Thank tu for lectura the 1st chapter...here's the second, I hope tu enjoy and PLEASE comment!!!


Rosalie's POV

After Edward left I darted deeper into the woods beyond the clearing. There were bears around, I eperlano them. I continued a little deeper into the woods until one of them came into view. I bent down into a crouch and struck at a cub that was in front of me. After I was done with the cub, I heard a scream of agony coming from straight ahead. I followed the sound until I came to a small clearing no bigger than a dorm room at college. In the clearing I saw another bear, probably the mother...

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Rosalie's POV

I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt tu if tu say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we...