Yes finally chapter one is up its kinda long for me so hope tu like it and please review ood and bad comentarios will be excepted because i'd like to know what i can improve!! thank you
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank tu so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone dicho in unison.
“You know what someone dicho to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and tu know what I said," Zac dicho Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I dicho bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if tu keep calling!" Zac dicho and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the concierto o not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the concierto and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy dicho 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are tu going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe tu can come when we’re más close to inicial and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my el maletero, tronco and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger camioneta, van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway siguiente to her and popped my el maletero, tronco she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do tu think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our asiento belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no escritura on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ o something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I dicho quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutos later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I dicho and took a step back, a little frightened por her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane por the way, tu must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I dicho while pointing to each one when I dicho there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand siguiente to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your camioneta, van over to out plane and we can put tu things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the el maletero, tronco and pulled out all the suitcases and música equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a asiento siguiente to the window.
Jane sat right siguiente to me.
“So do tu have any particular song tu want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can tu still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well tu have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve hora flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set lista now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What tu Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 más minutes, and if it’d too ling tu can take one out.” Jane dicho and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let tu get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane dicho quietly and reached up to get a almohada and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the almohada and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while canto Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank tu so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone dicho in unison.
“You know what someone dicho to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and tu know what I said," Zac dicho Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I dicho bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if tu keep calling!" Zac dicho and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the concierto o not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the concierto and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy dicho 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are tu going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe tu can come when we’re más close to inicial and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my el maletero, tronco and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger camioneta, van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway siguiente to her and popped my el maletero, tronco she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do tu think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our asiento belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no escritura on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ o something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I dicho quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minutos later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I dicho and took a step back, a little frightened por her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane por the way, tu must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I dicho while pointing to each one when I dicho there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand siguiente to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your camioneta, van over to out plane and we can put tu things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the el maletero, tronco and pulled out all the suitcases and música equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a asiento siguiente to the window.
Jane sat right siguiente to me.
“So do tu have any particular song tu want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can tu still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well tu have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve hora flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set lista now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What tu Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 más minutes, and if it’d too ling tu can take one out.” Jane dicho and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let tu get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane dicho quietly and reached up to get a almohada and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the almohada and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while canto Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
one eager look from tu and por corazón starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would amor tu more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side por side.i want all of tu forever.no less time will ever do
tu say how can tu ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long hace when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of tu and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me por the hand and lead me anywhere.with tu my time is yours to share. i amor you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would amor tu more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side por side.i want all of tu forever.no less time will ever do
tu say how can tu ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long hace when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of tu and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me por the hand and lead me anywhere.with tu my time is yours to share. i amor you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight fan I have joined this club. I fell in amor after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of lectura the books. If tu could please at least say in the beginning of your articulo that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the libros so much más and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for lectura when I shouldn't be. Thank tu so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were oro and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend o girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in amor and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would amor edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the libros yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank tu for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comentario of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in amor and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would amor edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the libros yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank tu for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comentario of wat u think of my article...=þ
thanks for lectura im really new at this as some of guys can tell