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What do tu guys think of my anime character?

This is Shinsen Bara (which means fresh rose in Japanese). She is half human and half fox. Why half fox? You'll see soon. She is fully Japanese and speaks nothing but Japanese and never English. She lives in a small Kingdom in the very center of japón called the bonsai Kingdom. She is almost always is in a good mood and has a very silly personality. She has a tendency for candy, cake rolls and other sweat treats. She likes to go exploring all over her kingdom and all over japón and even go venturing through other people's properties. Every Friday night, she goes over to her favorito! night club and when she is not in the mood of controlling herself, her ears transform into zorro, fox ears and she grows out her long zorro, fox tail and lets the animal in her soul out. So what do tu think of her?
 What do tu guys think of my anime character?
 sMCCarthyTV posted hace más de un año
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MissChicky97 said:
What really matters is whether o not tu like it, to be honest.


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As for the 'fully Japanese' portion of your character description... in my humble opinion, unless you're a proficient o native speaker o extremely familiar with their customs it's not going to be very realistic.
MissChicky97 posted hace más de un año
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What now? I don't understand.
sMCCarthyTV posted hace más de un año
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okay I guess you're right. Maybe I should add some tuicks to her.
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boytoy_84 said:
Looks awesome!!! :)
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
it's unique that's for sure.
but unique is gr8
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IT? What is she a non-human? lol
sMCCarthyTV posted hace más de un año
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well noting that she's half human half fox, yes, she's not entirely human, and even with that she's just a made up character not pertaining to the actually "humanness" if tu will, but i was más referring to her character rather than her as a whole.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted hace más de un año
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oh yes. She has the body of a human but the soul of a zorro, fox
sMCCarthyTV posted hace más de un año
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Very unique.
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misscrazel said:
I think she's a great character. The drawing is great too. Did tu draw it? If so I could give tu some suggestions if tu wanted.
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Yes actually I drew her all por my self. And I have a deviantART page where I post most of my drawings so maybe I can accept your suggestions :)
sMCCarthyTV posted hace más de un año
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It's a really good drawing, the hair and face are perfect, don't change anything about those, but tu just need to work on the body a little. anime bodies are hard, I can't draw tthem either. If tu have a picture of an anime character to copy tu could use that to practice. Hope I helped.:) Also I'm really impressed with your drawing skills. Do tu have any tips on how tu did the hair?
misscrazel posted hace más de un año
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well, one tip that I can give on hair is that they MUST have highlights and shading. The colores all depend on what the actually hir color whether it's blue, green, red, blonde, whatever it is, it need to have the basic color of what the hair is suppose to be and it needs to have a darker tone for the shading. The shading always takes place on the bottom strands of the hair like Shinsen Bara's does and they must not go past the highlighted area. speaking of the highlighted area, it needs to be pure white and see who SB's highlights are zig zag? Most hair has that but they can be smooth too. Shinsen Bara's hair border is on the left of her head and it's also why from right to left, the highlight gets smaller and as it passes the Border line, it gets bigger. It depends on where the light is coming from. If it's on the left then the highlight will be bigger like how the picture displays it to be but is on the right, well... then the highligh will be bigger on the right. This never happens in manga but in Anime, the eyebrows and parte superior, arriba lashes actually go over the hair than underneath. But in Manga, the eyes and eye brows go under the hair. Hope this was helpful for you.
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KissKissHannah said:
She looks nice, but I probably can't understand her! XD
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smartone123 said:
ya it would be kinda hard to make her full japanese so i would give her something that for would make it easier for tu to protray her to the adiance.Also give más of her back story and extend on her personalilty,ticks and streagths,it would make your character más relat.able.Now on the design,the hair is pretty but the designs abit plain maybe make one that would reflect on her personality abit more.
Overall,not bad but maybe just add abit más so she más relatiable and her diseño reflects más of her character
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pookafusmcgee said:
It's cute and all, but the body is kind of dis portioned. Others wise I like it!! The story is original!!! :3 good job.
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pokemonfan909 said:
I think she looks cute, but to be honest and no offence, her body and head don't seem to be in proportion.
But I like the idea, it is pretty clean for an anime but it is cool.
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dustydeer said:
she's nice i like her, is she your first OC?

though if tu was to expand on her, i think tu should give a reason on why she reveals her zorro, fox features a bit más o what sets her off to do that, also how she became half zorro, fox in the first place (unless this is a magical kingdom where foxes and humans can have children heh)
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animegurl235 said:
it's ok i guess. a bit generic, and the body proportions need some work.... but i like it !
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