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Heyy tell me what tu think of this poem i wrote. I wrote this poem cause i was recently backstabed por someone i called my bestfriend. (Btw let me know if i need to change anything to make it better o any suggestions please & thank you)

Bestfriends are suppose to help tu up when you're down, Not help tu make your way down. Bestfriend should care & amor tu for who tu are, Not what tu look o act like. Bestfriends should know the real you, not the fake you, Bestfriends should never make tu change, They should like tu for being yourself. What's the true meaning of a bestfriend?
 Isabella_17 posted hace más de un año
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afsha1997 said:
oh good but it's not rhyme sorry. tu should write like these
best friends supposed to help tu when tu are sad
when everything wrong everything is bad
my best friend leave me alone when i need her
now there's nothing just dark blue colour
why did tu betrayed me i'm feeling all alone
feels like my corazón falls to pieces now i'm gone.
i knw my also weird :P
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That good:] bettr than mine
Isabella_17 posted hace más de un año
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