Something REALLY doesn't seem right here...

*UPDATE: I have since edited ALL the artículos about Ahsoka's demise. Recently, I began to realize how gruesome I was with the original topic, in which was her slaying herself. I always knew about that kind of topic being a sensitive subject, but now that I look back, I'm realizing how poor my judgement was on that part. Therefore, I'd like to apologize for any negative effects I've caused, and for not using a trigger warning with the original topic. I take full responsibility for how poor a decision I made. I also took it upon myself to editar all the artículos on her passing, as I stated earlier....

Admiral Yularen wished them luck as they boarded the TWILIGHT and a gunship that the troopers called "GRIEVOUS' WORST NIGHTMARE" because they had inflicted massive damage to Grievous' personal ship SOULESS ONE on a anterior mission. A primitive rendition of the cyborg general graced the ship's nose. In the artwork Grievous is getting a blaster bolt to his backside.
The TWILIGHT and the 'NIGHTMARE flew towards the planet the two ships reacting to the storms over the planet.
"Shields up!" Anakin called out to them.
Master Sinube hung on and closed his eyes. It had been many years since he had been...

Sideous growled at his subordinates, truely they were so patheticly unworthy. Yet Anakin was not at the crisis point to make him susceptable to the dark side."I have reports that Geinosis has been lost to us for good.As the queen has been dissolved por some rumoured genius."
Count Dooku, frowned. "It is no rumour.Though to strike at Arcane would not be prudent. It would only gain him sympathy and protection." General Grievous cought angerily. "Their losses were great .They do not have enough to protect such an asset.
We should find him and crush him." Grievous made a fist to demonstrate it further....