it's not really creepy, it took me awhile to realize those lines on her face are supposed to be blood... the anatomy of the drawing is quite off, she basically has no forehead. her hair and the stuff in her hair has no depth, the en general, general drawing has no sense of depth. the arms kind of, don't exist. The bust is too, well busty.
The hair is quite flat, try adding some highlights and low lights, also try working on proportions.
overall: it's flat, needs depth and highlights, and the proportions are off. and the anatomy needs some work.
try to add a little más shadow under the chin and hair. Try to make the blood a little thin and runny. not too glotched up. Try to darken and sharpen the lines so that everything isn't too blurred and mixed up together. Good job, though :)