Hope tu like it and if tu do I will do more!! Sorry it's quiet short but I want to make apuntalar, costa people like it first.


I was cold and wet as I scurried away from the oso, oso de that was meters from me. But this oso, oso de was oblivious to the fact that I might be his supper. I was crawling on my hands and knees, trying to get away from this creature. But in my blind panic, I slipped and snapped a branch that I was leaning on for support.
    A sudden wave of reality hit me. I was going to die. This...
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posted by doyouknow
Never in a million years would I have thought I would warm to Forks. The rain and the cold didn’t bother me anymore, but maybe that was because Jacob was always unseasonably warm.
It’s been two months since I first arrived here, and I was settling down quite well. I had made a couple of new friends in school; Jessica, Mike, Eric, Tyler and Angela were becoming quite good friends at this point. Although I got the impression that Mike and Eric wanted a little bit more. That didn’t bother me though, I already had a boyfriend. Ever since that first día Jacob and I had been inseparable. Charlie...
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There was a light tapping on the front door.....

Carlisle was already at the door waiting for them to come in. Emmett and I were in the living room and Esme was in her office upstairs, and Edward had gone hunting. Carlisle opens the door in 8 tenths of a second. I got up because there was a new smell, something like lilacs, and another más chesnut flavor. I went to the door and i saw this short girl who looked to be at least 17 and a male who looked to be like 19, they were there at the door with huge smiles on their faces, but their eyes were not oro like ours, they were a deep burgundy.
They...
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 Robert Pattinson has a hair cut
Robert Pattinson has a hair cut
I really don't think anything is wrong with it. I think he looks great both ways. I hope people don't get mad at him o anything because after all it is his hair. haha :) He also did a great job in Twilight considering how much pressure fans can put on actors. Team Edward!!! Not to betray what i just dicho but I also think that they should keep Jacob for the part in New Moon Taylor did a good job in the movie as well and i think that it is really unfair to just cut him out of the series like that. I also think that the actor considering the part is very arrogant on how he is más buff than...
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ATTENTION TEAM EDWARDS lectura THIS: Do NOT let the chapter heading affect your descision to read this. I know how some of tu felt about the POV of Jacob in BD, but just read this like tu would if it was Edward's POV. Thanks! Enjoy!


I tried again to picture what my life had been like without Renesmee, and came up mostly blank. All I could remember was that I had spent it mostly with Bella. Before Bella, I couldn't remember at all. Then every detail with Nessie was crystal clear. I could remember every expression on her face since she had been born.
It wasn't natural to be away from our imprinted...
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posted by vampiress015
I was just thinking about Twilight-as always, and well I'm a little stuck, and I need your help.

So Vampires, Blood-Suckers, Leeches, whatever tu wanna call 'em, they're amazing, right? But then again they have their faults: they have a thirst that water won't solve, they have to keep moving around so they don't attract attention etc etc.
But then I thought about this one, I was answering a pick about Rosalie (good pick btw teNaxx, there's a apoyo coming your way) and I kinda voiced my opinion about her mostrando everyone that being a vampire isn't that great. At the time I was thinking about her...
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posted by luvrofedward
 Image Credit: -vintage-aerith @ deviantart.com
Image Credit: -vintage-aerith @ deviantart.com
here is my twilight fantasía life......
it is SERIOUS fantasy, its also SUPER long(I am NOT exaggerating so if tu are doing something important, tu should wait to read this some other time), some of the parts of the story are not in relation to twilight at all, while others are, so if i get something different than the book, its probably on purpose, and I’m not wrong, I’m just making stuff up!
also it is in a first-person story-thingy so if tu get lost, sorry! AND it is my first story-thingy(haha) so dont sue me if its THAT bad. just tell me where i can improve! comentario PLEAZ!

My name is...
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The Character



Name: Jane

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Creates Mental Illusions of Pain

About Them: Jane is a vampire in coven known as the Volturi who reside in Volterra, Italy. They are regarded as "royalty" por other vampiros because they have lived for well over three thousand years and act as police, enforcing the rule that the existence of vampiros be kept a secret from humans. They often send others to travel from Volterra to prevent overzealous covens and renegade vampiros from exposing their species. They are guarded por several powerful vampiros who have been collected for their powers...
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posted by Twilight_Malfoy
~Renesmee's POV~
Tears began to stream down my face as I stared into my new daughter's brown eyes. She cooed and grasped my pointing finger.
"She's gorgeous." I heard Jake whisper into my ear. I laughed happily and kissed his temple. It was his child as well. Yes,I've broken the treaty,but I don't care.
"What's her name going to be?" Asked Aunt Rosalie,peering over my shoulder to get a good look at my child. I pondered for a moment.
"What about Granite Elle Black?" Suggested Jake quietly. I looked down at her face. She looked perfect for being a Granite. I nodded and handed her to his awaiting...
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posted by countrygirl2008
Preseny day
How did tu control yourself Jasper asked. I looked at my son who struggled with this part of being a vampire and dicho It took all my control. I don’t know why maybe because in some way we were soul mates and I loved her with everything I had. It came close many times. I don’t know how tu and Edward did it but yall have so much self control Emmett said. I looked at my usually humorous son and all I saw was wonder and wishful thinking. Esme was standing beside me now and whispered in my ear ‘I amor you’. Esme loved me with every understanding and passion that she could....
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posted by countrygirl2008
She was in her room lost in thought when I climbed through her window. Diana I whispered. She turned my way her eyes widening. Carlisle she cried as she took a step closer. Don’t please .I don’t trust myself I told. She stopped and really looked at me her face never giving anything away .I trust you. tu would never hurt me under any circumstances. Your Carlisle, My Carlisle. She closed the distance between us which made me want to bolt from the room but I stayed rooted to the spot I was in.My hole body burned.Part of me (the vampire part )wanted to end her life right then and there.But...
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My eyes were opened when I first saw you,you made my corazón skip a beat,I heard nothing but yours...your heart,Never have felt the way I feel about tu in a century,I want tu around me,but I'm in a dilema...you need to know

Chorus: Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist,every mover tu make,every step tu take,every word tu say,every breath tu take makes my corazón ache,Oh Bella,Oh Bella it's hard to resist

I couldn't stop thinking about you,so oh,oh I revealed who I was,i could not hide, they say that's what happens when "two hearts collide" and I didn't believe until I experienced it,Does not change the fact that oh Bella tu need to hear

(Chorus)

But now looking since tu are mine,I guess tu could say we are doing fine but Im still reserved ,you think Im obsurd for saying I have to be careful but the fact still remains...

(Chorus)
posted by countrygirl2008
Present day
I looked at my family and saw they wanted to ask but did not know how to do it. I though it would be my granddaughter who broke the silence but it was Bella. Carlisle ,what happened she asked in astomishment. Carlisle ?Edward asked. I had my mind so closed off Edward couldn’t hear me. Carlisle,Please! I keep getting all kind off different emotions from tu and Anxious and confusion from Edward because he can’t hear tu Jasper exclaimed. Sorry son I’ll mover on to the story I told him. Please because tu have all the girls listening to you.They never listen to me with such interest...
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 I amor Story that turned out to be REAL!! I BELIEVED!
I Love Story that turned out to be REAL!! I BELIEVED!
(In another Response, I share this OPINION OF "MINE" to all... and the Reason I choose to Boycot this Illusion.)


Dear Everyone,

I'm not casting any first stone upon Kristen. She IS free to do as she pleases. I'm just simply walking away from her, as anyone to ever take seriously again. Yes, I TRUSTED HER! YES! I BELIEVED IN HER! YES! I BELIEVED IN ROBERT & KRISTEN!

Do tu ALL KNOW that Rob was preparing to PROPOSE TO HIS KRISTEN RIGHT BEFORE THE NEWS HIT?? CAN tu JUST EVEN A LITTLE BIT, UNDERSTAND JUST "HOW" TORE UP INSIDE "POOR" ROBERT IS! WONDER WHAT YOU'D ALL SAY IF "HE" WERE THE ONE...
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